书面表达15篇(广州教科版专版)
一、书面表达题型的命题特点
书面表达以图画、图表或文字说明等形式呈现,旨在考查学生运用英语笔头表达的综合能力,考查学生基本的遣词造句和连句成篇的能力,以及观察力、想象力和发散性思维能力。
二、书面表达六步法:
1.审:确定文体:记叙文、说明文、或是应用文(书信、日记)
及基本要素:5W1H:When(时间)、Where(地点)、Who(人物)、What(什么事)、How(怎么样)、Why(为什么)。确定人称和时态。
2.抓:抓要点,确定主要内容。
3.扩:扩展成句。句子宜短不宜长,句型宜简不宜繁。
4.连:连句成文。注意句与句之间、段与段之间的过渡,适当添加过渡词或短语,使文章更加自然、流畅。
5.改:查漏改错。通读几遍,看行文是否通顺,要点是否齐全,词数是否符合要求,大小写、标点符号、单词拼写是否正确。
6.抄:认真抄写。注意书写规范、整洁。
Part I 写作展示
【范例】请你描述一下校园操场学生们的活动。
【写作准备】表达兴趣爱好的词汇短语:
skate 滑冰 ski 滑雪 run 跑步 jog 慢跑
play badminton 打羽毛球 play basketball 打篮球
play football 踢足球 play table tennis 打乒乓球
play volleyball 打排球 swim 游泳 skip 跳绳
play the piano 弹钢琴 play the guitar 弹吉他
play the violin 拉小提琴 do some reading/read books看书
【写作步骤】
1.开头引出人物活动场所,点明活动地点。
例: Look, the children are in the playground.
2.正文详细介绍题中各个人物正在做的事情。
例:Some of them are playing badminton.
3. 描述人物的状态或心情。
例:They play happily.
【参考范文】Many children are in the playground now. Some boys are playing basketball or football, some girls are reading books under the tree. I like skating. So I am skating with my best friend Judy. We play happily.
Part II 强化训练
(1)
昨天是母亲节。请结合图片内容并适当发挥写一篇45词左右的文章具体描述你为母亲做了什么?你的母亲感受如何?
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请结合图片分别描述春夏秋冬四个季节的特点及适合进行的活动,不少于45词。
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(3)
“六一”儿童节就要到了。你校将举行欢庆六一的活动。活动有唱歌、跳舞、魔术表演、模型制作、巧手烹饪等,请你写一篇45词左右的文章说说你打算参加哪个活动以及参加这个活动的原因。
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请观察图片,用不少于45词写一写在公园开展的活动和景象。
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请你描述一项你最喜欢的运动。不少于45词。
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请结合图片和提示说说中国的传统节日 “The Spring Festival”,不少于45词。
clean the house go to the flower fair
have big meals greet each other, get lucky money
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(7)
请你写一篇自我介绍。从年龄、外貌、爱好、习惯等方面进行描述,注意不要出现真实的姓名和学校信息。要求表达准确,语句通顺,不少于45个单词。
Introduce Myself
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(8)
你有养宠物吗?你最喜欢什么动物?它有什么特点?你为什么喜欢它?请你写一篇不少于45词的习作与我们分享一下。
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介绍一位你熟悉的名人或偶像,不少于45词。
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请以“My daily life”为题,写一篇不少于45词的习作介绍你的日常生活。
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请结合图片写一篇习作说说中国传统节日“The Mid-Autumn Festival”人们通常会有哪些活动,不少于45词。
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请结合图片写一篇习作说说中国传统节日“The Dragon Boat Festival”人们通常会有哪些活动,不少于45词。
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许多野生动物处于险境,濒临灭绝,请用不少于5句话说说为了保护动物我们应该做什么,不应该做什么?
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假设你的名字叫做Tommy, 请根据以下思维导图写一封电子邮件给你的朋友Mike告诉他你的“广州之旅”计划,邀请他一同游玩,不少于45词。
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写一则关于你周六活动的日记。注意日记的格式,词数不少于45词。
内容包括:1. 7点起床,洗脸,做早操;
2. 7:30吃早餐;
3. 上午写作业,看书;
4. 下午跟朋友一起打乒乓球;
5. 晚上看半小时电视,和父母聊天;9点睡觉。
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参考答案
(1)Yesterday was Mother’s Day.I wanted to make my mum happy.In the morning,I cleaned the house. After that, I went to the flower shop to buy some flowers. As soon as my mum came back, I sent the flowers to her and gave her a kiss. In the evening, I made a card for my mum and showed it to her. My mum was very happy.
(2)There are four seasons in a year. They are spring,summer,autumn and winter. It often rains in spring. We can plant trees and flowers . Summer is very hot. It’s a good idea to go swimming and enjoy the beautiful beach. Autumn is the best season for harvest. We can pick up fresh fruit.Winter is cold. We can go skiing and make a snowman. I love all the seasons, because they are nice.
(3)Children’s Day is coming. There are going to be many activities in my school on that day. The activities are singing、dancing、magic shows、model making、cooking and so on. I plan to take part in the model making because I like making things. I’m sure we will have a good time on Children’s Day.
(4)It’s a sunny day today. Many people are doing all kinds of activities at the park. Some are playing badminton, some are skating, some are riding bikes, some are walking dogs, I am reading under the tree. The air is fresh here. I can see flowers everywhere and hear birds singing. I feel relaxed.
(5)Many people like doing sports. My favourite sport is playing table tennis. I often play it with my classmates after school. Sometimes I play it with my parents.Playing table tennis makes me strong,healthy and happy. I hope to be a table tennis player when I grow up.
(6)The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. Before the Spring Festival, people always clean their houses and go to the flower fair. They buy flowers, new clothes and many other things. During the Spring Festival, people greet each other. Children get lucky money. They usually have big meals and talk about their days.
(7)My name is Ben. I am 10 years old. I am tall and thin. I like playing sports. Now I am studying in a primary school. I learn Chinese,maths,English and many other subjects at school. I am interested in all subjects. I work hard and I am one of the best students in my class.
(8)I have a pet. It’s a dog. It’s two years old. It’s beautiful and clever. It has two big eyes. Its colour is white. It looks like snow. Every time I come back home, it will wait for me at the door. I go out to walk the dog after dinner every day. When I am happy, it plays with me.When I am sad, it stays with me. The dog is my good friend.
(9)Dr Sun Yatsen was a very famous and important person in Chinese history. He was a great leader. He tried to free the Chinese people and make their lives better. He loved the Chinese people and the Chinese people love him. Today many streets, schools and parks have his name.
What a great man!
(10)I usually get up at 6:30 in the morning, then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I have breakfast at 7:00 and then go to school at half past seven. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. I go home at six o’clock and then have dinner with my parents. After dinner, I go out to walk my dog. At 10 o’clock, I go to bed.
(11)The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional Chinese festivals.It is often held in September. We usually get together and have a big meal. In the evening, we eat delicious mooncakes while watching the beautiful moon. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a very nice for Chinese people.
(12)The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month in the Chinese calendar. People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it. We can eat all kinds of delicious rice dumplings. Dragon boat races are very popular. It’s exciting to watch the dragon boat race.
(13) Many wild animals are in danger now. Some of them have no places to live in. It’s time for us to save them and protect the Earth. First, we should plant more trees and give them a good place to live in. Second, we shouldn’t kill wild animals or buy things made from animals in danger. Third, we shouldn’t pollute the Earth. Let’s save the animals together.
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Dear Mike,
The summer holiday is coming. I will go travelling in Guangzhou with my parents from June.21st to June 26th. We will go there by train. People say that Guangzhou is a modern and beautiful city. We plan to visit Guangzhou Tower, climb Baiyun Mountain and enjoy delicious food. I can’t wait to travel there. Will you join us
Yours
Tommy
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Saturday, May.20th. Sunny
Today is Saturday. I got up at seven. I washed my face and did morning exercises.At 7:30 I have breakfast. I did my homework and read books in the morning. In the afternoon, I play table tennis with my friends. In the evening, I watch TV for half an hour and talk with my parents. I go to bed at 9 o’clock.
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