专题（六）书面表达
1．假定今天是六月十六日(星期六，天气晴朗)，你和朋友去沙湖游玩。请你根据下面所给提示写一篇日记，记录本次活动并简要谈谈感受。
提示：1）到达：上午九点；
2）活动：乘船参观鸟岛、骑马、踢球、游泳、吃午饭、唱歌、做游戏：
3）返回：下午三点半。
要求：1）词数80左右，已给出的句子不计入总词数；
2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3）紧扣要点，适当发挥。
Saturday, June16
Sunny
Today my friends and I
went to the Sand Lake.
2．森林是大自然的总调度。我们的生活也离不开树木。但是近年来，城市的环境越来越糟糕，原因就是人们过多地砍伐树木。请你根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿，呼吁人们保护树木。
提示：1）树木在保护环境方面的作用：吸收有害气体，是对抗空气污染的主要斗士；
2）树木在我们日常生活中的贡献：很多家具来自于木材，纸张来自于木材；
3）树木面临的问题。
Dear students,
As we all know trees are
very important in our lives. We can't live in the world without trees.
Thank you very much for
your listening.
3．请根据以下提示，写一篇70词左右的短文，介绍一下母亲节。
提示：1）五月份的第二个星期日是母亲节；
2）美国、英国以及其他很多国家的人们都庆祝母亲节；
3）人们在这一天会送给母亲礼物．以表达对母亲的爱；
4）在中国，人们也庆祝母亲节；
5）在母亲节这天，我通常会送给妈妈一些玫瑰花，并帮妈妈做些家务。
4．假如你是杂志社的一名主编,请根据下列提示以Guangzhou is calling为题写一篇文章向旅游爱好者们介绍广州。60词以上。
提示:
1）广州的地理位置;
2）广州的天气及交通;
3）广州著名的旅游景点（介绍一至两个）;
4）广州的美食。
Guangzhou is calling
5．疫情期间，全世界都在关注武汉。许多外国朋友也对这座城市很感兴趣。请你根据下列信息写一篇介绍武汉的文章。
An introduction to
Wuhan
地理位置 湖北省东部，长江中游
气候 冬冷夏热，雨量充足
城市特征 湖北省会，城市美丽，人民友好
旅游资源 景点众多......
写作要求：
⒈文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；
⒉表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
⒊字数要求80词左右（标题已给出，不计入总词数）
An introduction to Wuhan
6． 请你以"My Favorite Animal"为题目，写一篇短文分享你最喜欢的动物。
要求：1.包含表格中的所有要点，适当发挥，语句通顺，注意连贯：2.词数不少于70词。
My favorite Animal
Appeardncel (外表) Food Ablities Reasons why I like it/them
7． 假如你是李菲，下周英语课上老师会让同学们用英语讲述自己一天的生活。请你根据下面的提示词及自己的实际情况写一篇短文，为下周发言做准备。
要求：1. 语句通顺，逻辑连贯;2. 包含所给信息提示，可适当发挥;3. 60 词左右。
8． 书面表达，根据要求完成短文写作。
"我们不要忘记，每一位妈妈，都曾是花一样的少女。"随着电影《你好，李焕英》的热映，很 多同学翻出妈妈小时候的照片，讲妈妈过去的故事。假如你是Tanvi,请根据下列照片和英语提示，写一篇英语短文介绍你妈妈小时候做的事情。
cook wash clothes look after her brother
作文要求： (1)不能照抄原文；条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺； (2)词数60个左右。
Hey,I'm Tanvi! Do you know what my mother often did when she was young
9．假如你是李薇，你刚刚结识了一位英国籍笔友David。你想写一封电子邮件告诉他你的一些基本情况以及你小时候的事情。请根据下面的写作要点，完成你的电子邮件。
写作要点:1. 你出生时间、地点、过去的房子的样子及周围的东西。
2. 你以前就读的小学的情况，比如你的表现、你的老师和同学的情况等。
3. 你此刻的感想。
写作要求:1. 不得在作文中出现你的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数 70 个左右。作文开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
10．2023年的第19届亚运会(the Asian Games)在浙江杭州举行，绍兴也是亚运会比赛城市之一。你在亚运期间认识了一位新朋友，请按下图提示向你的同学介绍你的新朋友。
提示: （1）不得出现真实姓名和班级。（2）文章需包含图表中的所有信息，可以适当拓展，使行文流畅。（3）字数在60左右。
【答案】Saturday, June 16 Sunny
Today my friends and I went to the Sand Lake. When we arrived there at nine, we first
took a boat to visit the Bird Island. We saw lots of beautiful birds there.Then we came to the other side of the lake. We rode horses and played football for about one hour.
After that, we went swimming in the lake. It was cool and comfortable. At about twelve o'clock, we had a simple lunch by the lake. When lunch was over, we sang songs and played games. We started to go back at half past three. We had a wonderful time there.
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲式作文，也是应用文作文，在写作的时候注意应用文的格式，再就是所提供的材料一定要都是用不要缺失，时态上来说，因为是日记，应该以一般过去时为主要时态，最后注意段与段之间的衔接和过度，是文章具有整体性。
【点评】文章按照提纲详细的介绍了作者和朋友之间的活动，文章按照时间顺序去写，条理性很强，时间状语从句的使用是文章增色不少，比如 When we arrived there at nine, we first took a boat to visit the Bird Island. When lunch was over, we sang songs and played games 。
2．【答案】Dear students,
As we all know trees are very important in our lives. We can't live in the world without trees. Trees are major fighters against air pollution. They take in harmful gases and produce oxygen for us to breathe. Trees are important not only in protecting the environment but also in our daily lives. Many things in our daily lives come from wood. For example, our writing paper and lots of furniture are from wood. Trees are our friends. However, people are cutting down millions of trees every year. Looking around the city, air pollution is getting worse. If we don't want to live in a terrible world, why not work together to plant more trees and
protect them well
Thank you very much for your listening.
【解析】【分析】本文是一议论文，全文要用一般现在时进行描述，重点突出树木对于环保的作用和重要性。文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
【点评】 开篇即点明主题， As we all know trees are very important in our lives. We can't live in the world without trees. 文章使用非谓语动词做状语 Looking around the city ，使得语言灵活，并使用if引导的条件状语从句， If we don't want to live in a terrible world, why not work together to plant more trees and protect them well 语法规则正确，表达流畅。
3．【答案】 Mother's Day is a holiday for mothers. It is on the second Sunday in May.
People celebrate it in the USA, England and other countries. On that day, many people give
presents to their mothers to show their love. In China, people also celebrate Mother's Day. We do the same thing on that day form others.
I often send my mother some beautiful roses on Mother's Day and help my mother do some housework.
【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文，全文要用一般现在时进行描述，重点突出对母亲节的介绍，包括母亲节当天做的事情。文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节，写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化，写作要点已给出，不可以逐词翻译。
【点评】 开篇即点明主题， Mother's Day is a holiday for mothers. It is on the second Sunday in May ，文中适当运用不定式 to show their love 做目的状语，使得语言灵活，全文语法规则正确，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。
4．【答案】Guangzhou is calling
Guangzhou lies in the south of China. It is never too hot or too cold in Guangzhou, so it's comfortable to live or travel here. You can go to any place by bus or by underground. It's very convenient to travel here. One of the most famous places in Guangzhou is the Canton Tower. Also you can climb Baiyun Mountain and enjoy the fresh air. During your visit to Guangzhou, don't forget to try some delicious food. Guangzhou has something for everyone, so why not visit Guangzhou this year
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，注意时态是一般现在时，首先介绍广州的地理位置；然后介绍广州的天气和交通；最后介绍广州的旅行景点和美食。注意运用好词好句，同时注意恰当使用连词，使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
【点评】作文内容全面，运用好词好句，如：lie in；it+be+形容词+to do；one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数；forget to do；why not+do sth.等。状语从句、最高级、祈使句的运用为文章增色不少，如：It is never too hot or too cold in Guangzhou, so it's comfortable to live or travel here.One of the most famous places in Guangzhou is the Canton Tower.During your visit to Guangzhou, don't forget to try some delicious food. Guangzhou has something for everyone, so why not visit Guangzhou this year 等。连词and、or、so的运用使文章上下文联系更为紧密。
5．【答案】An introduction to Wuhan
Wuhan is a historical city in China. Now let me introduce it to you. Wuhan lies in the east of Hubei Province. It is located in the middle part/reaches of the Yangtze River so it is also known as "City on Rivers". The weather is cold in winter and hot in summer with plenty of rainfall. Because of its hot weather, Wuhan is famous as the "Stove City". Wuhan is the capital of Hubei Province. The city is very beautiful and people there are friendly. As one of the most popular tourist destinations in China, Wuhan attracts millions of tourists from all over the world every year. Visitors can enjoy cherry blossoms from March to April every year. (If you are interest in history or architecture, Yellow Crane Tower will be a good choice for history lovers.) You can also taste many delicious local food in Wuhan, such as hot-dry noodles and Doupi. Wuhan has something for everyone. Why not visit it
【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，要求以"An introduction to Wuhan"为题写一篇英语短文。写作中要包含所给的四个方面的内容，武汉的地理位置，气候，城市特征以及旅游资源。根据所给内容可知本文要用一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
【点评】这篇作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，如lie in the east of，be located in，be known as，plenty of 。高分句型一It is located in the middle part/reaches of the Yangtze River so it is also known as ""City on Rivers.高分句型二： If you are interest in history or architecture, Yellow Crane Tower will be a good choice for history lovers. 注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要正确使用一般现在时，以及一些衔接词,如and, as ,so, also , if 等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
6．【答案】I have a pet dog. Her name is Lisa. She is my favorite. She is only two years old. She has two big eyes, two round ears and curly brown hair. She is really cute and friendly, but sometimes kind of lazy. Her favorite food is meat. She always has meat for dinner. She likes to dance and play games with me. She also likes to follow me around the house and watch TV with me together. She is like a close friend to me, so I love her very much.
【解析】【分析】这是篇命题作文，要求以"My Favorite Animal"为题目，写一篇短文分享自己最喜欢的动物。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点评】这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将表格的所有内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，高级词汇如only two years old，kind of，play games with 阿爸等以及高级句型结构，如 She is really cute and friendly, but sometimes kind of lazy. She is like a close friend to me, so I love her very much.的运用为文章增色不少；使文章显得更加自然，流畅，显得更有档次。
7．【答案】One possible version:
I get up at 7:10 a. m. and then I have breakfast. I usually go to school by bus. and it takes me 15 minutes. I have six classes a day: four in the morning and two in the afternoon. After school, I usually walk home with my friends. In the evening, I usually do my homework and play games with my brother.
8．【答案】Hey, I'm Tanvi! Do you know what my mother often did when she was young Well, look at these pictures, and then you will know the answer. My mother lived in a village when she was a child. During summer holidays, she often helped my grandparents on the farm. At weekends, she helped to cook dinner, wash clothes and look after her brother. Oh, my mother was a really good girl when she was young.
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，"我们不要忘记，每一位妈妈，都曾是花一样的少女。"随着电影《你好，李焕英》的热映，很 多同学翻出妈妈小时候的照片，讲妈妈过去的故事。假如你是Tanvi,请根据下列照片和英语提示，写一篇英语短文介绍你妈妈小时候做的事情。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤：第一步，表明是哪天的天气预报，作为开头；第二步，分地区从"上午、下午的天气、温度"几方面来详细进行天气预报。
【点评】本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中look at看，at weekends在周末，help to do sth帮助做某事，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了when引导时间状语从句，Do you know what my mother often did when she was young，祈使句look at these pictures, and then you will know the answer，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少。
9．【答案】Dear David,
How are you I would like to tell you something about my past life. I was born in Gaoming. And I was born on May lst 2003. My house was big and clean. There was a small living room with a TV, a kitchen, a bathroom and two bedrooms.
In the past, I studied in No. 1 Primary School. It was small but beautiful with lots of trees. My English teacher was Miss He. She was very nice but strict in the class. My friends were Jenny and John. Jenny was good in class but John was a bit difficult. I am very happy in this class.
Thank you!
Yours
Li Wei
【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文作文，假如你是李薇，你刚刚结识了一位英国籍笔友David。你想写一封电子邮件告诉他你的一些基本情况以及你小时候的事情。请根据下面的写作要点，完成你的电子邮件。写作要点:1. 你出生时间、地点、过去的房子的样子及周围的东西。2. 你以前就读的小学的情况，比如你的表现、你的老师和同学的情况等。3. 你此刻的感想。本文时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
【点评】本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中would like to do sth.想做某事，be born出生
，lots of许多，be strict in严格要求 ，a bit有点儿，等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了高分句型：There was a small living room with a TV, a kitchen, a bathroom and two bedrooms.（there be结构）；She was very nice but strict in the class.（but表示转折）；Jenny was good in class but John was a bit difficult.（but引导的并列句）。
10．【答案】略
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文， 介绍你的朋友 ，突出介绍彼此的爱好，性格，年龄，所在学校，年级，班级等，所给材料内容比较详细，层次清楚，贴近学生生活，学生有话可写，不可生硬翻译，不可遗漏要点，最后检查所用时态 人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法，拼写，标点，移行，大小写等方面是否有误。
【点评】 描述人物，通常用一般现在时描述，人称用第三人称进行描述，行文时要注意人称时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。注意过渡词的搭配运用，语法运用准确，单词拼写正确，并适当使用非谓语动词，例如，be glad to introduce，和 In a word等短语，结构完整,条理清晰，使整个文章结构紧凑，以便出色的完成写作任务。同时多处使用宾语从句I think you will like him，使得整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。
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