Unit2 解透单元写作
主题写作——一生的工作
1.写作任务
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在发给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
（1）该人物是谁；
（2）该人物的主要贡献；
（3）该人物对你的影响。
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.写作构思
（1）一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文
主题：给朋友回信介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物
（2）二定：确定时态和人称
时态：一般现在时和一般过去时
人称：用第一人称和第三人称
（3）三明确：明确写作要求
内容要求：
a.开篇点明写信缘由；
b.结合写作要点介绍你喜欢的历史人物及其主要贡献；
c.结合写作要点叙述对你的影响；
d.书信结束语。
词数要求：80左右。
（4）四分段
结合要点分为三个段落。
3.素材整理
（1）关键词语
①感到自豪feel proud
②我最喜欢的人物my favourite figure
③一定是must be
④在清代末期in the late Qing Dynasty
⑤介绍某物introduce sth.
⑥睁眼看世界open one’s eyes to the world
⑦激励某人做某事inspire sb.to do sth.
⑧主修英语major in English
（2）重要句型
①至于在中国历史上我最喜欢的人物，一定是晚清伟大的思想家魏源。
As for my favourite figure in Chinese history，it must be Wei Yuan，a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.
②他在他的书《海国图志》（世界地图与记录）中向中国介绍了现代技术和思想。
He，in his book，Haiguo Tuzhi（Maps and Records of the World），introduced modern technologies and ideas to China.
③它使当时的人们开眼看世界。
At that time，it opened people’s eyes to the world.
④事实上，他激励我在大学主修英语，成为一座连接中国和世界的桥梁。
In fact，he inspires me to major in English in college and to be a bridge between China and the world.
⑤有兴趣了解更多吗？我可以给你找些书！只需告诉我。
Interested in knowing more I can find you some books! Just let me know.
4.满分作文
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud to know your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World), introduced modem technologies and ideas to China. At that time, it opened people’s eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college and to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点点评
①范文结构严谨、内容充实、语言概括性强。
②主题词汇和高级词汇的运用增加了文章的地道性，加强了语言的表现力。
③过渡句等隐性衔接手段增加了语言的交际性效果。
④同位语和插入语的运用增加了句子的信息含量，为文章提升了档次。
5.佳作背诵
（1）佳作一
临近毕业，部分高三学生对未来将要从事的工作感到迷茫，你班将以“我的理想职业”为主题开一个班会。请根据以下内容用英语写一篇发言稿。
①未来的职业，如：医生、教师、演员等；
②选择的理由；
③实现理想的途径。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon, everyone,
It’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my ideal career with you. I hope to be____________________________________________________________
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Thank you for listening.
One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone,
It’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my ideal career with you. I hope to be a teacher. As a teacher, I will stay with young students who are always energetic and have new ideas, so I will keep updating what I have learned. Besides, teaching is a job that teachers teach knowledge and educate students, which is increasingly important. That is why I love to be a teacher.
To be a qualified teacher, I will study hard to equip myself with relevant knowledge and do more teaching practice. My fellow classmates, please remember whatever kind of job we choose, we should devote to it. Let's make great efforts to do it well to realize our dreams.
Thank you for listening.
（2）佳作二
请根据下面的汉语提示写一篇短文介绍孔子。
①孔子是我国古代伟大的思想家和教育家
②孔子强调仁爱、责任和秩序的重要性
③孔子开办学堂，传授自己的哲学思想，培养了很多哲学家，为社会做出了巨大的贡献；
④孔子的思想影响了中国两千多年，还在继续影响着我们。孔子是世界上真正的名人，很多国家建立了孔子学院来弘扬孔子的哲学思想。
注意：①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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One possible version:
Confucius is a great thinker and educationist in ancient China.
Confucius stressed the importance of kindness, duty and order in society. Wherever he went, he preached his doctrines He opened some schools where he could teach his students to be noble. He made a great contribution to the society for many of his students became famous philosophers, who had a great influence on China’s history.
China has been influenced by his thought for more than 2, 000 years, and the influence is still on. Confucius is really famous in the world and many countries have started a Confucius College to study and spread his philosophy.

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