Module 8 Accidents 书面表达 专练（含解析）外研版版英语八年级上册
1．安全对每个人都很重要。中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。请你根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的作文。
提示内容：
（1）交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红灯；
（2）食品安全：吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品；
（3）活动安全：进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己，不私自下河游泳。
要求:（1）词数：100左右。正文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）作文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
（3）文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
参考词汇：焦点focus 遵守obey
交通规则traffic rules
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2．根据提示写一篇60词左右的英语短文。
提示：几个男孩在街上踢足球，一位老人提着篮子经过，被飞来的足球击中，老人的帽子和篮子掉落在地。孩子们向老人认错，老人原谅了他们，并嘱咐他们不要在街上踢足球。
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3．请根据下面的提示，写一篇以“An Accident”为题的记叙文，词数：70左右。
1. 踢足球时，摔倒，双腿受伤；
2. 同学们送我去医院；
3. 住院期间，一些同学来看我，帮我复习功课；
4. 我返校后很快赶上别人，所有考试及格；
5. 感谢同学们的帮助，今后我也会尽力去帮助身边的人。
An Accident
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4． 根据以下四幅图和提示词语，写一篇语法正确，意思连贯的短文。
要求：1.用第三人称叙述
2.词数60-80左右
3.提示词语：play, street, car, policeman, stop, dangerous save, in time thank, tell, pay attention to(注意)
5．假定你是李华，由于新冠肺炎疫情，你居家学习了三个多月。请你给你的美国笔友Tom写封信，要点如下：
1.居家期间你的日常学习活动；
2.你对网课老师的感谢；
3.你对居家学习的感想。
注意：1.词数80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：新冠肺炎疫情the COVID 19 epidemic
Dear Tom,
I had to study at home for more than 3 months because of the COVID 19 epidemic.
How about you
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．Safety is Very Important to Everyone
Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are the flowers of our country, so students’ safety is the focus of everyone’s attention.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red.
Second, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruit and vegetables.
Besides, don’t hurt ourselves while we are exercising. It’s dangerous to swim in the river alone, so don’t go swimming without permission.
In a word, life is all, and safety is the first. As students, please remember all the above. They’re really important to us.
【分析】这篇书面表达主要是写学生在交通、食品和活动中的安全问题。
【详解】这是篇材料作文。在内容方面需要根据要点从交通安全、食品安全和活动安全三个方面入手；语言上要注意时态以一般现在时为主，第一人称，要注意单词、短语的准确性，句式简洁性以及句子间的连贯性；写作后，修改润色。首先检查单词，标点的准确；其次要注意格式的正确，一定要保证字数够。
2．例文：
It was Sunday, Tom and his friends were playing football on the street. An old man with a basket happened to pass by when Tom was passing the ball to one of his teammates. The ball hit the old man, his hat and basket fell to the ground. Tom ran to the old man quickly, he said sorry to the man. Luckily, the old man didn’t get hurt. The other boys helped to pick up the hat and the basket. The old man told them that it was dangerous to play on the street. The boys felt very sorry and promised not to do that again. At last, the old man forgave them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题，表述几个男孩在街上玩足球；
第二步，表述足球击中老人的具体过程及结果；
第三步，表述男孩们对事件的认识和感触。
[亮点词汇]
①on the street在街上
②pass by路过
③say sorry to对……道歉
[高分句型]
①An old man with a basket happened to pass by when Tom was passing the ball to one of his teammates.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②The old man told them that it was dangerous to play in the street.（that引导的宾语从句）
3．例文：
An Accident
Last Saturday I played football with my friends. When I was running towards the ball, I was kicked and fell down on the field. I could not get up because my feet hurt. My classmates called an ambulance and they accompanied me to hospital.
When I was at hospital, some classmates visited me and helped me with my schoolwork. So I was able to catch up with others at school after I recovered, and I passed my examination.
It was kind of my classmates to have helped me, and I will do my best to help others in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据给出的写作要点介绍这次事故，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，介绍意外是如何发生的；
第二步，介绍住院期间，同学给的帮助；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感激之情。
[亮点词汇]
①play football踢足球
②fall down摔倒
③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
④catch up with追赶上
[高分句型]
①When I was at hospital, some classmates visited me and helped me with my schoolwork. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②So I was able to catch up with others at school after I recovered, and I passed my examination. (after引导的时间状语从句)
4．Last Monday, Tim and his friend played football along the street. When Tim wanted to get the ball ,a car was driving fast to Tim. An accident would happen . His friend was too afraid to see that. He covered his eyes with his hands. just at that time, a policeman appeared. He caught Tim in time. Luckily, Tim was able to avoid an accident. He thanked the policeman a lot. The policeman told them that they shouldn’t play football in the street. It was very dangerous. They should pay attention next time. Tim and his friend knew that they were worng. They said they would not do that again.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇看图作文。要求介绍两个小朋友在街上踢足球，一辆车疾驰而来，幸亏警察及时抓住了那个男孩，才避免了一起事故。
【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。能正确的运用过去时态，词汇和句型句式运用恰当。
考点：看图作文。
5．例文：
Dear Tom,
I had to study at home for more than 3 months because of the COVID 19 epidemic. I was very busy every weekday. From 8：00 to 17：00, I had to sit in front of my computer to take lessons. In fact, my teachers were much busier. They spent more time and energy preparing lessons, teaching us and checking our homework online. Many thanks for what they had done for us. To be honest, I really don’t like to study online. It was quite bad for our eyes. What’s more, it made me feel lonely, because I couldn’t stay with my classmates. It was not even convenient to have a talk with them. How I really hope to return to school!
How about you 　
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文，题目要求是给你美国笔友Tom写封信，向他介绍一下由于新冠肺炎疫情，你居家期间的日常学习活动；你对上网课老师的感谢；你对居家学习的感想。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；词数80～100。
2.写作指导：本文是一篇书信，信的开头、结尾已给出，我们首先要承接开头，引出话题，介绍居家期间自己日常学习活动；然后介绍自己对上网课老师的感谢；最后介绍自己对居家学习的感想。时态以一般过去时为主，人称使用第一人称介绍。写作时，要注意准确运用时态，要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可，表述要准确，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句要符合英语的表达习惯。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
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