Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语九年级全册
1．关爱家人，从点滴做起。请就下图内容用英语写一篇短文，描述你和爸爸在刚刚过去的“三八妇女节”这天为妈妈做的事。
要求：1.必须包含所有图片的信息，并做适当拓展；
2.谈谈你对此事的看法；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名、地名及其他相关信息；
4.书写工整，语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
On Women’s Day, I wanted to do something for my mother. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．李硕今年五岁，他的妈妈疫情期间去支援武汉。请根据下面四幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文。
say goodbye kiss his mother
receive a warm welcome give her a big hug
注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going Wuhan to help patients there.
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3．书面表达
如今，中学生的学习时间长，压力大。上周你班学生对如何减压放松进行了讨论。大家提出了许多种减压放松的方法。请你以“How to Get Relaxed”为题，写一篇短文。
要求：1. 短文必须包括以上要点，并谈谈自己的看法；2. 词数80左右，文章题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Get Relaxed
Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed. ________________________________________________________________________
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4．家是心灵的港湾，人生的驿站；是感情的归宿，灵魂的延续……请以A Time When I Made My Parents Happy为题，记录你快乐家庭生活中的某个小花絮。
要求：1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2. 不少于60词。
提示：1. When was it
2. What did you say or do
3. Why did it make your parents happy
4. How did you feel at that moment
A Time When I Made My Parents Happy
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5．亲爱的同学，假如你是 Alex, 初中生活即将结束，你所向往的高中生活即将来临。由于疫情（epidemic situation) 原因，你将代表（represent) 初三毕业生，做一个网络直播演讲。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：1、文章语句通顺，句式多样。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3、文中不得出现真实姓名、学校和班级。
4、词数：100词左右。
Dear ladies and gentlemen，
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That's all for my speech. Thank you for your attention!
6．同学们，回想这三年的初中生活，你一定感慨万千。在初中毕业典礼上，学校将举行“感恩教育仪式”，请你根据以下提示，用英语为该活动写一篇短文，简述这三年来要感恩的人和事，以及你的感想和未来打算。
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Saying thanks to you
How time flies! Three years has passed since I came to the secondary school. During the past three years, I have gained a lot and grown a lot. I must say thanks to many people who have helped me.
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7．在苏翊鸣北京冬奥夺冠后，记者得知他收到最好的生日礼物是父母在他四岁时送他的雪板。可见最好的礼物并不在于它的价格是否昂贵，而在于它的特殊意义。
某英文网站正在开展以“The Best Gift”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语给该网站写一篇征文，谈谈你收到的最好礼物是什么，谁送给你这件礼物及你为什么认为这是最好的礼物。
提示词语： book, father, love, clever, happy...
提示问题： What is the best gift you have received
Who gave it to you
Why do you think it is the best gift
So far, I have received a lot of gifts. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．时光荏苒，回望充满很多回忆的成长之路，也一定是你的蜕变之路。请结合生活实际，谈谈对你影响最大的一次改变和自己的感受。
要求：
1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名。
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9．Write at least 60 words about the topic “His/Her/Their ________ Warmed My Heart.”(以“他/她/他们的 ________ 温暖了我”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个字的短文，标点符号不占格)
困难时期，志愿者们的帮助；孤独时，朋友的陪伴；沮丧时，师长的鼓励……
我们总是被很多善意围绕着, 让我们感到温暖。请先补全题目，然后结合自己的经历，谈谈你的感悟。
（注意：短文中不得出现姓名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。）
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10．凡人微光，处处闪烁。4月底以来，在疫情防控、社区守护、物资保供等方面，数万普通人站出来担当志愿者，共同守护家园。
某英文网站正在开展为社区防疫工作者写一封感谢信的征文活动。假如你是李华，请结合你在社区、村镇的所见所闻，为这些可敬的“凡人英雄”写一封感谢信，表达你对他们的敬意并谈谈你的感受和收获。
提示词语：community，check identification(身份)，take a COVID-19 test，respect，proud
提示问题：
·What did you see
·How do you feel
·What have you learned from them
Dear heroes,
I’m writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to all of you for your hard work.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
11．我们的心中都住着英雄，他（们）也许是救死扶伤的医生，是勇夺金牌的冠军，是飞身火海的消防员，是见义勇为的路人，还也许是默默付出的亲人、伙伴……假设你是李华，请写一封信说说你心中的英雄，表达你的敬意，聊聊他（们）的事（举动）对你的影响。
要求：1.行文连贯，条理清晰，不得出现真实的学校、姓名等信息；
2.短文词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
A Letter to My Hero(es)
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．例文：
On Women’s Day, I wanted to do something for my mother. I told my idea to my father and asked for his help. My father was pleased and agreed quickly. We thought for a while and made a list of things we should do.
To start with, I swept the floor, and my father washed the clothes and cleaned the windows carefully. After that, my father started to cook and I helped to lay the table. When my mother saw the table with so many dishes and drinks, she was moved to tears and gave them a big hug.
Mothers always do a great deal of things for us and we’re supposed to be thankful to them. I’m greatly sure that we should care about our family and spend more time staying with them.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文，要求根据图片描述“三八妇女节”时为妈妈做的事情，并发表自己的感想。
2.写作指导：本文结合使用第一人称和第三人称进行写作，描述事件时，采用一般过去时，发表看法时，采用一般现在时。可分为三段，第一段承接开头，描述图一的内容，即把想法告诉了爸爸；第二段结合图二、三、四，描写都帮妈妈做了什么；第三段发表感想。写作时注意主谓一致和时态，力求无语法和拼写错误。
2．例文：
Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going Wuhan to help patients there. His father took him to say goodbye to her. One day, he saw his mother on TV while she was away. He missed her so much that he kissed his mother across the TV screen. When the outbreak was under control, his mother came back with other medical workers. They received a warm welcome. As soon as his mother got home, Li Shuo gave her a big hug. How he misses his mother!
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题属于看图作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据图画内容并结合文字提示，发挥想象来写一篇英语作文。写作时要包含每幅图片的主要信息并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，根据图画及文字提示，以一般过去时讲述了李硕的妈妈去武汉抗疫到回来的过程中的几个细节。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：say goodbye to sb.；across the TV screen；be under control；come back；medical workers；receive a warm welcome；give sb. a hug。
句型：while引导的时间状语从句；so ... that引导的结果状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；as soon as引导的时间状语从句；以how开头的感叹句。
3．How to Get Relaxed
Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed. We got a lot of ways to relax such as playing sports, listening to music, seeing films, traveling and communicating with parents and friends.
In my opinion, the best way to relax is playing sports. Many of us stay in the classroom almost the whole day without any exercise, which is bad for our health and also makes us feel blue. Therefore, we should exercise every day to keep a balance between study and sports.
【详解】这是一篇话题作文，要求将讨论出的减压方式表述出来，并发表自己的看法．首先列出所提供的减压的方法，然后谈谈自己认为的最好的减压方法。主要用一般过去时、一般现在时，第一人称。表达上周我们的讨论用一般过去时，表达我的观点时用一般现在时，写作过程中，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型】Many of us stay in the classroom almost the whole day without any exercise, which is bad for our health and also makes us feel blue.
我们很多人几乎一整天都呆在教室里不运动，这对我们的健康有害，也让我们感到忧郁。
which is bad for our health and also makes us feel blue.是由which 引导的非限制性定语从句。
【点睛】图表作文写作把握几点：
1. 要认真解读图标，切勿疏漏重要内容信息和细节提示，不必每个内容都涉及，但重要内容必须提到。
2. 对图表中的内容分析、内容说明一定要简明扼要，尽量使用简单句，因为复杂的句式往往起不到清晰表达的效果。
3. 结论性的表达要从图表信息分析或内容归纳而来，这样才能使得语言有说服力，切忌主观判断，更不能主观臆造。
4．例文：
A Time When I Made My Parents Happy
It was Mother’s Day last year. I got up early on that day, and decided to prepare a gift for my mother. I went to the kitchen to cook breakfast for my mother. Although it was just bread and milk, I tried my best and put my heart in it. After finishing it, I went to my parents’ bedroom and gave them a big surprise. They were so moved and happy, especially my mother. At that moment, I felt proud of myself.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料写作，结合所给提示，第一部分写具体的事件；第二部分描写让父母开心的原因；最后写自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来回忆具体事件，时态采用一般过去时为主；结合所给要点，将事件叙述完整，保证条理清晰；注意避免用词的重复，巧妙运用多种句式。
5．例文：
Dear ladies and gentlemen,
Beacause of the epidemic situation, I’m glad to represent all the graduates and make an online speech here. When I look back on the past three years, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to show my experience to you. I remember I was a shy girl in my Junior School, my teachers and classmates gave me a lot of encouragement and I have learned how to be outgoing. I also want to express my thanks to my teachers, classmates and parents.
First, I want to thank my parents. They provide a happy life for me. They do much for me and give me so much love. Second, I want to thank my teachers. They are hard-working. When I have problems with my study, they are so patient and helpful. Third, I want to thank my classmates. They make me feel less lonely. I will remember the days when we play and study together.
In the years to come, I will go all out to do everything well for a brighter future. I will study hard and be a useful person to the society.
That's all for my speech. Thank you for your attention!
【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。主要是描写初中三年的生活以及感谢和憧憬未来生活，要根据题目中所给的内容提示详细描写。写作时要运用正确的英语把要写的内容表达出来，要选用恰当的词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。
2.写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时和将来时，人称用第一人称展开介绍。文章可分四段描写。第一段总述初中生活的经历；第二段描写要感谢的人和事；第三段是对未来生活的打算以及如何去实现；最后结束文章。注意文章描写要具体，思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，意思通俗易懂。
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例文：
Saying thanks to you
How time flies! Three years has passed since I came to the secondary school. During the past three years, I have gained a lot and grown a lot. I must say thanks to many people who have helped me.
First, I should say thanks to my dear parents. They provide everything I need for me. They take good care of me without any complaint. They work hard to support the whole family. They are always trying their best to make me live a better life.
Second, I’m thankful to all my teachers for their great help and support. They are patient enough to spends lots of time explaining problems to me. Besides, they always encourage me when I am in trouble. It’s unselfish of them to devote their time to education.
Finally, I also feel grateful to my friends and classmates. We work together and share happiness and worries with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. As a result, we have made great progress.
I think I’m lucky to have so much love and care. I will never forget these happy days. I am going to do better in the future so that they can be proud of me.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，根据题干提示，感恩父母、老师、朋友和同学，并谈谈自己未来的打算。
2. 写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称和第三人称。写作时可按照“总分总”的结构，首先点明要感谢那些曾帮助过自己的人，然后分段表达自己对父母、老师、朋友和同学的感激之情，最后进行总结和阐述未来的打算。注意行文连贯、条理清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
7．例文
So far, I have received a lot of gifts. However, the best gift I have ever received is a book. The book plays a very important role in my life.
When I was 10 years old, my father bought the book for me. That was Harry Potter. The book was so interesting that I lost myself in it. From then on, I began to love reading. Now, reading has become my good habit. It not only opens my mind but also makes me clever and happy. The book is really the best gift for me.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求学生们以李华的身份给某英文网站写一篇征文，谈谈自己收到的最好礼物是什么，谁送的这件礼物以及为什么认为这是最好的礼物。
2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称为主叙述，时态应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时应注意题目中给出的问题和词语的提示，以问题为提纲，在自己的文章中使用上所给的提示词。表达中应注意英语句式结构的特点以及表达习惯和汉语的不同，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他句式，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。
8．例文
Life is full of ups and downs. For me, learning from unavoidable difficulties and making changes are the most important and meaningful.
Last year, I went abroad for sightseeing with my parents. While traveling, I was so excited about the attractive scenery that I failed to stay close to my parents and lost my way. Tears and fear turned out to be useless, so I had to keep cool and depend on myself. By reading the map carefully and asking the local people for help, I succeeded in finding the police station and the problem was solved soon.
From the experience, I’ve changed a lot. I become more independent and braver, because I know independence and courage can help me overcome difficulties and get prepared for the challenges ahead.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，谈谈对你影响最大的一次改变和自己的感受；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应根据话题提示要点，发挥想象，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。总写，改变的意义；
第二步，具体阐述遇到的困难和事情的经过。
第三步，书写感受，结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of ups and downs充满了起伏
②be excited about对……感到兴奋
③turn out结果是，证明是
④depend on依靠
⑤succeed in doing sth. 成功地做某事
overcome difficulties and get prepared for the challenges ahead 克服困难，为未来的挑战做好准备。
[高分句型]
①learning from unavoidable difficulties and making changes are the most important and meaningful.（动名词作主语）
②While traveling, I was so excited about the attractive scenery that I failed to stay close to my parents and lost my way.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
③I become more independent and braver, because I know independence and courage can help me overcome difficulties and get prepared for the challenges ahead.（原因状语从句）
④Tears and fear turned out to be useless, so I had to keep cool and depend on myself（so连接的并列句）
9．例文：
Her Actions Warmed My Heart
Today, I want to say thanks to my best friend Tina.
She is a lovely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly to everyone. Also, she enjoys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class. With her help, I am good at English now.
Thank you, my dear friend. Her actions warmed my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
①本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括基本信息、具体的事例和对自己的影响，注意不得出现个人真实信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍温暖自己的这个人是谁；
第二步，具体介绍这个人的基本信息以及温暖自己的事情；
第三步，书写结语，表达对朋友的感谢，呼应标题。
[亮点词汇]
①say thanks to sb向某人说谢谢
②be friendly to sb对某人友好
③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well.(find it +adj+to do结构)
②When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class.(when引导时间状语从句)
10．One possible version:
Dear heroes,
I’m writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to all of you for your hard work. Recently, as volunteers in our community, you are busy organizing people to stand in a line and checking identification of them when they need to take a COVID-19 test.
I am so proud of you. I want to express my respect for you because of your patience, kindness and the selfless spirit.
From what you did, I’ve learned that I can do many things to serve people and make my efforts to help others. In a word, please accept my thanks and my best wishes for you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。题目要求向疫情中的“凡人英雄”写一封感谢信。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段谈谈自己在社区的所见所闻；第二段表达自己的感情和尊敬；最后一段介绍自己的收获。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
11．例文：
A Letter to My Hero(es)
Dear Sir or Madam,
Since the epidemic broke out in Wuhan in December, the number of people infected and patients who have died has kept climbing. During this epidemic, a number of doctors and nurses rushed to the front line to fight the epidemic. They used their professional knowledge to let us know about the virus and build up our confidence to defeat it. They deserve all the respect and love! Their behaviors deeply affect me. They are my role models. I will learn from their spirit of responsibility and selflessness and study hard. I will try my best to be a better person and make a contribution to my homeland.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求给自己心中的英雄写一封信，致敬英雄，阐述他们对自己的影响。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称和第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，只给出了文章的主题，具体的细节信息需要学生们发挥想象力进行补充。首先学生们可以联系自己的日常生活，想想自己身边的英雄，他们做了哪些事，对你有什么影响。如学生们可以结合2020年初爆发的新冠疫情中出现的英雄，表达自己对英雄的敬意。
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