2025人教版高中英语必修第三册
UNIT 1 FESTIVALS AND CELEBRATIONS
Part 4 Writing
关于节日的写作
写作题目
假设你是李华,你的外国朋友John来信说想利用自己的假期来中国体验一下中国传统节日。在端午节、中秋节和春节中,你会建议他选择哪个呢 请你给他回信并说明推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.气氛;氛围
2. adv.绝对地;完全地;极其
3. adj.有重大意义的;显著的
4. n.场合;时刻
5. n.高兴
6. 农历年
7. 坦白说;坦率地说
答案 1.atmosphere 2.absolutely 3.significant
4.occasion 5.joy 6.the lunar year 7.to be frank
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一部分:向对方介绍多个中国传统节日并推荐其中的一个节日
(1)There are many (传统节日)in China, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival and the Spring Festival.
(2) (坦率地说), the atmosphere of the Mid-Autumn Festival is (极其有意义).
第二部分:对该节日进行详细介绍
(3)The Mid-Autumn Festival (发生在) the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar year.
(4)The Mid-Autumn Festival (是一个特殊的时刻).
(5)People (庆祝丰收) on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar year and admire the beautiful moon (高兴地).
(6)The moon that day (据说)the fullest and brightest.
答案 (1)traditional festivals (2)To be frank;absolutely significant (3)falls on
(4)is a special occasion (5)celebrate the harvest;with joy (6)is said to be
2.句式升级
(7)用定语从句合并句(3)和句(4)
(8)用主语从句升级句(6)
答案 (7)The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar year, which is a special occasion.
(8)It is said that the moon that day is the fullest and brightest.
连句成篇
Dear John,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.
There are many traditional festivals in China, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival and the Spring Festival. To be frank, the atmosphere of the Mid-Autumn Festival is absolutely significant. I really hope you can come and spend the festival with me.
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar year, which is a special occasion. People celebrate the harvest on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar year and admire the beautiful moon with joy. It is said that the moon that day is the fullest and brightest. It's also a day to eat special food like mooncakes.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于传统节日的增分佳句
the Spring Festival
The Spring Festival, the most important festival for Chinese people, is a time for all family members to get together.
the Lantern Festival
Falling on the 15th day of the first lunar month, the Lantern Festival is the first significant festival after the Spring Festival.
the Dragon Boat Festival
The Dragon Boat Festival, one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on May 5th in the Chinese lunar calendar.
the Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, when the moon is believed to be the fullest and brightest.
实战演练
(2024江苏南京市中华中学调研)
传统节日是民族自豪感的源泉。你校学生会决定在腊八节这天举行相关活动,让学生们更好地了解腊八节。假定你是学生会主席,将要向全体学生发出倡议。请你写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1.活动的时间、地点;
2.活动的内容;
3.活动的意义。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
Dear students,
The Student Union
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Ladies and gentlemen, a star is born!” Rob and Anne turned to look at Barney in surprise. “Our teacher gave me the main part in our school play!” Barney explained. “Oh, that's great,” I said. “Who will you be playing ” “The Easter Bunny of course!” he answered. “Could you make me a costume, Mum ” “Of course.”
I made great progress on the costume on his first rehearsal(排练)day. “Mum, you're spending so much time on the costume,” Barney said. “Are you sure you don't mind ” “No, not at all!” I said. Barney looked a little bit uncomfortable. “Is everything OK ” I asked. “Well, I'm just not sure whether you will be able to come,” he said. I told him, “Of course we're coming to watch.”
Over the next few days I kept working on the costume. “Barney will be very happy, Mum,” said Anne one afternoon. Barney was watching from the doorway and his face turned red. I did think at the time that he was acting very strangely, but perhaps he had a little bit of stage fright.
Then the big day came. Rob, Anne and I were really looking forward to Barney's performance. After a couple of minutes he walked onto the stage. “I am the Easter Bunny!” he said loudly. He disappeared and the rest of the children sang a song. The play began. Rob, Anne and I waited for Barney to appear again. But soon it was all over. “He only had one line(台词)!” said Anne.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
After the performance,we went straight to find Barney.
Instead of being annoyed with the poor boy after knowing the truth,I patted him gently.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.in surprise惊讶地
2.make great progress取得巨大的进展
3.uncomfortable adj.不自在的
4.work on从事;致力于
5.look forward to期盼
6.performance n.表演
7.a couple of几个/件/只/……
8.be annoyed with sb.生某人的气
9.pat v.轻拍
障碍词汇
stage fright怯场
长难句
原句 I did think at the time that he was acting very strangely, but perhaps he had a little bit of stage fright.
分析 本句为并列复合句,but连接两个并列分句。在前一分句中,that引导宾语从句,at the time为时间状语。
译文 那时我确实觉得他的行为很奇怪,但是可能他有一点怯场。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:演出结束后,“我们”直接去找Barney→找到Barney并表扬他→Barney解释情况并表现出懊悔。
第二段:知道真相后,“我”没有对这个可怜的男孩生气,而是轻轻地拍了拍他→“我”给了他安慰和鼓励→Barney内心感到宽慰并下定决心为下次校园剧努力训练。
遣词造句
1.用适当的单词或短语填空
(1) v.使惊奇;使惊讶
(2) adj.令人难忘的
(3) v.欣赏
(4) 为……感到骄傲
(5) oneself控制自己
(6)put time ...把时间投入……
(7) scolding严厉的责骂
(8) 下定决心
答案 (1)amaze/surprise (2)unforgettable
(3)appreciate (4)be proud of
(5)control/contain (6)into (7)severe
(8)make up one's mind
2.完成句子
(9)With no great effort, we spotted the star himself (静静地坐在一个角落里).
(10)Barney was (如此惊讶以至于) he just (无法控制自己) anymore.
(11)With his head nearly buried into his chest and (眼里充满了泪水), Barney was seemingly waiting for my severe scolding.
(12) (听到我的话), Barney (感到很宽慰) and (下定决心要更加努力地训练) for the next school play day.
(13)On the next school play day, we would be (非常高兴地欣赏) a wonderful performance given by a real star.
答案 (9)sitting quietly in a corner (10)so surprised that;couldn't control himself
(11)eyes filled with tears (12)Hearing my words;felt relieved;made up his mind to train harder (13)so delighted to appreciate
3.句式升级
(14)把句(10)改写为倒装句
(15)把句(12)和句(13)合并成含有定语从句的复合句
答案 (14)So surprised was Barney that he just couldn't control himself anymore.
(15)Hearing my words, Barney felt relieved and made up his mind to train harder for the next school play day when we would be so delighted to appreciate a wonderful performance given by a real star.
连句成篇
After the performance,we went straight to find Barney. With no great effort, we spotted the star himself sitting quietly in a corner. “Barney, you amazed us all! What a superb performance! We are proud of you!” So surprised was Barney that he just couldn't control himself anymore. “Sorry, Mum. You put so much time into my costume at home but I only had one line on stage.” With his head nearly buried into his chest and eyes filled with tears, Barney was seemingly waiting for my severe scolding.
Instead of being annoyed with the poor boy after knowing the truth,I patted him gently. “That doesn't matter, my fantastic star! What an unforgettable experience for you, and for me!” Hearing my words, Barney felt relieved and made up his mind to train harder for the next school play day when we would be so delighted to appreciate a wonderful performance given by a real star.
写作积累
外貌描写常用词块
1.脸部:round face圆脸;oval face鹅蛋脸;square face方脸;baby-faced娃娃脸的;thin/lean face瘦削的脸;haggard face憔悴的面容;wrinkled/lined face布满皱纹的脸;freckled face长有雀斑的脸;pink cheeks粉红的脸颊;rosy cheeks红润的脸颊;pale cheeks苍白的脸颊;high cheekbones高颧骨;pointed chin尖下巴;double chin双下巴
2.皮肤:yellow skin黄皮肤;fair-skinned皮肤白皙的;dark skin皮肤黝黑
3.身材:buff/muscular figure肌肉发达的身材;strapping figure魁梧的身材;plump figure丰满的身材;stocky figure矮壮的身材;neat figure娇小玲珑的身材;lean figure 瘦削的身材;slim figure苗条的身材;slender figure苗条的身材;slight figure瘦小的身材;medium height中等个子
4.发型:wavy hair卷发;crew cut平头
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 1 FESTIVALS AND CELEBRATIONS
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear students,
The Laba Festival, falling on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month, is drawing near. To make students better understand the Laba Festival, a Laba Festival-themed activity will be held in the school lecture hall on the 7th day of the twelfth lunar month.
During the activity, you will learn about the origin and development of the festival through videos and exhibitions. After that, you can also taste Laba porridge and learn how to cook it.
Traditional festivals are a source of national pride. This kind of activity can greatly stimulate students interest in traditional Chinese culture.
Looking forward to your participation.
The Student Union
1.重点词汇
①fall on适逢;正当
②draw near即将来临
③source n.来源
④stimulate v.刺激;激发
⑤look forward to期待
2.亮点句型
①The Laba Festival, falling on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month, is drawing near.(现在分词短语作后置定语)农历十二月初八的腊八节即将来临。
②After that, you can also taste Laba porridge and learn how to cook it.(“疑问词+不定式”作宾语)在那之后,你还可以品尝腊八粥并学习如何煮腊八粥。
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