Module 8 Story time
满分范文必背
1．昨天，小熊高兴地在公园里放风筝，可是风筝突然挂在了树上，小熊该怎么办呢？请根据图片信息写一则英语小故事。
要求：
1. 必须包含所提示信息，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
It was sunny yesterday._________________________ __________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
It was sunny yesterday. At first a little bear walked to the park and flew a kite. Then, his kite was very high in the sky and the kite caught in a tall tree. The little bear couldn’t get the kite down. He was unhappy and cried. Next, a giraffe helped him get the kite down. The little bear was very happy and thanked the giraffe. Finally, they became good friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片要点，讲述故事，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片顺序叙述故事；
第二步，描述结果。
[亮点词汇]
①fly a kite放风筝
②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①At first a little bear walked to the park and flew a kite.（and连接并列的谓语）
2．同学们，守株待兔是我们非常熟悉的古代寓言故事。请你试着用英语写下来，寄给《21世纪英语》杂志社，传播中国故事，让世界上更多的人了解中国文化。
do farm work ran out... bump a stump pick up wait
要求：1.根据提示写句子，可适当发挥，使故事流畅；
2.不要出现考生本人信息；
3.不少于70词。
参考词汇：树桩 stump，农作物 crops
Once upon a time there was a farmer. Every day
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【答案】例文：
Once upon a time there was a farmer. Every day they could only have enough food to eat and enough clothing to wear.
One day, when he was doing farm work in the field, a scared hare ran out. It bumped a stump and died. He picked it up. That day, he ate his fill.
From that day on, he no longer went in for farming again. From morning till night, he stayed by that stump, waiting for miracles to take place again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕题图和“信息提示”写出“守株待兔”这个寓言故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍故事的主人公；
第二步，讲述故事发生的经过；
第三步，讲述故事的结果。
[亮点词汇]
① pick up 拾起
② no longer 不再
③ take place 发生
[高分句型]
① From morning till night, he stayed by that stump, waiting for miracles to take place again.（使用非谓语动词）
② One day in late autumn, when he was doing farm work in the field, a scared hare ran out.（使用when引导时间状语从句）
3．你听过《狐狸和葡萄》的故事吗？请根据下面的图片和提示词，用五句话简明扼要地跟大家分享这个故事。
要求：
所写句子必须和图片内容相关。
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【答案】例文
One hot summer’s day, a fox was hungry and thirsty when he saw some grapes. The grapes looked so delicious that he wanted to eat them very much. So he jumped and jumped. But the grapes were high, he couldn’t reach some. Finally, he had to give up and said “I am sure the grapes are sour.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：考生根据图片上的内容描写，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述图片上的内容；
第二步，具体介绍图片上狐狸的行为；
第三步，介绍结果。
[亮点词汇]
①have to give up不得不放弃
②be sure确定
[高分句型]
①The grapes looked so delicious that he wanted to eat them very much. （so...that引导的结果状语从句）
4．请根据下面的故事梗概，发挥想象力，以“Two little pigs”为题写一则小故事。要求：80个词左右。
时间：从前
地点：森林里
人物：幸福的猪妈妈和两只小猪
情节：两只小猪长大了，猪妈妈决定让他们走出森林，到城市里看一看……
Two little pigs
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【答案】例文
Two little pigs
Once upon a time, there were two little pigs. One was black and the other was white. They lived happily with their mother in the forest. When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest and look around the city. And then they left home with some food. When they got to the city, they noticed people in the city were not really happy. So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
提示：故事梗概已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍两只小猪”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间、地点、人物、情节等”几个方面重点介绍两只小猪的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“它们享受着它们的生活”。
[亮点词汇]
①once upon a time以前
②grow up长大
③enjoy one’s life享受某人的生活
[高分句型]
①When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest and look around the city.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②When they got to the city, they noticed people in the city were not really happy.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语故事，内容可以适当发挥，不少于50词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1. 一个女孩在森林里采花；
2. 她看到一所小房子。她敲门，但没人答应；
3. 她走进房子，那儿有一只熊；
4. 她和熊一起吃饭，成为了(become过去式为became)好朋友。
Once upon a time, there was a girl called Jean. She lived near a big forest._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Once upon a time, there was a girl called Jean. She lived near a big forest. One day she picked flowers in the forest. Then she noticed a small house. She knocked on the door, but nobody answered. So she walked into the house. There was a bear there. The bear was friendly. He said, “Are you hungry Come to have dinner with me!” Jean said, “OK.” Then they became good friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，写一个故事；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生要注意逻辑顺序，可适当添加细节使文章更通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出故事的开端“一天，她去森林里采花”；
第二步，写出故事的发展，充实文章内容细节，可以对“熊”进行一些外貌或性格的描写；
第三步，写出故事的结局。“小女孩和熊成为了好朋友”。
[亮点词汇]
① pick flowers 采花
② in the forest 在森林里
③ notice 注意到
④ knock on the door 敲门
⑤ walk into 走进
⑥ become good friends 变成好朋友
[高分句型]
① Come to have dinner with me!（祈使句）
6．中国寓言故事是中华传统文化的重要载体。最近某英文报正举行“用英语讲中国故事”的征文比赛。请根据下面六幅图片，写一篇英语短文讲述该故事，向该报投稿。
要求：（1）短文必须包含图片情节,可适当补充内容；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名；
（3）不少于60词，开头句已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：stone 石头，fill 填满
Once upon a time there was a little girl called Nüwa. Her father was Emperor Yan and he loved his daughter. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Once upon a time there was a little girl called Nüwa. Her father was Emperor Yan and he loved his daughter. They lived in a palace. They often played in the garden and were very happy. One day Nüwa went to the sea in a boat. But soon the weather was bad and Nüwa fell into the sea and died. Then Nüwa changed into a bird called Jingwei and returned home to her father. The Emperor watched the bird and cried because he missed his daughter. Finally, the bird decided to fill the sea with stones.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：六张图片已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图片中的内容，将图片按先后顺序串联，讲述精卫填海的故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步，交代故事背景和人物；
第二步，按故事先后顺序讲述精卫填海的故事。
[亮点词汇]
①fall into落入
②changed into变成
③fill sth with sth用……把……填满
[高分句型]
The Emperor watched the bird and cried because he missed his daughter.（because引导原因状语从句）
7．花木兰替父从军的故事家喻户晓。请你根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文。60词左右。
从前，有一个女孩，名叫花木兰，因家中没有男孩，她只好代替（ instead of）父亲参军（ join the army）。在军队里没有人发现她是个女孩，她作战（ fight， fought）非常勇敢（ bravely）。战争结束后（ after the war），她回到家乡，她的伙伴们（ partner）才知道她是女儿身。
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【答案】例文
Once upon a time, there was a girl called Hua mulan. Her father didn’t have a son, so she had to join the army instead of her father. In the army, no one noticed that she was a girl. She fought very bravely. After the war, she returned her hometown. Then her partners knew she was a girl!
【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们根据提示，叙述花木兰替父从军的故事。题目中已有了完整的故事情节，还有一些词汇和短语，学生们可以用上这些单词，并将这些内容用英语表达出来。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文叙述的是一个故事，文章应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是一些不规则动词。写作时应注意英语句子的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，以简单句句型为基础，使用恰当的词汇和短语。还可以穿插一些并列句或复合句的使用，提升作文档次。
8．请根据表格内容，写一则小故事。要求：60词左右；语言表达准确，语义连贯，可适当发挥。
提示：
主人公 汤姆和他的狗
故事梗概 一天，汤姆去公园发现了一只小狗，它受伤 (get hurt)了，汤姆把它带回家悉心照料，小狗变强壮了。它帮助汤姆看家，拿报纸，并且可以照顾他的小孩。
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【答案】例文：
One day, Tom went to the park, and he found a little dog. It got hurt. Then Tom took it home and took good care of it. With Tom’s care, the little dog became strong. It likes playing with Tom. The dog can help Tom watch their door and bring newspapers to him. It can also take care of Tom’s little baby. All the people in Tom’s family love the dog very much. They think it is an important member in their family.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据表格提示，写一则小故事，讲一讲汤姆和他的狗狗之间的故事。可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要结合一般过去时和一般现在时，使用第三人称进行写作。可采用一段式写作，将故事梗概完美展现出来。要做到无单词和语法错误。
9．请认真观察图片，完成一篇关于农场的短文。
要点提示：
1. 描述图片①中农场的场景。(不少于三句话)
2. 说明箭头↓，所指房子与农场的位置关系。
3. 根据图②、③描述房子内人们正在做的事。
注意：
1)短文必须包括以上所有提示内容要点,可适当发挥；
2)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3)词数在60左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总数。
This is a picture of a farm. There is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
This is a picture of a farm. There is a farmer and many animals on the farm. He is playing with animals. They have a good time every day. There is a house in the northeast of the farm. A girl lives in the house. She often plays with animals. Look! She is feeding the chicken.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求根据所给图片，写一篇关于农场的故事，要求包括农场的场景、介绍房子和农场的位置关系以及房子内人们正在做的事，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述图片内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；叙述农场的故事时，应详细具体，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
10．从前，森林里住着狐狸妈妈和小狐狸。有一天小狐狸饿了，狐狸妈妈去给他找食物，后来发生了什么事呢 妈妈去了山里的一个村子，终于找到了食物。它拿着葡萄（grapes），赶快往家跑，快到家时，它听到了猎狗（hunting dog）的叫声，马上大声喊道:“孩子!快跑!”小狐狸听见妈妈的声音，它赶快跑进了山，结果狐狸妈妈被猎人（hunter）抓到杀死了。
请你根据以上所给情节，写篇70词左右的英语小作文。
【答案】例文
Once upon a time, there was a fox and her baby in the forest. One day the baby fox was very hungry and cried. Mother fox decided to get some food for her baby. So she went to a village in a mountain. She got some grapes and hurried to her house. When she was near the house, suddenly she heard the noises of the hunting dog. She realised the hunter was coming to kill her son. Mother fox shouted, “My dear son, it is dangerous. Run away. Be quick. ”Baby fox ran away but Mother fox was caught and killed by the hunter.
【详解】本文需要写一则英文小故事，情节已经给出，重点的单词也相应给了出来，要注意在描述过去的事情的时候正确使用过去时态，可以用到的短语搭配表达有：Once upon a time曾经；decided to do决定去做；get some food for为…找一些食物；a village in a mountain大山里的一个小村庄；hurried to匆忙去…；near the house在房子附近；Run away跑掉。总体来说写作难度不大，重点是正确把握时态的应用，语句连贯，这篇范文完成了要求的写作任务。

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