专题10 中考高分写作
知识点：中考高分作文的特征
1. 清晰的分段，头尾两段比较简洁明了，中间内容可以详细描述。明确时态和文章的体裁，有时候会穿插不同的时态在文章中，特别是是描述个人的一段经历时要用到一般过去时，作文体裁考察书信体、邮件、记叙某件事情、描写某个人居多。
例如这样一篇材料是目前中考比较容易考察的类型：
生活是一位睿智的长者，生活是一位博学的老师。生活需要我们用心面对，无论是美好还是意外，我们都要记得微笑和感恩。请以“Life is full of”为题写一篇短文，分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历。
内容包括：1. 请先将标题填写完整；2. 分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历；3. 谈谈你的感悟。
Life is full of challenges
Life will be wonderful with all kinds of challenges. It is the challenges that make me stronger.
（开头段比较简洁，点明主题“生活充满挑战，但挑战让我更坚强。”）
I moved to the city when I entered the middle school. But my problem was that no one cooked for me because my parents came home late, so I made up my mind to learn how to cook. I must challenge myself. Then one day I watched my parents cooking dinner carefully. They taught me how to cook. A few days later, I learned to cook for myself. Now I am happy I can cook delicious food. My parents are satisfied with me. I am also proud of myself.
（中间段主要分享自己的一段特殊经历，这里一定要围绕主题去展开故事的讲解，并且要提到现在自己的改变有哪些。）
I learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life, but if we have confidence and are good at learning, everything will be better. I am so eager to meet the coming difficulties, I won’t give up no matter how hard they will be.
（结尾段谈谈个人的感悟，这个时候需要重新说明一下主题，并且提到遇到挑战个人会怎么应对。）
2. 适当运用英语中的定语从句、状语从句和宾语从句这大句式以及what引导的主语从句和it作为形式主语和形式宾语的句式。同时，感叹句和强调句也可以使用。
例如：
Her smile is so bright that she won the heart of mine when I first met her.（so ….that引导结果状语从句；when引导时间状语从句）
Besides, it is important for us to keep safety rules in mind, especially when we row a boat or play in the amusement park.（it作形式主语，“It is +adj. for sb. to do sth.”句型）
It’s my great honor to inform you that we will go to the Slender West Lake in Yangzhou for a study tour next Wednesday.（it作形式主语，It is +名词+to do sth）
You may find it difficult to make friends with people who always have doubts about you. (it作形式宾语，sb find it +adj+to do sth)
Mary is always ready to help others who get into trouble.（who引导定语从句）
Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself.（what引导主语从句）
I think the Expo Park is not only an exhibition of gardens, but also the pride of Xuzhou’s development.（“not only...but also...”结构）
If I have the chance to be a member of the club, I’ll be happy.（if引导条件状语从句）
As for me, I think being a leader can help me learn how to arrange things properly, which means a lot to me.（动名词作主语，which引导非限制性定语从句）
What a wonderful experience!（what引导感叹句）
I learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life, but if we have confidence and are good at learning, everything will be better.（that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）
Life will be wonderful with all kinds of challenges. It is the challenges that make me stronger.
3.有明显的衔接词或者词组，使得文章长短有致。
例如：
What’s more, Mary is always ready to help others who get into trouble.
As we all know, a good friend can make our life better.
First of all, to make a good friend, you must be friendly to others.
Also, be a trustworthy man. You can tell anything to such a person. especially when you are in a bad mood.
In addition, the most important quality in finding friends is honesty.
As for me, one of my secrets of making friends is being helpful.
I believe that being helpful means showing concern for others. For example, my classmate Jiang Lei felt sad after losing a basketball game
In a word, I’m looking forward to having a meaningful new life.
4. 可以适当地运用谚语或者名人名言来增强文章想表达的思想感情。
例如：
Practice makes perfect. （孰能生巧）We can practice hard in order to have a good performance at school.
No pain, no gain. （一份耕耘，一份收获）We should realize the importance of working hard on the way to success.
Where there is a will, there is a way.（有志者事竟成）We can’t give up easily when we get into trouble.
A friend in need is a friend indeed.（患难见真情）Friendship plays an important role in our life.
【例题讲解】
时光荏苒，光阴似箭。在三年的初中生活里，你肯定遇到过许多良师益友，其中谁会是你最难忘的人呢？请以“The Most Unforgettable Person”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你和他（她）之间的故事。
注意：
1. 内容必须包括所给的提示要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
The Most Unforgettable Person
How time flies! I’ll graduate from my middle school soon. Over the past three years, I’ve met lots of important persons.
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【答案】
The Most Unforgettable Person
How time flies! I’ll graduate from middle my school soon. Over the past three years, I’ve met lots of important persons. Among them, my deskmate Mary is the most unforgettable person for me.
Her smile is so bright that she won the heart of mine when I first met her. What’s more, Mary is always ready to help others who get into trouble. She has changed me a lot since we became deskmates. I used to be lazy and always made a great mess on my desk. And I was always mad when looking for my exercise books and test papers. She often reminded me to tidy my desk. Sometimes she even helped me look for things. Gradually, I formed the good habit of putting everything in order.
To me, Mary is just like the bright light in my life. She has left me many happy memories and I will never forget her.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的关键信息，结合给出的三个问题来介绍自己最难忘的人。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明最难忘的人是谁；
第二步，具体介绍这个人为何是最难忘的；
第三步，介绍自己对这个人的感觉。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of 许多
②be ready to do sth. 准备好做某事
③get into trouble 遇见麻烦
④used to be 过去曾经是
⑤look for 寻找
⑥form the good habit of 养成……的好习惯
[高分句型]
①Her smile is so bright that she won the heart of mine when I first met her.（that引导结果状语从句；when引导时间状语从句）
②What’s more, Mary is always ready to help others who get into trouble.（who引导定语从句）
【基础练习】
1. 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric给你发来电子邮件请求帮助。请根据邮件内容，用英语回复。
Dear Li Hua, How are you going Our school will hold a drama festival next month. I tried out for the performance last week. But I’m very unhappy to be chosen to play a role without any dialogue. Should I give up the chance Could you please give me some advice Thank you! Yours, Eric
注意：
1. 文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范。
3. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
I’m glad to receive your email. Now, I’m writing to tell you about my thoughts.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Eric,
I’m glad to receive your email. Now, I’m writing to tell you about my thoughts.
First, it’s brave of you to try out for the performance during your drama festival.
Although you haven’t got the role you wanted, it’s still a good chance for you to improve your acting skills and confidence. In fact, the role without any dialogue may be more challenging because you will have to use more body languages to express yourself. So don’t give up the chance.
What’s more, practice hard in order to have a good performance. Practice makes perfect.
Wish you good luck and look forward to your wonderful performance!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏Eric的邮件中的关键信息，针对朋友参加戏剧节选拔而提出的想法和建议。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达很开心收到朋友的电子邮件，并要表达自己的想法。
第二步，夸赞朋友勇于参加戏剧节的选拔，讲述要参加没有对话的角色的理由，鼓励朋友熟能生巧。
第三步，书写结束语。表达“祝愿朋友表演成功”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①try out for the performance参加……的选拔
②in fact事实上
③give up放弃
④in order to为了
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to receive your email.（be glad to do sth.句型）
②First, it’s brave of you to try out for the performance during your drama festival.（It is +形容词+of sb. to do sth.该句型常用描述人物特征的形容词）
③Practice makes perfect.（谚语）
2.初中生活就要结束了，同学们即将开始新的征程，规划新的人生。请根据下表提示以“My plan for the new life”为题，给你们校报写一篇英语短文，介绍你的计划。
学习 制定计划，努力学习；多读好书，……
生活 早睡早起，勤做锻炼，如…… 做做家务，感恩父母；听听音乐，放松自己； 外出旅游，参观名胜；
愿望 ……
注意：1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
My plan for the new life
Our middle school life is coming to an end. A new life is on the way. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
My plan for the new life
Our middle school life is coming to an end. A new life is on the way. I plan to do lots of things for the new life.
First, I will make a plan and try to keep a balance between work and rest. I’ll work hard on all subjects. In my free time, I hope to read more useful books to learn about different histories and cultures. Reading can open up a new world to me.
Second, I’d like to have a healthy lifestyle. It’s good for me to get up early and go to bed early. Exercise more every day. I’ll go jogging in the park or play basketball with my friends. Moreover, I’m going to do some housework for my parents to thank them. Listening to music is good for me to relax myself. I also want to go
travelling to enjoy the natural beauty and visit the palaces of interest.
In a word, I’m looking forward to having a meaningful new life.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文要求从学习、生活和原文等方面介绍新生活的计划，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍学习计划；
第二步，介绍生活计划；
第三步，介绍自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②In a word总之
③want to do sth想要做某事
[高分句型]
① It’s good for me to get up early and go to bed early.（it固定句型）
②Listening to music is good for me to relax myself.（动名词作宾语）
3. 假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。
Summer Camp
Living skills training ●on a farm ●live with local people ●cook meals by yourself ●feed animals, ... Sports training ●in a training centre ●live with team members ●be tested by coaches ●play ball games, ...
要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life.
The living skills training will be on a farm. There, I can live with local people who will help me learn more about their customs and lifestyles. Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities on the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.
I also have some advice for you I hope there will be more activities like growing plants and vegetables. I hope I will enjoy myself on the farm.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应先选择想要参与的活动，然后谈谈自己的理由，并给出一些建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种活动并说明理由；
第二步，更加详细地陈述理由，说明这种活动的好处；
第三步，给出一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be of great value 很有价值
②take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life.（because引导原因状语从句；省略that的定语从句）
②Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself.（what引导主语从句；that引导表语从句）
4. 随着五一劳动假期的到来和疫情的开放，越来越多的人选择外出旅游放松自己。假如你是李华，看到某旅行社组织的两种旅游团的宣传。请用英语给旅行社写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种旅游团及理由，并对你选择的旅游团的活动提出建议。
May Day Tour
the Yangtze River Cultural Tour Disneyland Tour
Time May 1 — May 2 May 2 — May 3
Place Nanjing Shanghai
Activities ● Overlook the Yangtze River from a helicopter. ● Take a boat trip on the Yangtze River. ● Listen to speeches on how to protect the Yangtze River. ● Try different kinds of rides, such as Space Mountain. ● Watch a parade of Disney characters. ● Enjoy the beautiful fireworks show.
Cost ￥450 /per person ￥1050 /per person
(overlook: 俯瞰； helicopter: 直升机）
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种旅游团的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.对你所选择的旅游团活动说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such wonderful tours. I prefer____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
例文1
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such wonderful tours. I prefer the Yangtze River Cultural Tour because the tour will improve my knowledge of the longest river in China.
The Yangtze River Cultural Tour will take place in Nanjing. It lasts from May 1 to May 2. There, we can overlook the Yangtze River from a helicopter. Moreover, we will take a boat trip on the Yangtze River. We can also enjoy beautiful views along the Yangtze River. In the tour, we can listen to speeches on how to protect the Yangtze River, too. What’s more, the cost of the trip is 450 yuan per person.
I also have some advice for you. I hope more speeches about the history of the Yangtze River will be given. I am sure I will enjoy myself in the tour.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文2
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such wonderful tours. I prefer Disneyland Tour because the tour will make me relaxed after a few months’ hard work.
The Tour will be in Shanghai. It lasts from May 2 to May 3. There, we can try different kinds of rides, such as Space Mountain. It will be very exciting. What makes me interested is that we can watch a parade of Disney characters. In the tour, we can also enjoy the beautiful fireworks show. Moreover, the cost of the trip is 1050 yuan per person.
I also have some advice for you. I hope we can have some time to do some shopping. I want to buy some gifts for my friends. I am sure I will have a fantastic time in Disneyland.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。选择你更想参与的一种旅游团并说明理由；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、活动、费用”几个方面重点介绍旅游团活动的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。提出建议表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take place举行
②listen to speeches听演讲
③What’s more而且
④enjoy myself玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I prefer the Yangtze River Cultural Tour because the tour will improve my knowledge of the longest river in China. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I am sure I will enjoy myself in the tour.(宾语从句)
5. 红星中学王校长是一位英语老师，在学校网站的英语栏目“HEAR YOUR VOICE”发帖，了解学生学习和学校食堂两方面的情况。假如你是学生李明，请根据校长的帖子，选择其中一个方面反映问题，并提出建议。
←HEAR YOUR VOICE Mr. Wang Dear students, How is everything going Do you have any problems with your study For example, do you often stay up late to finish your homework What about our Students’ Canteen (食堂) Are you satisfied with your lunch Looking forward to your problems and advice. 5:20 PM. Apr. 16, 2023
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（回帖开头和结尾不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。.
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Ming, from Grade Nine. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
【答案】
Possible version 1:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Ming, from Grade Nine. I want to tell you something about our study.
First of all, proper exercises help us check what we have learned. Since we have seven subjects, we have to spend more than three hours finishing our homework. Would you make teachers reduce homework Besides, most of us find lessons boring. Although exercises and exams help us understand the key points, they take up too much time. Dear headmaster, you can’t imagine how boring our school life is. I think teachers should improve their teaching methods.
I hope these problems can be dealt with soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
Possible version 2:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Ming, from Grade Nine. I want to say something about our Students’ Canteen.
First, I am unhappy with the lunch food. Sometimes it is not delicious. However, I have to eat it. More kinds of dishes should be provided. Moreover, the canteen is too small to hold so many students. Why not build a larger one Finally, the environment at the canteen is not satisfying. The tables and chairs are sometimes dirty. I think the canteen workers should do the cleaning more carefully.
If the problems can be solved, students will have a happier time on campus.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕王校长帖子中的问题进行写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，交代写作目的；
第二步，阐述学生学习或学校食堂的问题并给出建议；
第三步，表达自己的期望，希望这些问题能够成功解决。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②key points重点
③take up占据
[高分句型]
①First of all, proper exercises help us check what we have learned.（what引导的宾语从句）
6. 假如你是导游，请根据下表内容，用英语向外国朋友介绍“第十三届中国国际园林博览会（The 13th China International Garden Expo Park）”主展区的一些情况。
地理位置 位于徐州东南约30公里的吕梁山风景区，面积2595亩。
开幕时间 2022年11月6日。
吉祥物 徐徐、州州——形象可爱，阳光健康。
主要展区情况 共设65个展园，包括室外展和室内展。是一个集旅游、文化、教育、科技及农业展示为一体的综合性园林，……
你的观点 （自拟二条）
注意：
1) 语言通顺，意思连贯，想象合理，书写规范；
2) 词数：90词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：吕梁山风景区Lvliang Mountain Scenic Area；吉祥物mascot； 综合性comprehensive.
Hello, guys!
Welcome to our Expo Park. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hello, guys!
Welcome to our Expo Park. Now let me introduce this wonderful park to you. Here is the main exhibition of the 13th China International Garden Expo Park. It is located in Lvliang Mountain Scenic Area in the southeast of Xuzhou. It has an area of 2595 mu, about 30 kilometers away from Xuzhou City.
The Garden Expo Park opened on November 16 last year, with the theme of “Green City, Good Life”. Here are the mascots—Xuxu and Zhouzhou. They are so cute, sunny and healthy that many tourists like them very much. As we all know, there are 65 exhibition parks in total, including outdoor exhibition and indoor exhibition. It is a comprehensive garden made up of tourism, culture, education, science, technology and agriculture. It mainly shows the great achievements such as new technologies, new materials, new artworks and new equipment.
I think the Expo Park is not only an exhibition of gardens, but also the pride of Xuzhou’s development. It shows to the public that Xuzhou is developing so fast and becoming more and more beautiful. I hope you will have a good time here.
【解析】
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要是一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，需要按要求补充；除了开幕时间外，其他不需要用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描写地理位置；
第二步，描写开幕时间、吉祥物、展区情况；
第三步，描述自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①have an area of 占地
②with the theme of 主题为
③a comprehensive garden made up of 由……组成的综合性园林
④show the great achievements 展示巨大的成就
[高分句型]
①They are so cute, sunny and healthy that many tourists like them very much.（“so...that...”结构）
②I think the Expo Park is not only an exhibition of gardens, but also the pride of Xuzhou’s development.（“not only...but also...”结构）
③It shows to the public that Xuzhou is developing so fast and becoming more and more beautiful.（宾语从句）
7. 假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。
Summer Camp
Living skills training ●on a farm ●live with local people ●cook meals by yourself ●feed animals, ... Sports training ●in a training centre ●live with team members ●be tested by coaches ●play ball games, ...
要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life.
The living skills training will be on a farm. There, I can live with local people who will help me learn more about their customs and lifestyles. Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities on the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.
I also have some advice for you I hope there will be more activities like growing plants and vegetables. I hope I will enjoy myself on the farm.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应先选择想要参与的活动，然后谈谈自己的理由，并给出一些建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种活动并说明理由；
第二步，更加详细地陈述理由，说明这种活动的好处；
第三步，给出一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be of great value 很有价值
②take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value
to my later life.（because引导原因状语从句；省略that的定语从句）
②Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself.（what引导主语从句；that引导表语从句）
8. “立德树人、五育并举”的教育理念在我市落地生花。三年荏苒，即将毕业，我们增强了爱国情怀，强健了体魄，启发了智力，陶冶了情操，完善了人格，茁壮成长，收获颇多。假如你是李华，请根据下图提示，从“德智体美劳”几方面谈谈这几年的进步。做成“青春记忆”的视频演讲，进行成果展示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名；
3. 从“五育”中选择至少“三育”，其中“劳”必须写。 成长树上的提示只是参考，考生可以自己发挥。要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，适当发挥。
参考词汇：劳动教育labor education
How time flies! We’re leaving the junior high school and getting into the senior high school. In the past three years, I’ve made great progress in many ways.
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【答案】
How time flies! We’re leaving the junior high school and getting into the senior high school. In the past three years, I’ve made great progress in many ways.
First, I always obey school rules. I try to be a good student. I’ve learned to care for others and often help
those who are in trouble. And I can get along with my classmates now.
Second, I used to be crazy about playing games. But now I spend most of my free time reading all kinds of books. I know reading makes a full man. Also, I develop a good habit of studying and get good grades finally.
Finally, our school pays much attention to the labor education. So I’ve learned all kinds of basic life skills, such as making bed, cooking dinner and mopping up the floor. My parents are satisfied with this. What’s more, I often work as a volunteer in my community. I often help my neighbours fix things, like broken bicycles and computers.
In a word, I’m very proud that I can make such great progress in the past three years. Thanks for your listening.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示和要求，从“五育”中选择至少“三育”，其中“劳”必须写，写一篇演讲稿。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明这几年自己取得了很大的进步；
第二步，具体从“三育”说明自己的进步；
第三步，总结，自己为这些年的进步感到骄傲并致谢。
[亮点词汇]
①get along with 与……和睦相处
②develop a good habit of 养成……的好习惯
③pays much attention to 非常关注
[高分句型]
I know reading makes a full man.（宾语从句）

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