09:【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年九年级下学期英语专题周周练(第一期)(江苏连云港)
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、话题作文
1.初中生活即将结束,你们即将开始新的征程,规划新的人生。请根据下列图示提示内容,以“My plan for the new life”为题,给你们学校英语角写一篇英语短文,介绍你的计划。
注意:(1)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My plan for the new life
Our middle school life is coming to an end. A new life is on the way. I plan to do lots of things for the new life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
2.《21世纪英语报》向中学生约稿,邀请大家参加“平凡的超级巨星”征文活动。请你根据以下提示,以“The superstar in my family”为题,写一篇短文参赛。内容包括:
1. 获奖者信息∶外貌、爱好……;
2. 获奖原因∶永不言弃、乐于助人等品质及具体事例(至少两点);
3. 你的评价∶对你的影响或者你的感悟……. (至少两点)。
要求∶
1. 词数90左右;
2. 短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
3. 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
The superstar in my family
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3.“双减” 政策 (即:减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担) 的实施在社会引起广泛关注。作为亲身经历的学生,必须应对新的挑战,规划好自己的时间和学业, 适应这一重大变化。请根据以下提示,写一篇短文。
Your changes homework after-school classes → Your opinions ... → Your plans schoolwork hobbies sports... (2-3 points)
注意事项:1.短文须自拟,要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.提供信息非限定性内容,仅供参考,但文章中不得出现真实姓名或校名等信息;
3.词数在90个左右,短文已给出部分不计入总词数;
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
相关词汇:双减 Double Reduction;政策 policyAs the Double Reduction policy has been carried out, we have changed a lot this term. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.“双减”政策落实以后,同学们的课余生活有了很大变化。某英文网站正在举办征文活动,请根据下列提示,用英语写一篇“Our wonderful spare time”为题的短文投稿。
(1)过去:作业多,考试难,压力大。
(2)现在:有更多时间,帮助父母表达爱心,亲近自然放松自己……(另举两个活动及益处)
(3)评价或感受:……至少两条。
注意:
1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
2.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Our wonderful spare time
On July 24, 2021, the Double Reduction policy came out. Since then, our life has changed a lot and been greatly improved. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.三年的初中生活转瞬即逝,愉快的暑假即将到来。假如你是李华,请根据提供的信息,选择一种度过暑假的方式并说明理由,且另外提供1~2种合理的过暑假的方式。
Doing voluntary work ·help pupils with schoolwork · teach the old how to get a health code (码) ·collect used books for poor children Taking some courses ·take a cooking course ·learn a new sport ·learn to play a musical instrument
要求:
1.所写内容必须包括一种你喜欢的过暑假的方式及理由;
2.另外提供1~2种方式;
3.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。After a busy school year, we’ll graduate from junior high school and have a pleasant summer holiday. I prefer
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三、书信作文
6.为落实国家教育部提出的对中小学加强劳动教育的实施意见,你们学校安排了丰富多彩的劳动教育活动。假如你是王涛,你向英国笔友Simon写信描述你校的活动。请你根据以下提示,完成信件,内容包括:
劳动重要性 锻炼身体,发展能力,不畏挫折……
具体活动 做家务、学会烹饪三道菜、志愿者活动……
你的感受 (至少两点)
注意:(1) 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3) 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
相关词汇:劳动 labor
Dear Simon,I’m glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Tao
7.假如你是Alex,你想向吴老师推荐Daniel担任班长。请先完成下表,再根据信息写推荐信,词数不少于80,可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Confident
Clever
Helpful
Never forgets the things he needs to do
Often does extra work after school
… …
Dear Mr Wu,I am writing a letter to recommend Daniel as our new monitor.
I think ______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think Daniel is the most suitable person to be our new monitor. I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Alex
8.新学期伊始,你们学校需要招募一名学生会主席。假如你是Mary,想推荐Helen担任学生会主席,请根据表格内容提示,给负责人Mr.Smith写一封推荐信。
推荐理由
品质 聪明、有条理、乐于助人(举例)
爱好 弹钢琴,听音乐,天生的艺术家
其它 对色彩感兴趣,认为颜色和心情…… 喜欢暖色,例如……,因为……(自拟)
要求:
1.表达中必须包含所给要点,省略号部分适当发挥。
2.表达中请勿提及真实的姓名和校名等。
3.条理清晰,字迹工整。词数大约90词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.SmithI’m writing to recommend Helen as the new chairperson of the Students’Union. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think she is the most suitable person to be the chairperson. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Mary
四、讲稿
9.劳动创造了历史,劳动也可创造未来。劳动教育是学生学习的重要组成部分之一,请以“Leaning by working”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇发言稿,参加我校的英语主题演讲活动,内容包括:
(1)重要性:懂得劳动的意义、养成劳动的习惯、提高做事的能力;
(2)经历:什么时间、做了什么、结果怎样;
(3)你的评价,至少两条。
注意:
(1)词数90左右;
(2)短文应该包括所给内容要点, 可适当发挥。使文章连贯;
(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Learning by working
Good morning, everyone. The topic of my speech today is learning by working. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.“同心筑梦,一起向未来!”作为中学生,应携手共进、守望相助、共创美好未来。某校英语角就“如何实现一起向未来的梦想?”举行一次演讲活动。请你根据以下图表,以“How to realize the dream — Together for a Shared Future ”为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求:(1)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
How to realize the dream — Together for a Shared Future
Dear friends,
We all live in the same world and “Together for a Shared Future” is our common dream. Today, I’d like to talk about how to realize it.
As students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all, thank you!
参考答案:
1.One possible version:
My plan for the new life
School life is Middle school is coming to an end. A new life is on the way. I plan to do lots of things for the new life.
First, I’d like to have a healthy lifestyle. It’s good for me to exercise more and keep running every day. I also want to go travelling to enjoy the natural beauty. Second, I hope to read books to learn about different histories and cultures. And I will try to keep a balance between work and rest. In addition, I hope to be more confident to speak in front of many people. Moreover, I’m going to do some housework for my parents in my free time.
In a word, I’m looking forward to having a meaningful new life.
【详解】1.题干解读:阅读题干可知,要求我们以“My plan for the new life”为题,介绍自己新生活的计划。写作内容包括题干给出的三点:生活计划、学习计划和对新生活的期待。注意写作不要漏点,同时可以适当地添加合适的内容,使作文内容更加丰富。
2.写作指导:这是一篇计划类作文,时态以一般将来时为主,人称以第一人称为主,题干已经给出了开头,可知直接开段介绍详细计划,可以运用逻辑词 (First、Second、In addition、Moreover) 使作文逻辑清晰。最后一段简单的述说对新生活的期待。
2.范文:
The superstar in my family
My brother Daniel is the superstar in my family. He is tall and strong. In his free time, he often plays basketball and he’s really good at it.
Daniel never gives up easily. To repair a broken bicycle, he reads many books, asks for advice and spends a whole day fixing it successfully. Daniel is also very helpful and ready to do the housework any time. When I feel bored, I can always go to him. He will tell me jokes to make me happy.
Daniel is so sweet, special and super and we all think he is the superstar in my family.
(105 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,属于记叙文。
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:题目要求包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,阐述获奖者的外貌、爱好;
第二步,具体阐述美好品质以及具体事例;
第三步,阐述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②To repair a broken bicycle动词不定式表目的
③be ready to do准备做某事
[高分句型]
①When I feel bored, I can always go to him.(when引导时间状语从句)
②we all think he is the superstar in my family.(宾语从句)
3.范文:
As the Double Reduction policy has been carried out, we have changed a lot this term.
We used to have lots of homework, but now it’s becoming much less so that we have enough time to sleep. Moreover, I don’t go to after-school classes any more.
I think the policy is good for us students. We can have more time to improve ourselves. For example, I have more free time for my hobbies and sports. But how can we get used to the new changes quickly Here’s my plan.
First of all, I should make full use of the time at school and deal with all the problems in time. Next, taking exercise is as important as schoolwork. I will walk or ride to school every day. It’s a good way to keep healthy. I am crazy about playing football so I can play football with my good friends at weekends. Finally, I’ll take up some meaningful hobbies to make my life more interesting. I’ll spend more time with my parents. I hope I can grow up healthily and happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时,一般过去时和一般将来时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“写两到三点自己的计划”一项,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山说明“双减”政策带来了许多变化;
第二步,具体阐述政策给自己带来的变化和自己对政策实施的观点;
第三步,最后介绍政策之下自己的计划,书写结语,表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②get used to习惯于
③be crazy about热衷于
④take up开始从事
[高分句型]
①taking exercise is as important as schoolwork. (动名词作主语)
②I’ll take up some meaningful hobbies to make my life more interesting. (动词不定式作目的状语)
4.参考范文
Our wonderful spare time
On July 24, 2021, the Double Reduction policy came out. Since then, our life has changed a lot and been greatly improved. Next let me talk about it. I used to have a lot of homework every day. So I had to stay up late at night. In the past, I found it difficult to take many exams. I was under great pressure to study. I didn’t have time for other sports. Now everything is better. I have little homework every day, so I can finish it at school. In addition, I don’t have to get up so early, so I can get enough sleep every night.
In my spare time, I can do what I like. I have more rest time. I help my parents do housework to express my love. I have more time to get close to nature and relax myself. I join the art club to learn my favorite piano. This helps to cultivate my hobbies. I often play basketball and football with my friends. I not only exercise now, but also have a good relationship with my classmates. Now I’m very happy. I think “double reduction” policy is very good, which reduces the burden on our students and makes our school life more wonderful.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍“双减”政策带来的一些变化,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
5.例文
After a busy school year, we’ll graduate from junior high school and have a pleasant summer holiday. I prefer to take some courses.
First, I plan to take a cooking course because it’s necessary for me to learn some useful life skills. And if I cook a delicious dinner for my parents, they’ll feel very happy. Then, I want to learn a new sport to make myself stronger. As we know, health is the most important thing for everyone. Besides, I’m going to learn to play a musical instrument which I am interested in. It requires time and energy. And this holiday is a good chance to achieve my dream. What’s more, I’ll take a course in DIY. Because it’s time for us to go green, and I’ll try my best as well.
In my opinion, this summer holiday is the best time to prepare myself for the world beyond the classroom. It will be meaningful for me to take these courses.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给的内容提示,选择其中一种度过暑假的方式并说明理由,并且另外提供1~2种过暑假的方式。
2. 写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主;人称以第一人称为主。写作时首先选择其中的一种过暑假的方式,并阐明理由。同时自己要补充其他的合理的过暑假的方式。写作时确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
6.范文:
Dear Simon,
I’m glad to hear from you.
I am happy to tell you that our school has organized a lot of activities to help us understand the importance of labor. Through labor we can exercise and develop our abilities. Besides we will not be afraid of difficulties. We can also learn to depend on ourselves.
I took part in these activities. For example, I learned to do housework and cook at least 3 dishes. What’s more, I worked as a volunteer. Last week I visited the Elderly House and brought the food I cooked.
I think it is not only meaningful but also necessary for us to receive labor education. Only in this way can we understand our parents better and value what we’ve got. I hope to take part in more activities like these.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“你的感受(至少两点)”一项,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出学校组织了劳动教育活动及其重要性;
第二步,具体列举参加的活动;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②be afraid of害怕
③depend on依赖
④work as担任
[高分句型]
①I am happy to tell you that our school has organized a lot of activities to help us understand the importance of labor. (that引导的宾语从句)
②Only in this way can we understand our parents better and value what we’ve got. (运用倒装句)
7.例文
Dear Mr Wu,
I am writing a letter to recommend Daniel as our new monitor.
I think he has many strong qualities for this position. He is confident. He thinks he can do anything well if he tries his best. Daniel is very clever. He is good at every subject and has won several maths and English competitions. Daniel is helpful. He often helps us with our lessons if we are absent from school. He never forgets the things he needs to do. And he often does extra work after school. He often helps those who need help.
I think Daniel is the most suitable person to be our new monitor. I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Alex
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示写一封推荐信,推荐Daniel担任班长。可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍Daniel的一些品质,比如自信,聪明以及乐于助人;
第二步,具体阐述Daniel做过的事情;
第三步,最后表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
③be absent from缺席
[高分句型]
①He thinks he can do anything well if he tries his best.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②He often helps those who need help.(who引导的定语从句)
8.例文:
Dear Mr. Smith
I’m writing to recommend Helen as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union.
She is clever and always comes up with good ideas when we are in two minds. She can take steps to make difficult things easier. She does things in order. Every time we meet a problem, she can always help us to solve it. She is very helpful too. She always tries his best to help other students.
Her hobby is playing the piano and listening to music. She also won many awards in some competitions. I think she’s a born artist, so I think she has the ability to organize different activities.
Helen is interested in color and thinks it can affect her mood. Helen likes warm colors. Her favorite color is red because it may help when she are having difficulty making a decision.
I think she is the most suitable person to be the chairperson. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Mary
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封推荐信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据表格内容提示,给负责人Mr.Smith写一封推荐信,推荐Helen担任学生会主席。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,点名要推荐Helen为学生会主席;
第二步,从品质、爱好、其他几个方面具体阐述推荐Helen为学生会主席的理由;
第三步,书信结语,表达“希望Helen为学生会主席”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①come up with想出
②try one’s best to尽某人最大努力做某事
③have the ability to有……的能力
④have difficulty (in) doing sth做某事有困难
⑤make a decision做决定
[高分句型]
①She is clever and always comes up with good ideas when we are in two minds.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think she’s a born artist, so I think she has the ability to organize different activities.(I think后是宾语从句;so连接两个并列句)
9.例文
Learning by working
Good morning, everyone. The topic of my speech today is learning by working. In my opinion, working is very important. It can help us understand the meaning of working hard. Moreover, step by step, we can have the habit of working at home or school. More importantly, our ability of doing things can be improved.
Last Sunday, I helped my mother make rice dumplings. At first it was very hard for me to make one. But I tried again. In the end, I made one by myself.
Working can bring us useful experiences and happy memories. Let’s work now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“你的评价,至少两条”这一要点,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,根据要点说明劳动的重要性;
第二步,举例说明你在何时、何地、参加了何种劳动教育,以及结果;
第三步,对劳动教育做出至少两条评价并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①step by step一步一步地,逐步地
②have the habit of doing养成做某事的习惯
③more importantly更重要的是
[高分句型]
①It can help us understand the meaning of working hard.(动名词作宾语)
②At first it was very hard for me to make one.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语)
10.例文:
How to realize the dream — Together for a Shared Future
Dear friends,
We all live in the same world and “Together for a Shared Future” is our common dream. Today, I’d like to talk about how to realize it.
As students, it’s our duty to protect our environment. We can pick up the rubbish and plant more trees. When people are in trouble, we can give a helping hand, such as giving our seats to people in need on the bus. Besides, it’s meaningful to take part in volunteer work. We can visit an old people’s home to buy things for them. Besides, we can learn our traditional culture through reading more to spread our culture around the world,
I believe if we work together, we will realize our dream.
That’s all, thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求讲述在环境保护、公益以及举止文明方面实现一起向未来的梦想。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主,讲述实现一起向未来的梦想的建议,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
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