Unit6 解透单元写作
主题写作——保护大自然
1.写作任务
假设你是李华,生活在中国的西藏,曾目睹和听说藏羚羊的处境。请你根据下面的提示给报社写一封建议信,请他们帮助拯救这一濒危动物。
内容应包括: (1)建立自然保护区; (2) 制定法律,禁止捕猎,严惩捕猎者; (3) 教育人们关爱野生动物，学会与大自然和谐共处。
注意：(1)语句通顺,书写工整;
(2)可用所给提示词，也可以适当发挥;
(3)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)，
提示词汇: be home to; establish a wildlife reserve; prevent...from; live in harmony with
Dear Sir or Madam ,
I live in Tibet, China, _________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.写作思路
（1）一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文—书信
主题：保护野生动物的建议
（2）二定：确定时态与人称
时态：一般现在时为主
人称：第一人称和第三人称
（3）三明确：明确写作要点
提出存在的问题——给出建议
（4）四分段：结合要点分为三个段落
3.素材整理
（1）关键词语
be home to, be in danger of, die out, establish a wildlife reserve, protect...from， be concerned about，prevent...from, be aware of, live in harmony with
（2）完成句子
①我住在中国西藏,这是藏羚羊的家园。
I live in Tibet, China, which ________________________the Tibetan antelopes.
答案：is home to
②我听说因为被捕和猎杀,藏羚羊处在灭绝的危险当中。
I hear the Tibetan antelopes are ________________________ because of being hunted and killed.
答案：in danger of dying out
③我建议建立野生动物自然保护区,在保护区内藏羚羊被保护免受危险并且平静地生活。
I suggest________________________, where the Tibetan antelopes are _____________
danger and live in peace.
答案：establishing a wildlife reserve, protected from
④政府部门应该制定法律阻止藏羚羊被猎杀。
The government should make laws to ________ the Tibetan antelopes ________ being hunted and killed.
答案：prevent, from
⑤那些猎杀藏羚羊的人应该受到严厉惩罚。
Those who hunt them should ________________________ seriously.
答案：be punished
⑥应该教育人们关爱动物,并学会与大自然共处。
People should be educated to ________________________ animals, and learn
to________________________ with nature.
答案：be concerned about, live in harmony
4.满分作文（注：黑体部分为本单元的重点词汇）
Dear Sir or Madam,
I live in Tibet, China, which is home to the Tibetan antelopes. I hear the Tibetan antelopes are in danger of dying out because of being hunted and killed. The following are my tips.
Firstly, I suggest establishing a wildlife reserve, where the Tibetan antelopes are protected from danger and live in peace. Secondly, the government should make laws to prevent the Tibetan antelopes from being hunted and killed. And those who hunt them should be punished seriously. Last but not least, people should be educated to be concerned about animals , and learn to live in harmony with nature.
I hope that you will find my suggestions helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5.佳作背诵
假定你叫李华,你生活在长江边上, 对于江豚(finless porpoise)的数量逐渐减少的现状比较了解,请给报社写封信，号召保护江豚,内容包括:
(1)介绍江豚的现状;
(2 )唤醒大家的保护意识。
注意：(1)词数80左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to tell you that Yangtze finless porpoises are becoming fewer and fewer because of people’s overfishing, and the number of them is only several hundred.
In my opinion, the government should take some effective measures to prohibit the overfishing. Our newspaper can launch some programs to make people aware of the serious situation of the finless porpoises and protect them. If we do nothing about it, it will soon be extinct.
I believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with animals.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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