湖南省长沙市2023-2024九年级英语中考第二次模拟考试试题(含解析)


2023-2024学年九年级英语中考第二次模拟考试
(满分:90分;考试时间:60分钟)
注意事项:
1. 本试卷共四部分,满分100分,考试时间100分钟。
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3.答题卡上不得使用涂改液,涂改胶和纸贴。
4. 考试结束后,请将试卷和答题卡一并交回。
一、阅读(共三节,满分40分)
第一节(共11题;每题2分,满分22分)
阅读下列材料,从每题所给的A、B、C三个选项中,选出最佳选项。
A
1.What is special about the International School Program
A.Its common subjects.
B.Its STEM subjects.
C.Its after-school practice.
2.What does the Homestay Program help students to do
A.Volunteer in the local community.
B.Get into a high school in the UK.
C.Know about Americans' daily life.
3.Where can we probably read this article
A.On a website. B.In a magazine. C.In a report.
B
When I was told to play for a drama competition, I became nervous. I had never done anything like this before. But after reading Shakespeare's Twelfth Night, I was excited about what was to come. The story was great and sentences were So funny. I wanted to give it a go.
I was playing Sir Toby Belch, a very funny old knight (骑士). I had to remember a lot of sentences and very funny old words. I worked hard in order to act well, like a real knight from the old days. But the most difficult job was to be funny in all my acting. This is quite different from the way I am in real life.
"OK. It's time to be a different me now!" "I said to myself. At first, I couldn't do anything naturally. I don' know what to do when acting in this silly way. But I always told myself that I was Sir Toby now and I should forget who I really was. Even when I was in the bath, I was thinking about Sir Toby's words and actions and trying to do everything like Sir Toby did.
The competition day finally came. When it was my tum to perform, I took a deep breath and began my part. I tried hard to make my words clear enough to be understood and my actions funny enough to make everybody laugh. When the results were finally read out, I immediately knew we had won first prize. I made it.
From this experience, I've come to know that I can be a different person. It doesn't mean I've changed my personality, but I can do something I had never imagined possible.
4.What does the underlined words " give it a go" in Paragraph 1 mean
A.Go to a place. B.Let it go away. C.Have a try.
5.What did the writer think of acting in a funny way at first
A.Exciting. B.Difficult. C.Natural.
6.What is the correct order according to the passage
a. I tried my best to think about the words and action of Sir Toby Belch.
b. I couldn't play the part naturally.
c. We won the first prize in the competition.
d. I breathed deeply and started to play.
e. I was told to play Sir Toby Belch.
A.e-b-a-d-c B.e-a-b-d-c C.a-b-d-c-e
7.What is the best title for the passage
A.A Funny Old Knight.
B.A Silly Drama Competition.
C.A Different Drama Experience.
C
A college student named Xiao Wang opened the first unsupervised (无人看管的) flower shop in Beijing, and it has been very popular among young people.
Unlike traditional flower shops in the capital, people can only choose flowers themselves and use WeChat Pay (微信支付) and Alipay (支付宝) to pay in Wang's shop.
As a lover of fiction, Wang said he started his business because it wouldn't take up his time. "People can go to my flower shop at any time. " he explained. "When I have to serve customers (顾客), I won't have time to read any books. So I opened the self-service flower shop after doing market research. "
"Most young people like shopping in a free environment, " Wang continued, "and they hate shopping advice from the workers. People can know information about different kinds of flowers by looking through their mobile phones. "
Even though there is no shopkeeper, the flower shop has become very popular and successful, at least for now. Although he doesn't sell flowers in the shop himself, Wang usually visits it at a certain time every day. "I trust everyone. " said Wang, "and it won't be a big deal even if a burglary (盗窃) takes place. "
8.What do the underlined words "self-service" mean
A.自助服务 B.无人看管 C.微信支付
9.Why did Xiao Wang open an unsupervised flower shop
A.Because it wouldn't take up his time.
B.Because he likes flower.
C.Because he trusts everyone.
10.Which of the following is NOT the advantage of the unsupervised flower shop
A.Customers can have a free shopping environment.
B.People can know information about different kinds of flowers in the shop.
C.Customers can go to the flower shop whenever they like.
11.Where can you read this passage
A.A newspaper. B.A history book. C.A sports magazine.
第二节(共4小题;每小题2分,满分8分)
The Forbidden City, or the Palace Museum, has been considered a great old museum for a long time.  12.   Nowadays, such cultural and creative products have been one of the hottest topics and they are popular among Chinese people.
Since 2007, the Palace Museum has come up with more than 9, 600 products. The products include notebooks with embroidery (刺绣) covers and dolls of emperors and empresses.  13.   It was reported that the products were sold for about 1 billion yuan in
2016.
Besides the products, the Palace Museum also created an app called A Day of 'an Emperor. It is such an interesting app that it has lots of users. Users will be guided to learn about a day of life and work of an emperor of the Qing Dynasty.
Several years ago, a documentary called Masters in Forbidden City became popular online.  14.   They say that they can learn a lot about Chinese history and culture by watching the documentary. The documentary also makes them want to work at the museum.
 15.   For example, the National Museum of China has had similar projects, too. China encourages more and more museums to take different measures (措施) to make young people interested in Chinese history and culture.
A. The products can bring much profit (收益). B. There are different kinds of creative products. C. Lots of people enjoy watching it, especially the young people. D. In China, some other museums also learned from the Palace Museum. E. However, the Palace Museum has designed some cultural and creative products.
第三节 (共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)
阅读下面短文,根据短文内容回答问题。
On February 21 each year, UNESCO (联合国教科文组织) holds an International Mother Language Day (IMLD). The event is to help people to pay attention to the disappearance of the world's languages. Many of them are disappearing each year. UNESCO sees this as a terrible fact.
What happens when a language dies out Something great is lost -- not just sounds and marks but the way that people understand the world and communicate with each other. They keep different cultures and traditions through languages. Kill a language and all these are killed too.
Through IMLD, more and more people gradually realize the terrible situation and try to stop it. Many upload (上传) texts, audios (音频) and videos on the website of Google's 2018 Endangered Languages Project to spread ways of communication. Also, the Myaamia Project makes efforts to save the language of the Miami tribes ( i&) by encouraging people to study and communicate with it.
These activities have one thing in common -- they give life to those endangered languages. People who work to keep languages alive are not limited to the past Many young people design apps and use social media to support their activities. They "share the word" to save the world.
So, while the problem of disappearing languages remains a very serious one, there is hope. We all have a special feeling of our mother language. This is why we should remember the wise words of late president of South Africa, Nelson Mandela: "If you talk to a man in a language he understands, that goes to his head. If you talk to a man in his own language, that goes to his heart. "
When is the International Mother Language Day held every year
How do people keep different cultures and traditions
What do the activities like the Myaamia Project have in common
Why should we remember the wise words of Nelson Mandela
Do you want to celebrate the International Mother Language Day Why or why not
二、语言运用(共三节,满分35分)
第一节 (共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的A、B、C三个选项中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。Before I started school that autumn, I spent the whole vacation with my grandmother. I can still remember one day she sent me down to the 21. with a list. Behind the counter (柜台) was a lady, Miss Bee.
"Excuse me, " I said. She looked up. "I need to get these, " I continued, holding up my list.
"So Go get them. " Miss Bee 22. a sign. "There's 23. here but you and me, and I'm not your servant, so get yourself a basket over there. "
I visited Miss Bee twice a week that 24. . Sometimes she shortchanged (少找零钱) me. Other times she overcharged. Going to the store was like going into battle (战斗). But by the end of summer, I could 25. the one-hour shopping trip in around 15 minutes. On the morning I was to return home, I stopped in to get some gum (口香糖).
"All right, " she said. "What did you learn this summer "
"That you're 26. !" I replied.
Miss Bee just laughed. "I know what you think of me, " she said. "Well, I don't 27. ! My job is to teach every child I meet life lessons. When you get older you'll be glad!" Glad I met Miss Bee Ha! The idea was 28. .
Then one day my daughter came to me with homework troubles. "It's too 29. , " she said.
"Could you finish my math problems for me "
"If I do it for you, how will you ever learn to do it yourself " I said. 30. , I was back at that store where I had learned the hard way to add up my bill by myself. I've never been overcharged since.
21.A. school B. store C. hospital
22.A. pointed to B. wrote down C. put away
23.A. no one B. someone C. everyone
24.A. spring B. summer C. autumn
25.A. begin B. spread C. finish
26.A. mean B. helpful C. embarrassed
27.A. care B. praise C. support
28.A. uncomfortable B. unreasonable C. unavoidable
29.A. hard B. easy C. strange
30.A. Luckily B. Lately C. Suddenly
第二节 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Chang An, a cartoon movie, has become 31.  most popular movie for many children this summer. The movie hit(上映)cinemas  32.  
July 8th and so far it has collected more than 600 million yuan at the box office. Why was it so popular
The movie tells stories about some famous poets such as Li Bai, Du Fu and Wang Wei by  33.  (use) Gao Shi as a main character. Unlike any movie put on Chinese screens before, the 168-minute movie is well  34.  (know) for the excerpts (摘录) from 48 famous poems.
In the cinema, many children recited the poems excitedly and  35.  (loud) whenever the poems appeared, While some find it interesting, others consider it boring.
"More than half of the audience (观众) were primary school  36.  (student) in the cinema, and the girl behind me was reciting really loudly , "one review (影评) said, adding that parents should teach their children good manners, especially when they are trying  37.  (let) their children learn something.
"There were even parents who recorded  38.  (they) children reciting in the cinema, "another review said. They went on to suggest cinemas organize family-only showings. And they keep them separate from those who want  39.  (silent) during the show.
This movie lasts for about 3 hours, so some people said that it suited older audience.  40.  , more people said, "It's a wonderful movie for children to learn traditional Chinese culture. "
第三节 (共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)
阅读下面的短文,将划线部分译成英文或中文。
When people say Chinese culture, we often think of paper cutting. 41. Paper cutting is an art form with a long history in China. Traditional paper-cuts were first put on windows for decoration(装饰). That is why paper-cuts are also called “window flowers”. Most paper-cuts are made of red paper, because red means good luck in Chinese culture. Today, people use paper-cuts to decorate not only windows, but also doors and other furniture(家具). 42. Sometimes, people use them as gifts.
Paper-cuts are popular because of their expressions of good wishes and hopes. During the Spring Festival, for example, many people put up paper-cuts of the Chinese character(汉字) “Fu” upside down on the door. 43. 他们希望这会给他们带来好运。 At wedding ceremonies(婚礼), you can always see paper-cuts of the character “Xi”. It means that the new couple can enjoy happiness together.
Paper cutting has developed into different styles in different parts of China. 44. Paper-cuts from the north of China usually have interesting shapes. In southern China, people prefer paper-cuts with the themes(主题) of flowers, fruit, birds and fish.
45. 学习剪纸非常容易。 With a piece of paper and a knife or a pair of scissors, you can try to make your own paper-cuts. Although paper cutting is easy to start with, you need a lot of practice and imagination to become really good at it.
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三、写作(满分15分)
46.青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段。处于这一时期的你经历了哪些变化呢?回首两年多的初中时光,你一定取得了不少进步,学校英文报Teens栏目正在以"How I've Changed!"为题开展征文活动。请你根据下列提示,用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你的进步与变化。
要求:(1)短文必须包含提示中的要点,可适当发挥; (2)80词左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数); (3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
How I've Changed!
How time flies!
【答案解析】
一、【答案】1.B
2.C
3.A
【解析】【分析】文章大意:本文是一篇应用文。主要介绍了两个可以提高英语的国外项目。
【点评】考查阅读理解能力。先浏览题干清楚题干问什么,根据问题在文中找出正确的答案。
1.细节理解题。根据原文,this program specially offers STEM subjects.可知 the International School Program 的特助之处在于它的 STEM 课程。故选B。
2.细节理解题。根据原文 The Homestay Program offers chances to experience the everyday life of a host family in the USA.可知the Homestay Program 可以帮助学生们知道关于美国的日常生活。故选C。
3.推理判断题。根据原文Email:naceltravel@,可知这是一个网址。所以这篇文章很有可能在一个网站上被阅读,故选A。
【答案】4.C
5.B
6.A
7.C
【解析】【分析】文章大意:本文是一篇记叙文。主要是讲述作者一开始听说要演戏剧很紧张。但是看完 Shakespeare's Twelfth Night 之后,作者决定尝试。这次尝试是完全不同的一段经历。从一开始觉得困难到最后获得第一名。
【点评】考查阅读理解能力。先浏览题干理清题干问什么,在阅读文章时注意细节理解题的具体信息。标题判断题要掌握文章大意。
4.词义猜测题。根据原文When I was told to play for a drama competition, I became nervous. I had never done anything like this before.及 The story was great and sentences were So funny.当我被告知要参加戏剧比赛时,我变得紧张起来。我以前从来没有做过这样的事。这个故事很棒,句子也很有趣。前后形成对比,可推知画线单词意为尝试。故选C。
5.细节理解题。根据原文 But the most difficult job was to be funny in all my acting. This is quite different from the way I am in real life. 可知,在表演的一开始,作者觉得困难。故选B。
6.细节理解题。根据原文I was playing Sir Toby Belch, a very funny old knight (骑士). 这是第一步。即 I was told to play Sir Toby Belch. 。 At first, I couldn't do anything naturally. 这是第二步。即 I couldn't play the part naturally.Even when I was in the bath, I was thinking about Sir Toby's words and actions and trying to do everything like Sir Toby did.这是第三步,即I tried my best to think about the words and action of Sir Toby Belch. When it was my tum to perform, I took a deep breath and began my part. 这是第四步,即I breathed deeply and started to play. …… immediately knew we had won first prize. I made it. 这是第五步,即 We won the first prize in the competition. 故选A。
7.标题判断题。通读全文可知本文主要是讲述作者一开始听说要演戏剧很紧张。但是看完 Shakespeare's Twelfth Night 之后,作者决定尝试。这次尝试是完全不同的一段经历。从一开始觉得困难到最后获得第一名。由此可推知本文最好的标题是选项C的内容。故选C。
【答案】8.A
9.A
10.B
11.A
【解析】【分析】本文介绍了大学生小王在北京开设的第一家无人看管的花店。顾客可以自由选择鲜花,用微信或者支付宝支付所购买的鲜花。
【点评】考查阅读理解。本文涉及细节题,推断题,词义猜测题,细节题要注意从文中寻找答案;推断题需要联系上下文,推断出需要的信息,词义猜测题需要根据上下文提炼相关信息锁定词意。
8.词义猜测题。根据A college student named Xiao Wang opened the first unsupervised (无人看管 ) flower shop in Beijing可知,这个店是无人监管的,self表示"自己",service表示服务,也就是自我服务,故选A。
9.细节题。根据As a lover of fiction, Wang said he started his business because it wouldn't take up his time可知,因为这样不会占用他的时间。故选A。
10.细节题。根据Most young people like shopping in a free environment和People can go to my flower shop at any time可知,Customers can have a free shopping environment.Customers can go to the flower shop whenever they like顾客可以有一个自由的购物环境。顾客可以随时去花店是无人花店的优势,没有提及人们可以在店里了解不同种类鲜花的信息故选B。
11.推断题。通读全文可知,本文介绍了大学生小王在北京开设的第一家无人看管的花店。顾客可以自由选择鲜花,用微信或者支付宝支付所购买的鲜花,所以文章可以在报纸上看到,故选A。
第二节【答案】12.E;13.A;14.C;15.D
【解析】【分析】文章大意:本文是一篇说明文。主要讲述了故宫博物院的文化创意产品非常流行,其他博物馆也纷纷效仿。
A.产品可以带来很多收益。
B.有不同种类的创意产品。
C.很多人喜欢看,尤其是年轻人。
D.在中国,其他一些博物馆也向故宫博物院学习。
E.然而,故宫博物院也设计了一些文化创意产品。
【点评】考查阅读还原。通读全文尤其是有空格线的段落要联系上下文,选出使句意连贯的选项。
12.根据下文 Nowadays, such cultural and creative products have been one of the hottest topics and they are popular among Chinese people. 如今,这样的文化创意产品已经成为最热门的话题之一,它们在中国人中很受欢迎。可推知此处是表示"宫博物院也设计了一些文化创意产品。"符合上下文联系。故选E。
13.根据下文 It was reported that the products were sold for about 1 billion yuan in 2016. 据报道,这些产品在2016年的销售额约为10亿元。可知这些文化创意产品可以带来很多收益符合上下文联系。故选A。
14.根据上文Several years ago, a documentary called Masters in Forbidden City became popular online.几年前,一部名为Masters in Forbidden City 的纪录片在网上走红。可知此处是指很多人喜欢观看它(纪录片)符合句意。故选C。
15.根据下文 For example, the National Museum of China has had similar projects, too.例如,中国国家博物馆也有类似的项目。可知此处时有其他博物馆也向故选D。故宫博物院学习。故选D。
第三节【答案】16.On February 21 (each year).
17.Through languages.
18.They give life to those endangered languages.
19.Because we all have a special feeling of our mother language.
20.(开放式答案) Yes. Because it's meaningful.
【解析】【分析】文章大意:本文是一篇说明文。主要讲述了联合国教科文组织设立了国际母语日。该活动旨在帮助人们关注世界语言的消失。
【点评】考查阅读理解能力。先浏览题干清楚题干问什么,阅读文章时要注意细节理解题的具体信息。
16.细节理解题。根据原文On February 21 each year, UNESCO (联合国教科文组织) holds an International Mother Language Day (IMLD). 可知国际母语日每年 February 21 举行。故答案为 On February 21 (each year).。
17.细节理解题。根据原文 They keep different cultures and traditions through languages. 可知人们通过语言来保持文化和传统。故答案为 Through languages 。
18.细节理解题。根据原文These activities have one thing in common -- they give life to those endangered languages.可知这些活动的共同点是他们赋予了那些濒临灭绝的语言生命。故答案为They give life to those endangered languages 。
19.细节理解题。根据原文We all have a special feeling of our mother language. This is why we should remember the wise words of late president of South Africa, Nelson Mandela.可知我们要记住纳尔逊·曼德拉的至理名言是因为我们都对自己的母语有一种特殊的感觉。故答案为Because we all have a special feeling of our mother language 。
20.这是do开头的一般疑问句,只能用yes,no来回答。再回答why的特殊疑问句。言之有理即可。
二、【答案】21-30 BAABC AABAC
【解析】【分析】文章大意:本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了那年夏天,我在 Miss Bee的商店学习自己算账的事情。由于Miss Bee 不帮忙,让我误以为她是一个小气的人。但事实上当女儿让我帮她做题时,让我想起Miss Bee是对的。
【点评】考查完形填空能力。通读全文了解文章大意,做题时注意联系上下文选出符合句意的选项。
21.句意:我还记得有一天她让我拿着一张购物单去商店。A.学校。B.商店。C.医院。根据下文Behind the counter (柜台) was a lady, Miss Bee. "I need to get these, " 可推知此处是拿着购物单去商店。故选B。
22.句意: Miss Bee 指着一个标志。A.指着。B.写下。C.放好。根据原文 a sign 及结合此时场景:我拿着购物单去购物,但是她指着标志让我自己拿着篮子拿物品。故选A。
23.句意:这里除了你和我,没有别人,我不是你的仆人,你自己去那边拿个篮子吧。A.一个都没有。B.有人。C.任何人。根据原文but you and me,可知这里除了你和我,没有其他人。故选A。
24.句意:那个夏天,我每周拜访 Miss Bee 两次。A.春天。B.夏天。C.秋天。根据原文ut by the end of summer, 及 "What did you learn this summer " 可知此处是夏天。故选B。
25.句意:但到了夏末,我可以在15分钟内完成一小时的购物之旅。A.开始。B.传播。C.完成。根据原文 Going to the store was like going into battle (战斗). 再结合语境可知此处是指作者能在短时间内顺利完成购物。故选C。
26.句意:你是小气的人。A.吝啬的。B.有帮助的。C.尴尬的。根据原文 Miss Bee 说自己不是仆人,让作者自己拿篮子购物及有时候会少找零钱,由此可推知作者认为她时小气的人。故选A。
27.句意:好吧,我不在乎。A.关心。B.表扬。C.支持。根据原文"I know what you think of me, "及My job is to teach every child I meet life lessons. When you get older you'll be glad!" 可推知她不在乎作者对她的评价。故选A。
28.句意:这个想法不合理。A.不舒服的。B.不合理的。C.不可避免的。根据原文 "That you're 6 !" 及 Glad I met Miss Bee Ha! 可推出作者认为这个想法是不合理的。故选B。
29.句意:它很难。A.困难的。B.简单的。C.奇怪的。根据原文 Then one day my daughter came to me with homework troubles. 可推出作业很难。故选A。
30.句意:突然,我又回到了那家商店,在那里我费了好大的劲才学会了自己算帐。A.幸运地。B.最近。C.突然。根据原文 When you get older you'll be glad!可推知之前Miss Bee 说的话是对的,作者看到这个场景托然想起她在那年夏天学会自己算账的事情。故选C。
第二节【答案】31.the;32.on;33.using;34.known;35.loudly;36.students;37.to let;38.their;39.silence;40.However
【解析】【分析】大意:文章是关于动画电影《长安》上映的情况的报道。
【点评】考查语法填空。注意首先快速阅读文章,把握文章大意;其次重点阅读空格句,判断缺少的成分,再根据固定搭配等填写单词的正确形式;最后带着答案阅读一遍,进行复查。
31.句意:动画电影《长安》成为今年暑期最受孩子们欢迎的电影。根据空格后形容词最高级 most popular 最受欢迎的,可知应填定冠词the。故答案为:the
32.句意:影片于 7 月 8 日上映,目前票房已超过 6 亿元。根据空格后具体日期 July 8th ,可知应填介词on,表"在"。故答案为:on
33.句意:电影以高适为主角,讲述了李白、杜甫和王维等著名诗人的故事。use使用,动词。根据介词by,可知应填动名词形式using。故答案为:using
34.句意:与以往任何一部在中国银幕上播放的电影不同,这部 168 分钟的电影因摘录了 48 首著名诗词而广为人知。know知道,动词原形。根据is,可知句子为被动语态:be+过去分词,动词know的过去分词为known。故答案为:known
35.句意:在电影院里,每当诗歌出现时,许多孩子都会兴奋地大声朗诵。loud大声的,形容词。根据副词作状语修饰动词,可知应填副词形式loudly"大声地",修饰动词过去式recited。故答案为:
36.句意:电影院里一半以上的观众都是小学生,我身后的女孩背诵得非常响亮……student学生,可数名词。根据be动词were,可知表语应用复数形式students。故答案为:students
37.句意:一篇评论说,父母应该教给孩子良好的礼仪,尤其是当他们想让孩子学习一些东西的时候。let让,动词。根据固定搭配try to do sth."尝试做某事",可知应填动词不定式to let。故答案为:to let
38.句意:甚至有家长在电影院录下了自己孩子的朗诵声……they他们,代词主格。根据空格后名词children"孩子",可知应填形容词性物主代词their"他们的",作定语。故答案为:their
39.句意:他们还建议电影院组织家庭专场放映。并将他们与那些希望在放映期间保持安静的观众分开。silent安静的,形容词。根据谓语want,可知应填名词形式silence"安静",作宾语。故答案为:silence
40.句意:然而,更多的人说:"这是一部让孩子们学习中国传统文化的好电影。"根据上文This movie lasts for about 3 hours, so some people said that it suited older audience. 这部电影时长约 3 小时,因此有人说它适合年纪较大的观众,可知"更多的人说:"这是一部让孩子们学习中国传统文化的好电影。""为转折,空格后有逗号,应填转折连词however,首字母大写。故答案为:However
三、41.【答案】One possible version:
How time flies! More than two years has quickly passed. I have changed a lot during these years.
On the one hand, I was thin and short in the past, but now I'm strong and tall.And with the help of my parents,I have learned to do some housework ,such as cleaning my room,cooking and so on.
On the other hand, I have made many friends.We share our feelings with each other.I am not shy any longer and become more outgoing and confident. I didn't use to be good at learning English, but my English teacher taught me how to memorize new words and told me to read as much as possible.Soon I made great progress and became interested in English.
I have changed so much! Thanks to the teachers and friends, I have learnt so much! Never will I forget the valuable middle school life!
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文,要求以 " How I've Changed! "为题。写作内容包括过去和现在在外貌、性格、生活和学习的变化。 根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时和现在完成时,人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题,写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑,要符合英语的表达习惯。
【点评】这篇短文对过去和现在在外貌、性格、生活和学习的变化进行了逐一论述。内容全面、详尽,意思连贯,表达清楚,时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的 On the one hand …… On the other hand 等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强;使用的learn to do sth.学习做某事,be good at擅长,tell sb. to do sth.告诉某人做某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语,使表达更为流畅。
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