专题08 话题写作
一、书面表达
1．（2023·浙江）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1）活动的过程；
2）收获与感想。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
【答案】Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us" activity organised by our Students' Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生为校英文报写篇报道。写作背景：上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）活动的过程；2）收获与感想。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. 运用了非限制性定语从句；Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. 运用了被动语态，限制性定语从句；I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.运用了限制性定语从句。
2．（2023·全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为"用英文讲中国故事"的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2.意义或启示。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
【答案】One possible version:
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius's life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self- cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibilty.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。写作背景：你们学校正举办主题为"用英文讲中国故事"的征文活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.运用了现在分词作状语；The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. 运用了被动语态；Confucius's life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self- cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. 运用了非限制性定语从句。
3．（2024·全国甲卷） 英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. In recent years, we have witnessed remarkable advancements in various modes of transportation.
One such innovation is the shared bicycle, which has revolutionized urban travel. These bicycles are easily accessible and environmentally friendly, encouraging people to adopt a healthier and more sustainable lifestyle. Another significant development is the high-speed rail network. Connecting cities across the country, the high-speed trains offer fast and comfortable travel, significantly reducing travel time. This has greatly enhanced inter-city connectivity and promoted economic development. Moreover, the introduction of new energy vehicles has been a game-changer in the automotive industry. These vehicles run on clean energy, reducing emissions and contributing to a greener environment.
In conclusion, the development of transport in China has brought significant benefits to society, improving convenience, promoting sustainability, and driving economic growth.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文发言稿，要求考生根据所给的三幅关于共享单车、新能源汽车和高铁的图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿，介绍我国公共交通的快速发展。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本书面表达需要要点齐全，上下文连贯，还需使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时尽可能运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，以提高文章的档次，体现对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。可参考使用下列句型和结构，例如：Firstly, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to travel short distances和Secondly, the high-speed train network has revolutionized long-distance travel, significantly reducing travel time across the country都运用了非谓语动词短语作状语；The public transport in China, which benefits us a great deal, helps us in various ways 运用了非限制性定语从句；Without shared bicycles，high-speed trains and new energy vehicles，not only would our environment be seriously polluted, but also it would bring much inconvenience to us运用了虚拟语气和部分倒装结构。
4．（2024·新高考Ⅱ卷） 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
(1)你完成的作品；
(2)你的感想。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share an extraordinary experience from last Friday when our class had an art lesson in the park. You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. How have your classes been lately I would love to hear about them. Take care and write back soon
Best regards,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一封英文邮件，要求考生以李华的名义，和英国朋友Chris分享上周五在公园上的一堂美术课，属于提纲类作文。首先，为了开篇明确并吸引读者的兴趣，我们可以直接提及这次特别的美术课活动； 接着，描述自己完成的作品。由于篇幅有限，我们应简洁而具体地介绍作品内容； 然后，表达自己的感想。感想部分可以围绕这次活动的特别之处、自己的收获或情感体验来展开； 最后，按照邮件的格式，以礼貌的结束语结束信件 。写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】 这篇范文生动地描绘了在公园上美术课的特殊体验。作者通过具体描述自己的作品——一幅水彩画，展示了公园中小桥与周围盛开花朵的美丽景色，使读者能够直观地感受到现场的氛围。同时，作者还表达了在自然环境中创作时的轻松愉悦和内心的平静，使这段经历更加鲜活和感人。 本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：I'm writing to share an extraordinary experience from last Friday when our class had an art lesson in the park和We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most都运用了定语从句；You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!运用了感叹句充当的宾语从句； Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers运用了非谓语动词作状语。 此外，作者还以一句"How have your classes been lately I would love to hear about them."巧妙地过渡到询问对方的情况，增加了邮件的互动性和友好氛围。整体而言，这篇范文结构清晰，语言流畅，情感真挚，是一篇很好的英语作文。
5．假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了
《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
1）该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；
2）该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
3）你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：1）词数不少于100；
2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
【答案】A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What's more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以晨光中学的李津的身份给《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。写作背景：我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目。写作要点已经给出，是一篇提纲类作文，内容包括：1）该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；2）该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；3）你对该地方的印象和感受。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. 运用了主语从句；What's more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. 运用了现在分词作状语；I'm sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.运用了名词性从句。
6．（2024·浙江）第一节请你写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
【答案】One possible version:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine One great option is the "Stand Up and Stretch" exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It's a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.运用了动名词作宾语； It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind.运用了it作形式主语； This exercise is recommended for several reasons.运用了被动语态；Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.运用了非限制性定语从句；So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! 运用了时间状语从句，祈使句；It's a small change that can make a big difference in your day.运用了强调句。
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专题08 话题写作
一、书面表达
1．（2023·浙江）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1）活动的过程；
2）收获与感想。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
2．（2023·全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为"用英文讲中国故事"的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2.意义或启示。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
3．（2024·全国甲卷） 英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
4．（2024·新高考Ⅱ卷） 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
(1)你完成的作品；
(2)你的感想。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了
《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
1）该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；
2）该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
3）你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：1）词数不少于100；
2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
6．（2024·浙江）第一节请你写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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