陕西省西安市莲湖区
2022-2024年中考英语一模试题分类汇编
书面表达
2024年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
IX. 书面表达(共1题, 计15分)
假如你是李华, 去年国庆节期间, 你和你的朋友们去了不同的地方旅游, 度过了一个令人愉快的假期。请根据下表提示, 写一篇英语短文, 介绍你们的假期活动及其感受。
人 假期活动 感受
Jack 陕西(Shaanxi), 爬华山(climb Mount Hua) 很高, 很陡峭(steep);虽然很累, 但是很为自己骄傲 (take pride of)
Sarah 四川(Sichuan), 访成都(visit Chengdu) 参观城市和街道, 品美食(delicious food), 吃火锅(hot pot)的感觉太好了
Li Hua 北京(Beijing): 爬长城(the Great Wall) ……
提示
1. 参考提示内容, 可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数)。
My friends and I went on a trip to different places during the National Day Holiday. After returning home, we shared what we did and how _______________________________________
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We all had a good time during the National Day Holiday.
2023年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
IX. 书面表达（共1题, 计15分）
61. 初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习生活中，哪个人最让你难以忘记？请你以“The Person I Will Never Forget”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿至学校英语校报栏目“I experience, I enjoy, I share”。
1. 参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数不少于70。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
The Person I Will Never Forget
1 Who is the person 2. What is he/she like 3. How did the person help or influence you 4. What do you think of the person
The Person I Will Never Forget
Junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back at these past three years,
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2022年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
IX.书面表达（共1题，计15分）
61. 你们学校正在开展“感恩父母”的系列教育活动。请根据以下表格提示内容，给你们学校的英文报写一篇演讲稿。
Topic Learning to get along with our parents
Problems between children and parents don’t like to talk with parents, argue with parents...
Ways to solve the problems respect parents, do some housework at home...
要求：
1.参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Good morning, everyone! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
答案：
2024年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
One possible version :
My friends and I went on a trip to different places during the National Day Holiday . After returning home , we shared what we did and how we felt with each other.
Jack went to Shaanxi to climb Mount Hua. He said Mount Hua is so high that it made him feel surprised. He was tired when he climbed to the top , but he took pride in himself very much . Sarah traveled to Sichuan and visited Chengdu . She tasted different kinds of delicious food there . She said she felt wonderful about the hot pot there. As for me , I climbed the Great Wall in Beijing. When I saw the Great Wall , I felt amazed . After I finished climbing it , I was excited and proud of myself. I was a real man after climbing the Great Wall .
We all had a good time during the National Day Holiday .
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍三位同学和自己的假期活动以及感受。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take pride in对……感到自豪
②different kinds of不同种类的
③as for至于
[高分句型]
①After returning home, we shared what we did and how we felt with each other. (宾语从句)
②When I saw the Great Wall, I felt amazed. (when引导的时间状语从句)
2023年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
61．例文
The Person I Will Never Forget
Junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back at these past three years, the most memorable person is Mr. Li, my English teacher.
He is a young man with glasses. He is always patient with us. We all like him.
When I started my junior high school, I could hardly understand him in class because I was too shy to ask anything. As a result, I failed the exam for the first time. Luckily, Mr. Li encouraged me a lot. Thanks to his support, my English has improved quickly.
I am really thankful to Mr. Li. He is the best teacher that I have ever met. I want to tell him I’ll never forget him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应结合提示要求并以“The Person I Will Never Forget”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿至学校英语校报栏目“I experience, I enjoy, I share”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明我难以忘记的人是谁；
第二步，介绍这个人的外貌以及他是如何帮助你或者影响你的；
第三步，总结，表明自己对这个人的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①come to an end结束
②be patient with对……有耐心
③As a result结果
④for the first time第一次
[高分句型]
①When I started my junior high school, I could hardly understand him in class because I was too shy to ask anything.（when引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）
②He is the best teacher that I have ever met.（that引导定语从句）
2022年陕西省西安市莲湖区中考一模英语试题
61．例文
Good morning, everyone! Today my topic is “Learning to get along with our parents”. These days, many students feel it’s hard to get along with parents. They often argue with parents, and they don’t like to talk with them.
How can we solve the problems Well, first, we should respect our parents. They care for us all the time. Second, we are supposed to do some housework at home. We should help clean the room, cook meals and so on. Third, we should care for them, spend time with them, and have a talk with them.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“学着与父母相处”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题，描述孩子和父母之间的问题；第二段介绍如何解决这些问题；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
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