Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science.
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
愿望、理想
谈论未来的打算
与本单元话题相关的书面表达一般是谈论未来的打算。能用be going to，want to，hope to，expect to，be ready to，plan to谈论未来生活的计划与愿望，内容包括未来想要从事的职业或梦想及怎样实现梦想。在写作过程中，学生应做到以下几点：
1. 能描述自己的梦想或目标，并介绍为实现这一梦想或目标而制定的计划；
2. 能用be going to，want to，hope to，expect to，be ready to，plan to谈论未来生活的计划与愿望，内容包括未来想要从事的职业或梦想及怎样实现梦想；
3. 能对未来有所憧憬；
4.叙述要有条理，先叙述未来的计划和打算，再叙述打算采取的行动，在谈论行动时要分清主次且按先后顺序进行；
总—分—总法写计划
◆ 总：综述自己的愿望；
◆ 分：介绍为实现这一梦想或目标而制定的计划；
◆ 总：对未来的憧憬。
【词汇积累】
1. cook 厨师　　　　
2. engineer 工程师
3. violinist 小提琴手
4. pianist 钢琴家
5. pilot 飞行员
6. computer programmer 计算机程序设计员;编程人员
7. take up 开始从事；占用
8. grow up 成熟；长大
9. make sure 确保;查明
10. be sure about 确信;对……有把握
11. be able to 能够做某事
12. have to do with 关于；与……有关系
13. make the soccer team 组建足球队
14. get lots of exercise 多进行体育锻炼
15. practice basketball every day　每天练习打篮球
16. eat healthier food吃更健康的食物
17. learn education/medicine/computer science学习教/医药/电脑科学
18. be good at writing stories 擅长写故事
19. take singing / acting lessons 上唱歌/表演课
20. learn another foreign language 学习另一种外语，学习第二外语
三、句型积累
1. I am going to be a writer, because I like reading storybooks. 我要成为一名作家，因为我喜欢读故事书。
2. I’m going to exercise more and eat less junk food. 我打算多多锻炼并少吃垃圾食品。
3. It’s not easy to become a doctor, so I make a plan for it.
4. I will limit the time I spend watching TV to one hour per day. 我打算限制我看电视的时间至每天一小时。
5. I plan to get more exercise to improve my physical health.
6. To get into the best medical school, I need to get good grades. 为了进入最好的医科大学，我需要取得好成绩。
7. I am going to try my best to make my dream come true.
8. I want to he an engineer. 我想当一名工程师。
9. I’m going to practice basketball every day. 我打算每天练习篮球
10. I’m going to keep on writing stories. 我打算坚持写故事。
11. Many resolutions have to do with self-improvement. 许多决心和自身提高有关系。
◆开头句
①I'm glad to know that you want to be a doctor when you grow up.Here is my advice.
②Here I want to share my three resolutions with you.
③I'm going to take up a new hobby.
◆中间句
①You should keep on doing exercise.
②You must work hard at school and get good grades if you want to be a doctor in the future.
③You should read more books on medicine in your spare time so that you can learn more about medicine.
④I'm going to care more about my friends and help them more to improve my relationships with them.
⑤I'm going to listen to teachers more carefully in class and do my homework better to get better grades.
◆结尾句
①I really hope your dream will come true.
②I'm sure I can achieve my resolutions if I try my best.
③Just make sure you try your best. Then you can be anyone you want!
【谚语积累】
1.A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
2.Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者事竟成。
假如你是林宏，昨天晚上你收到了你的美国朋友Sam的邮件，他告诉你将来他想成为一名医生，但是他不知道该怎么做，所以想请你帮他出谋划策。请你给他回一封80词左右的英语邮件，提出你的建议。
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【审题指导】
1．文体：应用文(邮件)；
2．时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；
3．注意事项：注意段落布局并恰当使用复合句或连接词来增加得分点。
【思路点拨】
【组句成篇】
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to know that you want to be a doctor when you grow up. Here is my advice.
Firstly, you must work hard at school and get good grades if you want to be a doctor in the future. You can enter a top medical school if you get a quite high mark in the exam. Secondly, you should read more books on medicine in your spare time so that you can learn more about medicine. Thirdly, you should keep on doing exercise to keep strong. Being a good doctor not only needs rich knowledge，but also a strong body. Then you can deal with the hard and tiring work.
I really hope your dream will come true.
(一)与职业有关的词汇
1. 电脑程序员 _____________________________________________
2. 工程师 _____________________________________________
3. 篮球运动员 _____________________________________________
4. 科学家 _____________________________________________
5. 公交司机 _____________________________________________
6. 飞行员 _____________________________________________
7. 厨师 _____________________________________________
8. 医生 _____________________________________________
9. 教师 _____________________________________________
10. 小提琴家 _____________________________________________
11. 钢琴家 _____________________________________________
12. 演员 _____________________________________________
13. 作家 _____________________________________________
14. 歌手 _____________________________________________
(二)与计划有关的短语
1. 上表演课 _____________________________________________
2. 学习另一种语言 _____________________________________________
3. 每天练习打篮球 _____________________________________________
4. 上烹饪学校 _____________________________________________
5. 学习弹钢琴 _____________________________________________
6. 组建足球队 _____________________________________________
7. 取得好成绩 _____________________________________________
8. 吃更健康的食物 _____________________________________________
9. 做大量的锻炼 _____________________________________________
10. 完成高中和大学学业 _____________________________________________
11. 坚持写故事 ______________________________________________
12. 改善身体健康 _____________________________________________
13. 学习教育/数学/医药/电脑科学 _____________________________________________
(三)其他重要短语
1. 长大；成熟 _____________________________________________
2. 确信；对……有把握 _____________________________________________
3. 确保；查明 _____________________________________________
4. 能够做某事 _____________________________________________
5. 在……开始 _____________________________________________
6. 写下；记录下 _____________________________________________
7. 关于；与……有关系 _____________________________________________
8. 开始从事；占用 _____________________________________________
9. 同意；赞成 _____________________________________________
10. 擅长(做)…… _____________________________________________
11. 尽力 _____________________________________________
12. 由于这个原因 _____________________________________________
二、句子积累
写作微技能：＂1＋n＂拓展写作法
例：Mike wants to be a writer when he grows up. He is good at writing. He is going to write more articles and send his articles to magazines. He expects to be another Mo Yan.
1. Tina wants to be a singer.
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2. Stephen wants to be a teacher.
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3. Mary wants to be a doctor.
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4. Dave wants to be a reporter.
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三、以读促写
根据短文内容、首字母或所给汉语提示，写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。每空限填一词。
My Friends’ Plans for the Future
I’m an outgoing girl and I like making friends. And I have two pen friends from 1 (外国的) countries.
Alice, a 20-year-old girl, lives in 2 (伦敦), UK. Both of her parents would like her to be a d 3 when she g 4 up. However, Alice thinks it’s boring to work in the hospital. She wants to be a professional w 5 after she finishes 6 (大学). She is good at writing and still k 7 on writing even she has to spend time on her 8 (功课) now. She writes 9 (文章) and 10 (邮寄；发送) them to magazines and newspapers. She expects to be another Mo Yan. Though she doesn’t make s 11 if her dream can come true, she has to try her b 12 .
Bob is from Pennsylvania, USA, a state becomes 13 (著名的) because of Kobe, a wonderful NBA star. Kobe is his idol. That’s why he hopes to become a basketball p 14 . Bob is going to eat healthier food so that he can be taller and stronger. Bob also plan to go to basketball camp to 15 (提高) his skill where he is a 16 to practice basketball every day. He believes his dream can come true as l 17 as he works hard.
What’s your plan for the future And how are you going to do that Please write to and tell me about it.
【答案】
一、词汇积累
(一)与职业有关的词汇
1.computer programmer 2.engineer 3.basketball player 4.scientist　5.bus driver　6.pilot　7.cook　8.doctor　9.teacher　10.violinist 11. pianist 12.actor　13.writer　14.singer
(二)与计划有关的短语
1. take acting lessons 2. learn another language 3. practice basketball every day　
4. go to a cooking school　 5. learn to play the piano　6. make the soccer team　
7. get good grades　 8. eat healthier food　 9.do lots of exercise　
10. finish high school and college 11. keep on writing stories 12. improve one’s physical health　
13. learn education/math/medicine/computer science
(三)其他重要短语
1.grow up 2.be sure about　3.make sure 4.be able to do sth.　5.at the beginning of
6.write down　 7.have to do with 8.take up　9.agree with 10.be good at　
11.try one’s best　12.for this reason
二、句子积累
1. Tina wants to be a singer. She has a beautiful voice. She often shows in the school music festival. She hopes to be a great singer like Na Ying.　
2. Stephen wants to be a teacher. He is a helpful and friendly boy. He is always ready to help others. He studies really hard and expects to get good grades.　
3. Mary wants to be a doctor. She volunteers to help sick people in local hospital. She is good at schoolwork and she is going to study medicine in university.　
4. Dave wants to be a reporter. He is outgoing and likes to talk with people. He is going to work in a TV station after he finishes college.
三、以读促写
1. foreign 2. London 3. doctor 4. grows 5. writer 6. college/university 7. keeps
8. schoolwork 9. articles 10. sends 11. sure 12. best 13. famous 14. player 15. improve
16. able 17. long
（一）
1．青春，是心里有火，眼里有光，我们这一代人的想象力，不足以想象你们的未来！青春路上，你对未来职业的憧憬是什么？请你以“I want to be a/an...”为题写一篇短文。须涵盖以下几个内容：
1. What is your dream job
2. Where are you going to work
3. Which motto(座右铭) encourages you most
4. Why do you like this job
5. How will you get your future dream job
6.....
要点提示：
1. 80-100词。
2. 请你根据以上要求，结合自己的实际情况写出你的观点，并适当发挥。
3. 文章中不得出现真实人名和校名。
4. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
I want to be a/an...
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【解题思路】
本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连贯和过渡，涵盖所给提示。
【满分作文】
I want to be a teacher.
I have a dream. I want to be a teacher at the middle school where I studied.
The motto encourages me most is “Teachers’ biggest happiness is to see the children grow up!” I think teachers are very important people in our life. They teach us knowledge. The help us with our study. They give us confidence. If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very kind and patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting.
To be a teacher, I’ll work hard from now on and get good grades in my study. I won’t give up my dream. I think it will come true soon.
（二）
2．假如学校本周要进行英语演讲比赛，主题为“My Dream”。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿向大家介绍你的梦想。
提示：1. What do you want to be
2. Why do you want to be a(n)...
3. How are you going to be a(n)...
要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m happy I can share my dream with all of you here.
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【解题思路】
审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般将来时为主，以一般现在时为辅来叙述。写作时承接开头，要写出梦想是什么，为什么有这个梦想，怎样做才能实现梦想，最后谈一谈自己的感受。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
【满分作文】
Hello, everyone! I’m happy I can share my dream with all of you here. I’m going to be a writer when I grow up. The reason is that I’m very creative and I like reading and writing.
To be a writer, I’m going to read more books written by famous writers because I can learn a lot from them. I’m going to keep on writing articles and send them to magazines.
No pains, no gains. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day.
Thank you.
（三）
3．人人都有梦想，假设你是埃米，请以“My Dream Job”为题写一篇短文，畅想一下你的未来。内容包括：
1. 你想做什么样的工作？
2. 你喜欢这项工作的原因是什么？
3. 为这个工作你准备了什么或应该怎样做好准备？
作文要求：1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
My Dream Job
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【解题思路】
此作文时态宜用一般现在时，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用2段落格式，第一段：介绍自己梦想的工作是什么，为什么喜欢这项工作以及为这个工作准备了什么；第二段：总结全文，相信通过努力能够实现自己的梦想。
【满分作文】
My dream Job
I’d like to be a teacher when I grow up. Teachers help young people get knowledge and make them not only become cleverer and cleverer, but also be a good person, so teachers should be kind, friendly and helpful. In order to be a knowledgeable and skillful teacher, now I must study hard at all my subjects. I must learn a lot. Of course I should be kind to my friends and be polite to my teachers and parents to build up my good personality.
I believe I can make my dream come true by working hard.
（四）
4．梦想是一盏灯，给我们指引方向；梦想是一支笔，助我们描绘未来蓝图。假如你们学校英语俱乐部正在举办以“My Dream”为题的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，把你的梦想写下来。
写作提示：
1.What's your dream
2.Why is it your dream
3.What will you do to make your dream come true
写作要求：
1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2.100词左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
My Dream
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【解题思路】
本文主要用第一人称来描述写作内容；时态采用一般现在时来描述“我的梦想是什么”，“我的梦想的理由”和“我要怎样做来实现我的梦想”；描述梦想的原因和理由时需描写细致，并要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
【满分作文】
My Dream
Everybody has his own dream and so do I. My dream is to be a kung fu star. I was able to do kung fu when I was five years old and I am interested in acting. So I want to be a kung fu star when I grow up.
To make my dream come true, I'm going to spend at least two hours practicing kung fu every day. I also plan to take acting lessons and join an acting club.
I am sure I will be a famous kung fu star one day.
（五）
“有梦想，有机会，有奋斗，一切美好的东西都能够创造出来。”这是习主席对青年的青春寄语。梦想有大有小，每个人都有自己的梦想。假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论人生梦想的话题，他想了解你的梦想是什么，你为什么会有这样的梦想，你准备怎样实现你的梦想。请根据他的问题回复邮件。
要求：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；
2.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Ping
【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，针对给出的问题回复邮件，谈谈自己的梦想。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么，为什么会有这样的梦想；
第二步，根据提示材料，分别从不同方面介绍为了实现梦想应该怎么做。
【满分作文】
I’m glad to hear from you. Everyone has his own dream. My dream is to become a computer engineer. One of the reasons is that I am moved by the spirit of loving the country of Huawei’s CEO. Secondly, computers play an important role in our lives and work.
To realize my dream, I need to learn all subjects well and try my best to increase my knowledge about computer programs. I’ll also take an active part in all kinds of activities so that I can improve myself quickly. No dream is too big, and no dreamer is too small. I’ll try my best to fight for my dream.
Yours,
Li Ping
【亮点词汇】
①My dream is to...我的梦想是……
②play an important role发挥重要作用
③try my best to尽我最大努力
④fight for my dream为我的梦想而奋斗
【高分句型】
①One of the reasons is that I am moved by the spirit of loving the country of Huawei’s CEO. （that引导表语从句）
②I’ll also take an active part in all kinds of activities so that I can improve myself quickly.（so that引导状语从句）
1. （2023·湖北宜昌·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Jack想了解你对未来人生的思考及行动，请你给他写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
★ 你想成为什么样的人；
★ 你的理由；
★ 你的具体行动。
邮件要求：
★ 80词经右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
★ 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Jack,
How is everything I’m writing to tell you
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Li Hua
【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍自己想成为什么样的人；
第二步，分享自己的理由以及具体的行动。
【满分作文】
Dear Jack,
How is everything I’m writing to tell you that I want to be a useful person in the future. When I learn something about Yuan Long ping, I respect him for what he has done for our country. Thanks to the scientists like him, our country becomes stronger and we feel happier now. As knowledge is power, I will study harder than before. And then I plan to go to a university. After I graduate, I will serve the people in the areas where I am needed. I hope I could try my best to help more people in my country.
Li Hua
【亮点词汇】
①in the future在未来
②thanks to多亏
③try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力去做某事
【高分句型】
①When I learn something about Yuan Long ping, I respect him for what he has done for our country.（when引导时间状语从句）
②And then I plan to go to a university. （动词不定式作宾语）
2.（2022·青海·统考中考真题）当今，中国正迅速发展，在各方面都取得了令人瞩目的成就。请你以“China in Ten Years”为题，畅想并描述十年后的祖国。
要求：（1）内容积极向上，完整连贯；
（2）逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现姓名、校名和地名；
（4）词数：80—100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
China in Ten Years
Nowadays, our country is developing fast. It has made great achievements in
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【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
【写作步骤】
第一步，引出本文主题，畅想中国未来十年是什么样子；
第二步，从生活，工作，交通等方面畅想未来。
【满分作文】
China in Ten Years
Nowadays, our country is developing fast. It has made great achievements in many fields. What will China be like in ten years Can you imagine the future of China
I think China will be the largest, the richest and the most developed country in the world. In the future, we can live on any planet in the solar system. And we don’t have to worry about garbage pollution, because we can dissolve it as soon as possible, which will benefit our life. What’s more, people even don’t need to build a house by themselves, and robots can do it instead of human beings. Even so, education will be more convenient, no matter where you are, you can learn what you need from the Internet.
That’s the future China. What’s your opinion
【亮点词汇】
①made great achievements 取得众多成就
②worry about 担心
③instead of 代替
【高分句型】
①And we don’t have to worry about garbage pollution, because we can dissolve it as soon as possible, which will benefit our life.（because原因状语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句）
②no matter where you are, you can learn what you need from the Internet.（no matter引导让步状语从句）
3.（2022·广西百色·中考真题）假设你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级学生。市里将举行一年一度的中学生英语演讲比赛，今年演讲题目为“My Dream”。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿为此做准备。
提示：
1. What do you want to be
2. Why do you want to be a/an …
3. How are you going to be a /an …
要求:
1. 需包含上述三个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
4. 文中不能出现“李雷”和“建华中学”以外的人名，校名或地名。
My Dream
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share my dream with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【解题思路】
本文主要采用第一人称来写，时态以一般现在时及一般将来时为主。写作时第一段承接短文开头，并说明自己的未来职业选择是什么；第二段依次说明选择这一职业的理由，可列举三四个原因，运用表示次序的衔接词进行衔接，使内容表达更有条理性；第三段指出要实现这一职业的梦想的具体做法，时态采用一般将来时，可列举两到三条做法；第四段总结并结尾；第五段致谢。
【满分作文】
My Dream
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share my dream with you. I want to be an English teacher, and I am going to work and live in the city of Beijing.
First, English is becoming more and more useful and important and being an English teacher is exciting, too. If I am an English teacher, I can help my students with their English study. Second, I like being with children because it makes me feel young. Last, Beijing is the capital of China. I can meet many English speakers and I can improve my English by communicating with them.
To make my dream come true, I will study English hard every day and speak English as often as possible. I will do more listening in the morning. I’m sure I’ll love my job and students and be a friend of them.
No pains, no gains. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day.
Thank you.
4.（2022·江苏淮安·统考中考真题）梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点：
1. 描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）；
2. 谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者……）、原因及如何实现。
参考词汇：读唇语read lips
注意：
1. 词数80~100，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.
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【解题思路】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据“要点” 描述江梦南的成长经历以及谈谈自己的梦想。
【写作步骤】
第一步，首先介绍江梦南的成长经历；
第二步，介绍自己的梦想；
第三步，介绍为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现它。
【满分作文】
A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.
Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people. So she read lips and studied hard to realize her dream of becoming a Doctor of pharmacy.
I also have a dream. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. It’s been my dream since I was a kid. Because I like playing with children, and I also like to teach my knowledge to others. In order to realize my dream, I must study hard and stick to my dream.
【亮点词汇】
①be full of充满
②grow up长大
③in order to为了
④stick to坚持
【高分句型】
①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.（since引导的时间状语从句）
②The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people.（并列连词and以及转折连词but的使用）
5.（2022·浙江台州·统考中考真题）毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。
内容要点 参考词汇
What do you want to be when you grow up a teacher a scientist
Why do you want to be a(n)… ●be good at communicating ●work with children ●be interested in science ●invent new products
How are you going to do that ●get a good education ●learn how to teach children ●study science hard ●do scientific research
Where are you going to work ●… ●…
When are you going to start ●… ●…
注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
(3)词数80～100。
My dream job
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本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己梦想的工作是什么；第二段介绍自己如何让自己的梦想实现。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
【满分作文】
My dream job
We all have dream jobs. As for me, I dream to be a scientist. I have always been interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s life and I also hope to discover the mysteries of the world.
To be a scientist, I need to take actions right now. First, I’m going to study science really hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts. I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.
6.（2022·四川广元·统考中考真题）理想（ideal）是人生导航的灯塔，它指引我们成为对祖国和社会有用的人。近来，某英文报刊将举行以“如何做一名有理想的时代新人”为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。
写作要点：
1. 你的理想是什么？
2. 为什么有这样的理想？（不少于两点理由）
3. 你打算怎样实现自己的理想？（不少于两点做法）
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上要点：
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名：
3. 词数80左右，标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：ideal adj. & n. 理想的：理想
My Ideal
In the new times it’s very important for us to be a middle school student with an ideal.
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【解题思路】
本文时态采用一般现在时行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时从三个方面，先介绍自己的理想，其次介绍原因，最后介绍如何实现自己的理想。文章要保持语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
【满分作文】
My Ideal
In the new times it’s very important for us to be a middle school student with an ideal.
I wish to be an English teacher when I grow up. First, I like English. I want to use it often in my daily life. Secondly, I like working with students and enjoy being asked questions and answering them. Thirdly, I’m good at English. Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English test, and try to practice speaking English as much as possible. Only in this way can I realize my dream of being an English teacher one day.
()Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science.
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
愿望、理想
谈论未来的打算
与本单元话题相关的书面表达一般是谈论未来的打算。能用be going to，want to，hope to，expect to，be ready to，plan to谈论未来生活的计划与愿望，内容包括未来想要从事的职业或梦想及怎样实现梦想。在写作过程中，学生应做到以下几点：
1. 能描述自己的梦想或目标，并介绍为实现这一梦想或目标而制定的计划；
2. 能用be going to，want to，hope to，expect to，be ready to，plan to谈论未来生活的计划与愿望，内容包括未来想要从事的职业或梦想及怎样实现梦想；
3. 能对未来有所憧憬；
4.叙述要有条理，先叙述未来的计划和打算，再叙述打算采取的行动，在谈论行动时要分清主次且按先后顺序进行；
总—分—总法写计划
◆ 总：综述自己的愿望；
◆ 分：介绍为实现这一梦想或目标而制定的计划；
◆ 总：对未来的憧憬。
【词汇积累】
1. cook 厨师　　　　
2. engineer 工程师
3. violinist 小提琴手
4. pianist 钢琴家
5. pilot 飞行员
6. computer programmer 计算机程序设计员;编程人员
7. take up 开始从事；占用
8. grow up 成熟；长大
9. make sure 确保;查明
10. be sure about 确信;对……有把握
11. be able to 能够做某事
12. have to do with 关于；与……有关系
13. make the soccer team 组建足球队
14. get lots of exercise 多进行体育锻炼
15. practice basketball every day　每天练习打篮球
16. eat healthier food吃更健康的食物
17. learn education/medicine/computer science学习教/医药/电脑科学
18. be good at writing stories 擅长写故事
19. take singing / acting lessons 上唱歌/表演课
20. learn another foreign language 学习另一种外语，学习第二外语
三、句型积累
1. I am going to be a writer, because I like reading storybooks. 我要成为一名作家，因为我喜欢读故事书。
2. I’m going to exercise more and eat less junk food. 我打算多多锻炼并少吃垃圾食品。
3. It’s not easy to become a doctor, so I make a plan for it.
4. I will limit the time I spend watching TV to one hour per day. 我打算限制我看电视的时间至每天一小时。
5. I plan to get more exercise to improve my physical health.
6. To get into the best medical school, I need to get good grades. 为了进入最好的医科大学，我需要取得好成绩。
7. I am going to try my best to make my dream come true.
8. I want to he an engineer. 我想当一名工程师。
9. I’m going to practice basketball every day. 我打算每天练习篮球
10. I’m going to keep on writing stories. 我打算坚持写故事。
11. Many resolutions have to do with self-improvement. 许多决心和自身提高有关系。
◆开头句
①I'm glad to know that you want to be a doctor when you grow up.Here is my advice.
②Here I want to share my three resolutions with you.
③I'm going to take up a new hobby.
◆中间句
①You should keep on doing exercise.
②You must work hard at school and get good grades if you want to be a doctor in the future.
③You should read more books on medicine in your spare time so that you can learn more about medicine.
④I'm going to care more about my friends and help them more to improve my relationships with them.
⑤I'm going to listen to teachers more carefully in class and do my homework better to get better grades.
◆结尾句
①I really hope your dream will come true.
②I'm sure I can achieve my resolutions if I try my best.
③Just make sure you try your best. Then you can be anyone you want!
【谚语积累】
1.A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
2.Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者事竟成。
假如你是林宏，昨天晚上你收到了你的美国朋友Sam的邮件，他告诉你将来他想成为一名医生，但是他不知道该怎么做，所以想请你帮他出谋划策。请你给他回一封80词左右的英语邮件，提出你的建议。
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【审题指导】
1．文体：应用文(邮件)；
2．时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；
3．注意事项：注意段落布局并恰当使用复合句或连接词来增加得分点。
【思路点拨】
【组句成篇】
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to know that you want to be a doctor when you grow up. Here is my advice.
Firstly, you must work hard at school and get good grades if you want to be a doctor in the future. You can enter a top medical school if you get a quite high mark in the exam. Secondly, you should read more books on medicine in your spare time so that you can learn more about medicine. Thirdly, you should keep on doing exercise to keep strong. Being a good doctor not only needs rich knowledge，but also a strong body. Then you can deal with the hard and tiring work.

I really hope your dream will come true.()
(一)与职业有关的词汇
1. 电脑程序员 _____________________________________________
2. 工程师 _____________________________________________
3. 篮球运动员 _____________________________________________
4. 科学家 _____________________________________________
5. 公交司机 _____________________________________________
6. 飞行员 _____________________________________________
7. 厨师 _____________________________________________
8. 医生 _____________________________________________
9. 教师 _____________________________________________
10. 小提琴家 _____________________________________________
11. 钢琴家 _____________________________________________
12. 演员 _____________________________________________
13. 作家 _____________________________________________
14. 歌手 _____________________________________________
(二)与计划有关的短语
1. 上表演课 _____________________________________________
2. 学习另一种语言 _____________________________________________
3. 每天练习打篮球 _____________________________________________
4. 上烹饪学校 _____________________________________________
5. 学习弹钢琴 _____________________________________________
6. 组建足球队 _____________________________________________
7. 取得好成绩 _____________________________________________
8. 吃更健康的食物 _____________________________________________
9. 做大量的锻炼 _____________________________________________
10. 完成高中和大学学业 _____________________________________________
11. 坚持写故事 ______________________________________________
12. 改善身体健康 _____________________________________________
13. 学习教育/数学/医药/电脑科学 _____________________________________________
(三)其他重要短语
1. 长大；成熟 _____________________________________________
2. 确信；对……有把握 _____________________________________________
3. 确保；查明 _____________________________________________
4. 能够做某事 _____________________________________________
5. 在……开始 _____________________________________________
6. 写下；记录下 _____________________________________________
7. 关于；与……有关系 _____________________________________________
8. 开始从事；占用 _____________________________________________
9. 同意；赞成 _____________________________________________
10. 擅长(做)…… _____________________________________________
11. 尽力 _____________________________________________
12. 由于这个原因 _____________________________________________
二、句子积累
写作微技能：＂1＋n＂拓展写作法
例：Mike wants to be a writer when he grows up. He is good at writing. He is going to write more articles and send his articles to magazines. He expects to be another Mo Yan.
1. Tina wants to be a singer.
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2. Stephen wants to be a teacher.
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3. Mary wants to be a doctor.
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4. Dave wants to be a reporter.
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三、以读促写
根据短文内容、首字母或所给汉语提示，写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。每空限填一词。
My Friends’ Plans for the Future
I’m an outgoing girl and I like making friends. And I have two pen friends from 1 (外国的) countries.
Alice, a 20-year-old girl, lives in 2 (伦敦), UK. Both of her parents would like her to be a d 3 when she g 4 up. However, Alice thinks it’s boring to work in the hospital. She wants to be a professional w 5 after she finishes 6 (大学). She is good at writing and still k 7 on writing even she has to spend time on her 8 (功课) now. She writes 9 (文章) and 10 (邮寄；发送) them to magazines and newspapers. She expects to be another Mo Yan. Though she doesn’t make s 11 if her dream can come true, she has to try her b 12 .
Bob is from Pennsylvania, USA, a state becomes 13 (著名的) because of Kobe, a wonderful NBA star. Kobe is his idol. That’s why he hopes to become a basketball p 14 . Bob is going to eat healthier food so that he can be taller and stronger. Bob also plan to go to basketball camp to 15 (提高) his skill where he is a 16 to practice basketball every day. He believes his dream can come true as l 17 as he works hard.
What’s your plan for the future And how are you going to do that Please write to and tell me about it.
（一）
1．青春，是心里有火，眼里有光，我们这一代人的想象力，不足以想象你们的未来！青春路上，你对未来职业的憧憬是什么？请你以“I want to be a/an...”为题写一篇短文。须涵盖以下几个内容：
1. What is your dream job
2. Where are you going to work
3. Which motto(座右铭) encourages you most
4. Why do you like this job
5. How will you get your future dream job
6.....
要点提示：
1. 80-100词。
2. 请你根据以上要求，结合自己的实际情况写出你的观点，并适当发挥。
3. 文章中不得出现真实人名和校名。
4. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
I want to be a/an...
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（二）
2．假如学校本周要进行英语演讲比赛，主题为“My Dream”。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿向大家介绍你的梦想。
提示：1. What do you want to be
2. Why do you want to be a(n)...
3. How are you going to be a(n)...
要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m happy I can share my dream with all of you here.
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（三）
3．人人都有梦想，假设你是埃米，请以“My Dream Job”为题写一篇短文，畅想一下你的未来。内容包括：
1. 你想做什么样的工作？
2. 你喜欢这项工作的原因是什么？
3. 为这个工作你准备了什么或应该怎样做好准备？
作文要求：1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
My Dream Job
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（四）
4．梦想是一盏灯，给我们指引方向；梦想是一支笔，助我们描绘未来蓝图。假如你们学校英语俱乐部正在举办以“My Dream”为题的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，把你的梦想写下来。
写作提示：
1.What's your dream
2.Why is it your dream
3.What will you do to make your dream come true
写作要求：
1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2.100词左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。
My Dream
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（五）
“有梦想，有机会，有奋斗，一切美好的东西都能够创造出来。”这是习主席对青年的青春寄语。梦想有大有小，每个人都有自己的梦想。假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论人生梦想的话题，他想了解你的梦想是什么，你为什么会有这样的梦想，你准备怎样实现你的梦想。请根据他的问题回复邮件。
要求：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；
2.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Ping
1. （2023·湖北宜昌·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Jack想了解你对未来人生的思考及行动，请你给他写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
★ 你想成为什么样的人；
★ 你的理由；
★ 你的具体行动。
邮件要求：
★ 80词经右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
★ 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Jack,
How is everything I’m writing to tell you
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Li Hua
2.（2022·青海·统考中考真题）当今，中国正迅速发展，在各方面都取得了令人瞩目的成就。请你以“China in Ten Years”为题，畅想并描述十年后的祖国。
要求：（1）内容积极向上，完整连贯；
（2）逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现姓名、校名和地名；
（4）词数：80—100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
China in Ten Years
Nowadays, our country is developing fast. It has made great achievements in
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3.（2022·广西百色·中考真题）假设你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级学生。市里将举行一年一度的中学生英语演讲比赛，今年演讲题目为“My Dream”。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿为此做准备。
提示：
1. What do you want to be
2. Why do you want to be a/an …
3. How are you going to be a /an …
要求:
1. 需包含上述三个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；
3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
4. 文中不能出现“李雷”和“建华中学”以外的人名，校名或地名。
My Dream
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share my dream with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.（2022·江苏淮安·统考中考真题）梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点：
1. 描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）；
2. 谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者……）、原因及如何实现。
参考词汇：读唇语read lips
注意：
1. 词数80~100，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.
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5.（2022·浙江台州·统考中考真题）毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。
内容要点 参考词汇
What do you want to be when you grow up a teacher a scientist
Why do you want to be a(n)… ●be good at communicating ●work with children ●be interested in science ●invent new products
How are you going to do that ●get a good education ●learn how to teach children ●study science hard ●do scientific research
Where are you going to work ●… ●…
When are you going to start ●… ●…
注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
(3)词数80～100。
My dream job
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6.（2022·四川广元·统考中考真题）理想（ideal）是人生导航的灯塔，它指引我们成为对祖国和社会有用的人。近来，某英文报刊将举行以“如何做一名有理想的时代新人”为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。
写作要点：
1. 你的理想是什么？
2. 为什么有这样的理想？（不少于两点理由）
3. 你打算怎样实现自己的理想？（不少于两点做法）
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上要点：
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名：
3. 词数80左右，标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：ideal adj. & n. 理想的：理想
My Ideal
In the new times it’s very important for us to be a middle school student with an ideal.
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