Unit 4 Computers
单元话题写作满分范文20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．在英语论坛上，大家都在讨论电脑对我们生活的影响，请根据以下的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，表达一下你的想法。提示：
1.电脑是最重要的发明之一，其应用也越来越广泛。
2.电脑有利也有弊。
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2．科学技术是第一生产力。处于一个飞速发展的时代，我们的生活无时无刻不受到科技的影响。哪个科技的产物对你的生活影响最大？请以“_____ has/have influenced my life”为题，并按照以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1.是什么影响了你的生活；
2.它是如何影响你的生活的；
3.你的感悟。
要求：
1.请补全标题，如Mobiles, Cars；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右。
has/have influenced my life
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3．最近，某网站针对人们最常用的手机应用程序(app)做了调查，下图是相关的统计结果。请根据结果显示，简要说明各类app的使用情况，谈谈你的看法并介绍自己最常用的app。
要求：
1. 逻辑清晰，语言连贯，语法正确；
2. 100词左右。
What apps do you often use
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4．随着科技的发展，互联网给我们带来了很多便利和好处，但沉溺网络也带来很多不良影响。
某英文网站正在开展以“我和互联网”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你每天的上网时长，你上网都做些什么以及你对互联网的看法。
提示词语： spend, search for, convenient, be bad for, properly
提示问题：● How long do you surf the Internet every day
● What do you often do on the Internet
● What do you think of the Internet
The Internet and Me
With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
电脑大家都熟悉吧？那么请以“The most helpful invention—computer”为题写一篇文章，说说电脑的优点及其在人们日常生活和工作中的应用。
提示词语：make no mistakes，important，help，life，work，store，information，pass on，chat，shopping
The most helpful invention—computer
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6．我们的生活受很多因素的影响。它可能是某种新科技比如手机、汽车、网络等；也可能是某个人；也可能是…请以“ has/have influenced my life”为题，并按照以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1.是什么影响了你的生活；
2.它是如何影响你的生活的；
3.你的感悟。
要求：
1.将题目补充完整；
2.主题突出，层次清晰，100—120词。
3.书面整洁，书写工整。
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7．随着电脑技术的飞速发展，电脑已经进入各行各业、千家万户，成为现代社会不可缺少的重要角色。请以“The Great Invention — Computer”为题，写一篇英语短文， 说明电脑在工作、生活中的应用。
内容要点：
1. 医生需要电脑为病人检查 (look over) 身体；
2. 老师需要电脑教学生；
3. 学生需要电脑学习……
注意：100词以上，可适当发挥。文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。
The Great Invention — Computer
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8．科技的发展不仅使我们的国家更加强大，也给我们带来了许多便利。其中，电脑技术在科技发展中起了非常重要的作用，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，谈谈电脑的用途，并谈谈你自己对此的看法。90 词左右。（文章开头已给出， 不计入总词数）
With the development of science and technology, computers are widely used in many different fields.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．科技改变生活，移动支付（Mobile Payment）无处不在，就连路边小摊都扫码支付了。本周的班会活动将围绕“移动支付”这一话题发言。请你结合自身情况，并根据下面的写作要点，用英语写一篇短文，为本次发言做准备。
写作要点：
1. Which mobile payment app do your parents use, Alipay（支付宝）or WeChat Pay（支付）
2. What do you think of the mobile payment
要求：
1. 紧扣话题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连惯；
2. 词数不少于80，发言稿的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：scan the QR code扫描二维码； password密码
Hello, everyone. Let me share something with you about the mobile payment.
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10．假设你家有一台电脑，由你和父亲共同使用。你父亲是位公司经理，你是个中学生。请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你们平时用电脑做什么，并谈谈你对玩电脑游戏的看法。
提示：
1. 你父亲经常用电脑跟顾客交谈、上网查看火车信息，等等。
2. 你在周末用电脑听音乐、看电影，但很少玩电脑游戏。
3. 你对玩电脑游戏的看法。
注意事项：
1. 短文词数：80 左右。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
We have a computer in our home, and my father and I share it.
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11．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack对中国目前正在流行的短视频(short video)很感兴趣，写信向你询问此事，请你给他回信，向他介绍短视频的特点，并谈谈你对短视频流行的看法。
注意:1.文本长度约110词，短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your last letter. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
12．现在手机的普及程度早已超出了人们的想象，手机在人们的生活中变得越来越重要，但是随之而来的问题也不少，手机给中学生带来了严重的困扰，请就“中学生如何正确使用手机”谈谈你对这个问题的认识：
利：
1.可以和家长、同学随时保持联系；
2.可以随时查阅资料，业余时间可以利用手机放松；
弊：
1.有的同学利用手机上网、交友、打游戏等，而逐渐失去了对学习的兴趣；
2.还有的同学在学习中严重依赖手机，利用手机来完成作业，不能独立思考；
3.长时间使用手机对视力的伤害非常大；
……
注意：
1.词数80—100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
提示词汇：依靠 rely on
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope everyone can use mobile phones in a right way.
13．随着科技日益发展，信息化时代给人们带来了巨大的生活便利。近日，教育部鼓励中小学Wi-Fi无线网络覆盖校园。有的学生认为这是时代的进步，但有的学生认为这会影响他们的学习。为此，教育部对各地重点学校的学生进行了调查。请根据以下学生的看法和你自己的观点，写一篇作文。
参考要点：
1. 支持者：获取信息更方便，独立解决问题；
2. 反对者：浪费太多的时间，受到网络上不良的影响；
3. 你自己的观点。
要求：
1. 80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 包含以上要点,可以适当扩充；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
With the development if Internet, almost every developed area in China is covered with Wi-Fi. Should our schools be covered with Wi-Fi Different students have different ideas._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14．随着科技的进步，尤其是网络的普及，人们的学习、工作、生活方式等产生着巨大的改变，假如你是李华，是一名初中生。请结合所提供的信息，以“How to use the Internet”为题写一篇80词左右的文章。短文内容必须包括以下几点：
1. 使用网络对学习的好处；
2. 对学习可能产生的负面影响；
3. 提出自己的建议并说明理由。
写作要求：1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：80词左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
How to use the Internet
Recently, the use of the Internet is becoming more and more popular with students. However, every coin has two sides, which is the same as using the Internet. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．进入九年级以来，不少同学熬夜使用手机或电脑玩游戏。导致睡眠不足，不能认真听课，成绩下降。鉴于此现象，你们班召开了一次班会来讨论这个问题。请你以“How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly”为题写一篇发言稿。
提示：1. 手机和电脑可以用来查阅资料，记单词等；
2. 长期使用手机和电脑对视力带来的影响；
3. 熬夜对青少年所带来的危害；
4. ……
要求：包含所给要点；语言流畅，意思连贯，适当拓展；100词左右。
How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly
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16．互联网无处不在。网络文明，人人有责。
某英文网站正在开展以 “我与互联网”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在互联网上经常做什么，这样做的原因及你有什么收获。
提示词语：read, easy, improve, colorful
提示问题：● What do you usually do on Internet
● Why do you do so
● What benefits have you got
The Internet plays an important role in our daily life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．假如你是李华，你在网上看到一家公司正在为设计一款提高英语写作能力的APP征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。
Ideas NeededWe are now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app will help them organize ideas, use correct words and so on.
Here’s what to do: Share your ideas.
Please let us know:What’s the name of the app What problems can the app solve Any other suggestions
Contact（联系）informationEmail us at appdesign@.
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 包含提示所有内容，可适当发挥，内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 邮件的格式及开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for us to improve our English writing skills. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
18．发明改变世界。请参照下列表格中的提示，以“My Favorite Invention—the Internet”为题写一篇英语短文，字数80词左右。
发明时间 1969年
用途 1.上网查信息；2.发邮件；3.听音乐、玩游戏、购物等； 4.广泛应用于银行、学校、医院等工作场所；5.……
评价 1.方便了人们的生活；2.提供了更多的工作机会； 3.2020 年新冠疫情期间……；4.……
提示词：
新型冠状疫情期间 during the COVID 19 period
My Favorite Invention—the Internet
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19．随着手机使用的日益广泛，“作业帮”等手机运用软件的出现，现在手机又有了新的用途——随时查找作业答案。
部分学生认为：有时作业太多、太难，不得不向手机求助。
观点：1. 抄写答案不能提高学生的学习能力，只能阻止学生思考；
2. 恰当运用网络，不依赖网络。
注意：1.文中应包括提示观点，可以适当发挥，增加自己的看法，使内容更连贯，更合理；
2.词数约80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(参考词汇：the students’ abilities, make proper use of)
Some students now have a new use for the Internet—
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20．你校英文报就 “电脑的影响力” 这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“The influence of computers on our life”为题投稿。
注意：
1．请先填写图示中空格（一空一词）；
2．须全面反映图文信息；
3．词数80左右。
参考词语：self-control n. 自控力
The influence of computers on our life
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参考答案：
1．例文
The computer is one of the most important inventions. It has greatly changed people’s lives. We use computers in schools, families, and offices. With the help of the computer, our lives become more convenient, comfortable and colorful. But the computer also has disadvantages and it has caused some social problems. Many children like playing computer games so much that they can’t get away from them. Playing computer games has seriously affected children’s learning and health. Thieves can steal money on the internet easily. I think we should use the computer wisely and make it serve us better.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料写作，介绍电脑的利与弊。在写作时应认真阅读提示，根据提示要点叙述，并适当发挥。本文可从三个方面叙述，首先介绍电脑的用途；其次介绍电脑的利与弊；最后告诉大家，要正确使用电脑并结尾。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主，可适当使用现在完成时等其他时态；注意表达顺序，适当使用连词和从句等，叙述要完整清楚，保证条理清晰连贯，语言规范。注意检查，确保语法和标点使用正确，无单词拼写错误。
2．例文
The Internet has influenced my life
Nowadays, the Internet is widely used all over the world.
First of all, it has given me a large amount of information about things and people of this world. I can know about what is happening without leaving home. What’s more, the Internet makes my life much easier. I can buy things online.
In a word, great changes have taken place in my life. I’ll study hard to make the Internet serve us better.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。内容是根据所给的要点，以“_____ has/have influenced my life”为题，介绍一下对你的生活影响最大的科技产物。
2.写作指导：首先要补全标题；本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先要点明是什么科技影响了你的生活；其次介绍该科技是如何影响你的生活的；最后介绍你的感悟。
3．例文
Recently, a survey was done about the top 4 kinds of apps that people use the most often. Here are the results. People who are teachers and students use education apps a lot. Most of young girls like using photo and video apps. Many office ladies are fond of shopping apps like Amazon. A large number of young people like communication apps best, such as Ding talk. It’s clear that the mobile phone is used as not only a communication tool, but also a wonderful way to make people’s life more convenient and interesting.
As for me, I spend one hour a day learning English on an education app. With its help, I have made great progress in English.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据调查结果，简要说明各类app的使用情况，最后不要忘记“谈谈自己的看法及介绍自己常用的app”，注意逻辑清晰，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据调查结果，介绍各类app的使用情况；
第二步，谈谈自己的看法；
第三步，介绍自己常用的app。
[亮点词汇]
①be fond of喜欢
②a large number of很多的
③make great progress取得很大进步
[高分句型]
①It’s clear that the mobile phone is used as not only a communication tool, but also a wonderful way to make people’s life more convenient and interesting.（not only...but also连接两个并列成分）
②With its help, I have made great progress in English.（with独立结构作原因状语）
4．One possible version:
With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life. I usually spend an hour surfing the Internet every day. I often search for some information on the Internet. I also listen to music and chat with my friends on WeChat. Sometimes I buy books online. In my opinion, the Internet is very convenient. We can do a lot of things online and we could have online classes during pandemic. But don’t spend too much time online. Our eyes get tired easily. And it’s bad for our health. So we should use the Internet properly. We can make use of Internet to do necessary things. We mustn’t depend too much on it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的几个问题，介绍自己每天上网的情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出互联网（已给出）；
第二步，介绍自己每天上网的时间，时长，以及都做了什么；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己对互联网的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①surf the Internet 上网冲浪
②search for查找
③listen to music听音乐
④chat with与……聊天
⑤make use of利用
[高分句型]
But don’t spend too much time online. (祈使句的否定句)
5．例文
The most helpful invention—computer
Computers can almost do everything and make no mistakes. They’re becoming more and more important because they have helped people a lot in life and work. For example, they are used to write, draw and play games; they are also used to help teach and study. They can store some information that we need; they can also help pass on messages on the Internet. We can chat online; we can also do some shopping on the Internet. I think the computer is really the most useful and helpful invention.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目已给出写作要求，必须写出所要求的内容，可以使用提示词语，也可以自己适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，说明电脑的重要性和优点；
第二步，举例论述电脑优点和具体在生活工作中应用的范围和场景；
第三步，再次表明观点：电脑是实用并且重要的发明。
[亮点词汇]
①make no mistakes不犯错
②pass on传递
③more and more越来越
[高分句型]
They can store some information that we need.（定语从句）
6．例文
The Internet has influenced my life
Nowadays, the Internet is widely used all over the world, and it has a great influence on my life.
First of all, it has given me a large amount of information about things and people of this world. I can know about what is happening without leaving home. What’s more, I can stay in touch with my family and friends and communicate with them at any time and in any place. In addition, the Internet makes my life much easier. I can buy things online, which can save me a lot of time.
In a word, great changes have taken place in my life. I’ll study hard to make the Internet serve us better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出互联网影响“我”的生活的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。列举在哪些方面影响生活；
第三步，书写感悟，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①widely广泛地
②a large amount of大量的
③stay in touch with sb.与某人保持联系
[高分句型]
①I can know about what is happening without leaving home.（what引导的宾语从句）
②I can buy things online, which can save me a lot of time.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
7．例文
The Great Invention — Computer
There are many inventions in the world. I think computer is the most useful invention today. It is widely used in hospitals, schools and so on. It can help people do lots of work.
First, the computer is necessary when the doctors look over patients’ illness. Second, our teachers need it to teach students and also they can correct our homework on computers. What’s more, we students can study our subjects with computers. If we have problems when studying, we can search information on the Internet.
Computer is our good friend. It will be used by everyone in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己对电脑的看法；
第二步，具体阐述电脑在工作、生活中的应用；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①I think computer is the most useful invention today.（省略that的宾语从句）
②First, the computer is necessary when the doctors look over patients’ illness.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③If we have problems when studying, we can search information on the internet.（if引导的条件状语从句）
8．例文
With the development of science and technology, computers are widely used in many different fields. In medical care, doctors can find diseases easily with the help of computers. In factories, robots are controlled by computers to do work that is hard or dangerous for humans. In the space industry, computers have been used to control the speed and direction of spaceships. In business, computers are used to place and cancel puters also play an important role in our daily lives. For instance, we can do online shopping and take online classes at puters help us at work and at home, so we should work hard and master computer skills to make them serve us better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，结合医疗、工厂、航空业、商业、生活谈谈电脑的用途；
第二步，书写结语，谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①For instance例如
②with the help of在……的帮助下
③play a role in发挥作用
[高分句型]
①In the space industry, computers have been used to control the speed and direction of spaceships.（被动语态）
9．One possible version:
Hello, everyone. Let me share something with you about the mobile payment.
As we know, the mobile payment is now becoming more and more popular among the young and the old in China. As for my parents, they hardly ever use paper money to pay for things. Instead, they always pay with apps on their mobile phones. They use both Alipay and WeChat pay because these two apps are easy to use.
I like the mobile payment for two reasons. First, it is easy to use. You just need to enter Alipay and WeChat pay, scan the QR code, enter your password and that’s it. Second, it makes our lives more convenient. We don’t have to carry a lot of paper money when we want to buy something. What’s more, we can pay for things anytime and anywhere.
That’s all, thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“移动支付（Mobile Payment）无处不在”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，介绍父母使用的支付app；
第三步，介绍自己对移动支付的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①As for至于
②Instead相反
[高分句型]
①Second, it makes our lives more convenient（make sth+adj.结构）
②We don’t have to carry a lot of paper money when we want to buy something.（when引导时间状语从句）
10．例文
We have a computer in our home, and my father and I share it. My father is a manager of a company, so he often talks to his customers on the computer. He also goes on the Internet to check the times of trains, make travel plans, and buy tickets.
I often listen to music or watch movies on it at weekends. But I seldom play computer games on the Internet. In my opinion, playing computer games is very funny, but it wastes our time and it is also bad for our health and eyes.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点提示，介绍你和爸爸平时用电脑做什么，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，谈谈你对玩电脑游戏的看法并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go on the Internet上网
②make travel plans制订旅游计划
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, playing computer games is very funny, but it wastes our time and it is also bad for our health and eyes.（动名词短语作主语）
11．例文：
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your last letter. I’m glad to talk about short videos. As its name suggests, most short videos are less than 5 minutes. Some shorter ones only last for a few seconds. They are easy and fun to make. They’re like a stage where everyone can have a voice.
On one hand, short videos are a good way to spread news or knowledge. Though short videos, people can share interesting things, gain knowledge and support, or just relax. On the other hand, every coin has two sides. Watching short videos may be a waste of time because it takes up too much people’s time. What’s more, we might get incorrect information from these videos.
I think we can consider short videos as a way to relax in our free time. At the same time, we should develop the ability to tell truth from lies.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应承接短文，然后先介绍什么是短视频以及短视频的利弊，最后介绍你对短视频的看法，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍短视频及你对短视频的看法时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
12．[例文]
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some students think that it is easy to use them to keep in touch with parents and classmates. Also they can be used to look up information, listen to music or take photos in their free time.
But some students spend so much time chatting with their friends, playing games and so on that they lose their interest in their studies. And it’s very bad for their eyes. Some students rely on mobile phones very much. They can’t finish their homework without mobile phones.
In my opinion, we should control ourselves and say no to playing games. We should use mobile phones for our studies properly but not spend much time on them. We’d better use them with the help of our parents.
I hope everyone can use mobile phones in a right way.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为议论文作文，要求就“中学生如何正确使用手机”写一篇议论文，陈述中学生使用手机的利弊，并谈谈自己的看法。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用一、三人称，时态应用现在时。写作时题目所给要点提示必须全部包含，并谈谈自己对此的看法，文章开头结尾已给出，写作时要将其誊抄下来。文章不要出现单词拼写及语法时态错误。
13．例文：
With the development if Internet, almost every developed area in China is covered with Wi-Fi. Should our schools be covered with Wi-Fi Different students have different ideas.
In fact, most of the students support this idea. They think it will be more convenient to get some information. With its help, they can almost solve the problems they meet at any time in school instead of asking others for help.
However, some students who disagree also have their points. First of all, they think it is a waste of time. Besides, maybe something on the Internet will have a bad influence on some students who can’t control themselves well.
As for me, I think our school shouldn’t be covered with Wi-Fi. If it is really around us all the time, it will cause some students lose interest in study and spend tons of time in surfing the Internet. As a result, they will fail in exams or it will even destroy their whole life.
All in all, Internet helps people make progress in many fields in our daily life, but if students can’t control themselves well, it may turn their life into a terrible situation.
【详解】1.题干解读：本作文是一篇议论文。在写作时应承接短文开头。根据题目提示，以信息化带给学生的影响为讨论主题写一篇英文短文。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称和第三人称为主，在介绍他人的观点时需用第三人称；在介绍自我观点时需用第一人称；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时。注意按照参考要点的三个方面进行写作，在描述支持者和反对者的观点后，需阐述自己的观点，最后总结全文点明主题，可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。
14．例文
How to use the Internet
Recently, the use of the Internet is becoming more and more popular with students. However, every coin has two sides, which is the same as using the Internet.
The Internet can open up our eyes and make us know more about what we learn. It is a useful learning tool. If we don’t know anything, we can look it up on the Internet.
However, the Internet may be dangerous. Some students use it to play games and chat. Playing games and chatting can waste time and money, it isn’t good for our studies.
I think going online is helpful. We can plan to go online for an hour everyday. We must choose good webpages, because there are too many bad things on the Internet. So we should use it in the right way!
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。以“How to use the Internet”为题写一篇80词左右的文章来阐述一下如何使用网络。
写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时，贯穿全文。第一段已给出，引出论点；第二段阐述网络的优点；第三段介绍缺点；最后一段用第一人称描述自己对网络的态度以及对网络利弊关系的看法。表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。无语法和拼写错误。
15．例文：
How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to stand here to share my opinion. Nowadays, more and more students like to use smartphones and computers. They like chatting with their friends, sending emails to each other or playing games on them.
The Internet helps us a lot. We can learn new words and find out information online. But it takes us too much time to chat online. What’s worse, some of us stay up late to surf on the Internet. It’s bad for our studies and eyes.
In my opinion, spending too much time online is a waste of time and it’s bad for our teenagers. So we must use the computer and smartphone properly.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿。以“How to Use Smartphones and Computers Properly”为题进行写作，叙述手机和电脑的利和弊。具体要包含所给的提示，也可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为四段式：第一段介绍手机和电脑用处；第二段和第三段介绍手机和电脑带来的影响和危害；最后一段表示感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
16．参考范文
The Internet plays an important role in our daily life. I usually read books on line. Because it is easier and cheaper than reading offline. In order to improve my learning ability, I also have some different classes on the Internet. It’s very convenient.
All in all, the Internet not only makes me learn more effectively but also makes my life more convenient and colorful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己通过互联网做的活动，内容要包含提示问题中所给的要点。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分别介绍在互联网上经常做什么，这样做的原因以及自己的收获。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
17．例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for us to improve our English writing skills. I’d like to share my idea here. Could its name be “Make Writing Easy”
Writing in English is difficult for most of us. We don’t know how to organise ideas, use proper words and so on. I hope it can solve these problems.
First, there should be some interesting reading materials. The more we read, the better we will write. Second, the app should have online courses so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher and he can correct our mistakes and offer suggestions.
I hope my advice will help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件作文，以“网上征集的关于提高英语写作能力的APP的信息”为话题参照表格中要点进行分析。写作时需包括表格中所有内容，并适当拓展。
2.写作指导：本文以第一、三人称为主，时态为一般现在时及一般将来时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题，给出app可能的名字；第二段介绍app可以解决的问题；第三段介绍如何设计app；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。
18．参考例文
My Favorite Invention—the Internet
Of all the inventions, my favorite is the Internet.
The Internet was invented in 1969s. It can be used to do many things. People can go online and search for information they need. They can send emails to each other instead of writing letters. People can also use the Internet to listen to music, play games, shop or do many other things. Nowadays, the Internet is widely used in banks, schools, companies, hospitals, and many other places. People can even see a doctor online at home, thanks to the Internet.
The Internet is so useful that it is becoming one of the most important parts of our life. It makes our lives more and more convenient. It also provides us with more job opportunities. Especially during the COVID-19 pandemic period, it plays an important role in preventing and controlling the pandemic. It’s hard to believe what our lives will be without the Internet. As a result, I believe in the future our lives will be much more meaningful with the help of the Internet.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：文章标题及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“用途”和“评价”中需要自己添加的要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，直接引出话题；
第二步，根据要点提示，依次举例说明互联网的各种用途，最后还得自行再补充说明一种用途；
第三步，根据要点提示，对互联网的出现作出评价，最后自行补充自己对互联网的看法，并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
be used to do被用于做……
thanks to多亏……
more and more convenient越来越方便
play an important role in在……中起重要作用
provide sb with sth给某人提供某物
with the help of在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
The Internet is so useful that it is becoming one of the most important parts of our life.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
It’s hard to believe what our lives will be without the Internet.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语；what引导的宾语从句）
As a result, I believe in the future our lives will be much more meaningful with the help of the Internet.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
19．例文：
Some students now have a new use for the Internet—use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people have different ideas about it. Some students say (think) that they have so much homework every day that they don’t have enough time. And some of the problems are too hard for them to work out. So they have to use mobile phones to find out the answers.
However, I think copying the answers can’t improve the students’ abilities, and may make them stop thinking. In my opinion, we can make proper use of the Internet and can’t depend on it. Studying online can be a way to help study, but the best way is studying (to study) by ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，要求针对学生使用手机软件抄答案一事提出自己的观点和看法；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：题目中的要点已经给出，写作时注意围绕所给要点进行写作，并可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接文章开头，指出学生利用手机抄答案这一现象；
第二步：按照题目提示，指出一部分学生的观点；
第三步：按照题目提示提出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① improve 提高改善
② work out 解决出
③ in my opinion 以我看
④ depend on 取决于
[高分句型]
① But different people have different ideas about it.（用来提出不同的观点）
② However, I think copying the answers can’t improve the students’ abilities, and may make them stop thinking.（think后使用宾语从句，并且从句用动名词作主语）
20．例文：
The influence of computers on our life
With the help of the Internet, we have easy access to almost everything we want to know. It brings us much convenience.
For example, we can take online classes and search for information that we couldn’t get before. But it also causes some bad influence. Many of us lack self-control and we may play computer games too much on the website. Meanwhile, most people don’t think highly of safety so that they may give out their private information.
So, I think we should use the computer properly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇图示作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍计算机带来的便利；
第二步，介绍计算机带来的不良影响；
第三步，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①have access to有机会利用
②think highly of 高度重视，尊重
③give out泄露，发布
[高分句型]
① For example, we can take online classes and search for information that we couldn’t get before. (that引导限制性定语从句)
③Meanwhile, most people don’t think highly of safety so that they may give out their private information. (so that引导结果状语从句)

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