2023届高三英语地市级新题快递-一模考试专辑
专题09 书面表达通用版 原卷版
【2023广东深圳一模】假定你是李华, 你班计划与新西兰姊妹学校某班级在线共上一堂介绍“传统体育项目”的交流课。请你代表班级写封邮件给对方班长Hans, 内容包括:
1.交流的目的;
2.告知相关事宜;
3.征求意见。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【2023广东梅州一模】前不久,你校学生一同观看了神舟十五号飞船发射直播,大家备受鼓舞。为使学生了解更多的航天知识,你校决定举行一次关于航天科学的讲座,假设你是国际学校的学生会主席李华,请用英语写一则书面通知,内容包括:
1. 讲座的时间、地点;
2. 讲座的目的及内容;
3. 希望同学们踊跃参加。
注意:1词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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The Students Union
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。前不久,在校学生观看了神州十五号飞船发射的直播,为了使学生了解更多的航天知识,学校决定举行一次关于航天科学的讲座,由此要求考生写一则书面通知。内容包括:讲座的时间,地点,目的,内容以及希望学生们踊跃参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
获得:acquire→gain
举办:hold →host
组成:consist of→be made up of
处理:deal with→ tackle with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Aimed at enabling students to acquire more knowledge about space flight, a lecture themed on space science will be held in the school hall at 2 o’clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours.
拓展句:Because our school aims at enabling students to acquire more knowledge about space flight, a lecture themed on space science will be held in the school hall at 2 o’clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The lecture mainly consists of three parts, the first of which is a brief introduction of the history, recent launch as well as development trends of space flight in our country.(运用了介词+关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Additionally the third part highlights interaction, where participants can ask questions they are curious about further arousing their enthusiasm in space exploration and raising awareness of the importance of scientific innovation.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【2023山东菏泽一模】假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将举行主题为“My Youth,My Dream”的英语演讲比赛,请你给外教Lisa写一封邮件,邀请她担任评委。内容包括:
1.比赛目的;
2.时间和地点;
3.期待参与。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;’
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Lisa,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Lisa写一封电子邮件,邀请她担任“My Youth,My Dream”为主题的英语演讲比赛的评委。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:contest→competition
命名:entitle→name
旨在与:be aimed to→be intended to/be designed to
因为:as→because/since
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest.
拓展句:I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest, which will be held in our lecture hall February 23th.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The English speech contest is entitled “My Youth, My Dream”, which is aimed to make us senior students firm in our ideals and determined to strive. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]It would be our great honor if you could accept our invitation and get you time spared. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【2023广东茂名一模】假如你是李华,你的英国好友Mary给你发来邮件,说居家上网课时注意力难以集中,她担心成绩落后,因此向你求助。请你回复她,内容包括:
1. 安慰;
2. 建议;
3. 祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,你的英国好友Mary给你发来邮件,说居家上网课时注意力难以集中,她担心成绩落后,因此向你求助。请你回复她, 内容包括:1.安慰;2.建议;3.祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知:learn→ know
建议:suggestion → advice
此外:what’s more→besides
参加:engage in→ participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Hopefully, these proposals will be of some help to you.
拓展句:I hope that these proposals will be of some help to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】How about tidying up your desk, which will keep you away from all the distractions. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Last but not least, it is of importance for you to engage yourself in the class actively like sharing your views and discussing problems because it leaves you no room for being absent-minded.(运用了动名词作宾语)
【2023安徽淮北一模】假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期,你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写在线讲座(A Lecture on Continuation Writing)。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达感谢并简述你的收获;
2. 说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Steve写封电子邮件,对他为学生做的读后续写的在线讲座表达感谢并简述你的收获,说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
然而:however→nevertheless
困惑的:puzzled→confused
困难的:hard→difficult
感激的:grateful→thankful
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
拓展句:I’d appreciate it if you can give me your earliest reply.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. (运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句,省略了that/which)
[高分句型2] I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【2023广东佛山一模】你校上周六组织高三学生参观了新北机器人制造公司(Xinbei Robots)。请你写一篇观后感, 给校英文报投稿, 内容包括:
1. 参观过程:
2. 你的收获和感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Visit to Xinbei Robots
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【答案】参考范文:
Last Saturday afternoon our school organized a visit to Xinbei Robots for Senior Three students, which turned out to be an instructive event. During the visit, we learned about the procedure of making robots and listened to a lecture about robots’ development. Besides, the most exciting thing was that we were given a chance to interact with those multifunctional robots.
I was utterly amazed by the great convenience technology has brought to our life and took great pride in the advances our country has made in technology. Moreover, I’m more determined to work hard for my dream. I want to become a scientist and do my bit for the promising future of our country.
【解析】
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作。要求向报社投稿,描述自己参观新北机器人制造公司的体验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有教育意义的:instructives→educational
此外:besides→what’s more
机会:chance→opportunity
完全地:utterly→completely
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:I want to to become a scientist and do my bit for the promising future of our country.
拓展句:What I want to do is to become a scientist and do my bit for the promising future of our country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Saturday afternoon our school organized a visit to Xinbei Robots for Senior Three students, which turned out to be an instructive event. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, the most exciting thing was that we were given a chance to interact with those multifunctional robots.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
【2023山西临汾一模】假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了一场师生足球友谊赛,参赛人员为高三学生代表队对战教师代表队。请为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 比赛过程;
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Teacher-Student Football Friendly
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【解析】
【分析】本书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对学校组织的师生足球友谊赛写一篇英文报道并写一下活动的反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织:organise →hold
最初:at first → in the beginning
充满了:be filled with →be full of
加强:strengthen →build up
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, in an effort to enrich students’ school life.
拓展句:Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, which was aimed to enrich students’ school life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Bathed in sunshine, players from Grade 3 competed against their teachers in the field, with all the rest students watching excitedly in the bleachers.(运用了分词作状语和with的复合结构)
【高分句型2】The exciting game not only helped relieve the students’ intense pressure caused by heavy workload, but also strengthened their relationship with the teachers.(运用了not only…but also…连接并列结构和分词短语作定语)
【2023安徽合肥一模】假定你是李华。你校开设了乒乓球培训班,请给来自加拿大的交换生Jeff写封邮件邀请他一起参加,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 课程安排;
3. 报名方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jeff,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用写一封邀请信,邀请交换生Jeff参加乒乓球培训班,内容包括:写信目的、课程安排和报名方式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted → pleased
此外:besides → what’s more
学期:semester→term
不同的:different→ various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I do hope you can come and enjoy the charm of playing table tennis.
拓展句:I do hope you can attend the class where you will enjoy the charm of playing table tennis.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Anyone who is interested in it can sign up in Room 304 before Feb. 25.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】As scheduled, the class will last a semester, starting from March 3. (运用了省略句和非谓语动词作状语)
【2023河南郑州一模】假设你是学校英语俱乐部成员,该俱乐部将举办主题为“How did you spend this Spring Festival ”的交流活动,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,届时与大家分享。
内容包括:
1.你是怎样过这个春节的;
2.你的感受或收获是什么。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! I’m honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
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Thanks for listening!
【解析】
【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生以“How did you spend this Spring Festival ”为主题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
敲击:struck→hit
燃放:set off→let off
翻修:decorated→renovate
张贴:put up→post
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, and meanwhile I learned lots of life skills.
拓展句:I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, during which I learned lots of life skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When the clock struck 12, my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.(由When引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns, put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily.(由What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
【2023河南安阳一模】假定你是李华,你班交换生Mark对河南的民俗文化很感兴趣,希望你给他推荐一个地方。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐地方并说明理由;
2.表示愿意帮助。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生Mark写封邮件,给他推荐一个了解河南民俗文化的地方。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可能:probably→possibly
著名的:famous→well-known
热衷于:be keen on→be enthusiastic about
亲自:in person→in the flesh
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou.
拓展句:I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou,as I know that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou. (运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Looking forward to meeting you in Henan and I would like to be your guide if you like. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【2023陕西咸阳一模】你校上周末举行了一次以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛,校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 活动当天的天气情况;
2. 比赛的过程与结果;
3. 你的感受。
注意:1. 短文长度100词左右;
2. 标题和开头句已为你写好,不计入总词数。
A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
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【解析】
【导语】这篇书面表达是一篇新闻报道。要求考生以李华的身份,为学校举办的以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛写一篇短文,向学校的英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心:joy→happiness
出发:set off→depart
失望的:disappointed→regretful
获得:receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All students with joy gathered on the school gate first.
拓展句:All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. (运用了after引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和for引导的原因状语从句)
【2023甘肃张掖一模】假定你是某高中学生会主席李华,在你校即将举行的外籍学生欢迎会上,作为学生代表就如何学好中文发言,请写一篇题为: Learn to speak Chinese, Learn to sing Chinese songs. 的发言稿。内容包括:
1. 对新生表示欢迎;
2. 介绍学习中文的好方法;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右,题目已经给出,不计入字数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Learn to Speak Chinese, Learn to Sing Chinese Songs
Hello, everyone!
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Thank you!
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是某高中学生会主席李华,在你校即将举行的外籍学生欢迎会上,作为学生代表就如何学好中文发言,请写一篇题为:Learn to speak Chinese, Learn to sing Chinese songs. 的发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:extend→express
本质:essence→nature
为了:in order to→so as to
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All in all, grasp every chance to participate in various activities to relieve your academic stress and enrich your after-school life and you will find it easy to speak Chinese.
拓展句:All in all, grasp every chance to participate in various activities, which will relieve your academic stress and enrich your after-school life and you will find it easy to speak Chinese.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the process, only by emerging yourself in Chinese conditions will you get the hang of the language and its essence. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] Besides, in order to sense the rhythm of the language and its fluency, learn to sing Chinese songs is a better way, in which you can experience the melody and image it creates. (运用了不定式作目的状语)2023届高三英语地市级新题快递-一模考试专辑
专题09 书面表达通用版 解析版
【2023广东深圳一模】假定你是李华, 你班计划与新西兰姊妹学校某班级在线共上一堂介绍“传统体育项目”的交流课。请你代表班级写封邮件给对方班长Hans, 内容包括:
1.交流的目的;
2.告知相关事宜;
3.征求意见。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Hans,
I’m Li Hua. I’m so exerted about our upcoming virtual lesson to introduce Traditional Sports Events. On behalf of my class, I’m writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it.
The lesson will serve as a channel for students to realize traditional sports are not only the essence of a culture but also the pride of a country. So for our part, we are considering introducing several typical sports activities, including martial arts, dragon boat race and so on. To achieve the best effect, interactive forms, such as presentations and live shows, will be adopted. As for the time and way, we’d like to have the lesson scheduled between April 3 and April 7, lasting 3 hours through an online conference application.
Does our proposal work well on your side Looking forward to your earlies reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于告知信。要求考生给班长Hans写信,告知你班计划与新西兰姊妹学校某班级在线共上一堂介绍“传统体育项目”的交流课的活动并征求其意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将到来的:forthcoming →upcoming
代表:represent →on behalf of
采用:use →adopt
回复:answer→ reply
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:So for our part, we are considering introducing several typical sports activities, including martial arts, dragon boat race and so on.
拓展句:So for our part, we are considering introducing several typical sports activities, which include martial arts, dragon boat race and so on.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To achieve the best effect, interactive forms, such as presentations and live shows, will be adopted.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语以及被动语态)
【高分句型2】we’d like to have the lesson scheduled between April 3 and April 7, lasting 3 hours through an online conference application.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【2023广东梅州一模】前不久,你校学生一同观看了神舟十五号飞船发射直播,大家备受鼓舞。为使学生了解更多的航天知识,你校决定举行一次关于航天科学的讲座,假设你是国际学校的学生会主席李华,请用英语写一则书面通知,内容包括:
1. 讲座的时间、地点;
2. 讲座的目的及内容;
3. 希望同学们踊跃参加。
注意:1词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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The Students Union
【答案】Notice
Aimed at enabling students to acquire more knowledge about space flight, a lecture themed on space science will be held in the school hall at 2 o’clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours.
The lecture mainly consists of three parts, the first of which is a brief introduction of the history,recent launch as well as development trends of space flight in our country. The second part presented by the same experts will deal with the related scientific benefits. Additionally the third part highlights interaction,where participants can ask questions they are curious about further arousing their enthusiasm in space exploration and raising awareness of the importance of scientific innovation.
Those interested in the lecture are highly welcome to take part.
The Students Union
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。前不久,在校学生观看了神州十五号飞船发射的直播,为了使学生了解更多的航天知识,学校决定举行一次关于航天科学的讲座,由此要求考生写一则书面通知。内容包括:讲座的时间,地点,目的,内容以及希望学生们踊跃参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
获得:acquire→gain
举办:hold →host
组成:consist of→be made up of
处理:deal with→ tackle with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Aimed at enabling students to acquire more knowledge about space flight, a lecture themed on space science will be held in the school hall at 2 o’clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours.
拓展句:Because our school aims at enabling students to acquire more knowledge about space flight, a lecture themed on space science will be held in the school hall at 2 o’clock this Friday afternoon and will last two hours.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The lecture mainly consists of three parts, the first of which is a brief introduction of the history, recent launch as well as development trends of space flight in our country.(运用了介词+关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Additionally the third part highlights interaction, where participants can ask questions they are curious about further arousing their enthusiasm in space exploration and raising awareness of the importance of scientific innovation.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【2023山东菏泽一模】假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将举行主题为“My Youth,My Dream”的英语演讲比赛,请你给外教Lisa写一封邮件,邀请她担任评委。内容包括:
1.比赛目的;
2.时间和地点;
3.期待参与。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;’
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Lisa,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lisa,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest.
The English speech contest is entitled “My Youth My Dream”, which isaimed to make us senior students firm in our ideals and determined to strive. It will be held at 8:00 am on February 23th in the lecture hall in our school. As you are an expert in life planning, your attendance means so much to us.
It would be our great honor if you could accept our invitation and get you time spared. Looking forward to your timely reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Lisa写一封电子邮件,邀请她担任“My Youth,My Dream”为主题的英语演讲比赛的评委。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:contest→competition
命名:entitle→name
旨在与:be aimed to→be intended to/be designed to
因为:as→because/since
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest.
拓展句:I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest, which will be held in our lecture hall February 23th.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The English speech contest is entitled “My Youth, My Dream”, which is aimed to make us senior students firm in our ideals and determined to strive. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]It would be our great honor if you could accept our invitation and get you time spared. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【2023广东茂名一模】假如你是李华,你的英国好友Mary给你发来邮件,说居家上网课时注意力难以集中,她担心成绩落后,因此向你求助。请你回复她,内容包括:
1. 安慰;
2. 建议;
3. 祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
Terribly sorry to learn that you have trouble in studying online. Don’t worry about your falling behind. Here are my suggestions.
How about tidying up your desk, which will keep you away from all the distractions. What’s more, turn off all the apps that will disturb you. Last but not least, it is of importance for you to engage yourself in the class actively like sharing your views and discussing problems because it leaves you no room for being absent-minded.
Hopefully, these proposals will be of some help to you. Best wishes for your improvement.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,你的英国好友Mary给你发来邮件,说居家上网课时注意力难以集中,她担心成绩落后,因此向你求助。请你回复她, 内容包括:1.安慰;2.建议;3.祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知:learn→ know
建议:suggestion → advice
此外:what’s more→besides
参加:engage in→ participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Hopefully, these proposals will be of some help to you.
拓展句:I hope that these proposals will be of some help to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】How about tidying up your desk, which will keep you away from all the distractions. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Last but not least, it is of importance for you to engage yourself in the class actively like sharing your views and discussing problems because it leaves you no room for being absent-minded.(运用了动名词作宾语)
【2023安徽淮北一模】假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期,你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写在线讲座(A Lecture on Continuation Writing)。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达感谢并简述你的收获;
2. 说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Dear Steve,
Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed.
However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it. For example, I find it hard to grasp the gist of the passages, and I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words. What can I do Would you please give me some advice I would be really grateful if you could help me out.
Thank you very much again. Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Steve写封电子邮件,对他为学生做的读后续写的在线讲座表达感谢并简述你的收获,说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
然而:however→nevertheless
困惑的:puzzled→confused
困难的:hard→difficult
感激的:grateful→thankful
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
拓展句:I’d appreciate it if you can give me your earliest reply.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. (运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句,省略了that/which)
[高分句型2] I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【2023广东佛山一模】你校上周六组织高三学生参观了新北机器人制造公司(Xinbei Robots)。请你写一篇观后感, 给校英文报投稿, 内容包括:
1. 参观过程:
2. 你的收获和感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Visit to Xinbei Robots
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【答案】参考范文:
Last Saturday afternoon our school organized a visit to Xinbei Robots for Senior Three students, which turned out to be an instructive event. During the visit, we learned about the procedure of making robots and listened to a lecture about robots’ development. Besides, the most exciting thing was that we were given a chance to interact with those multifunctional robots.
I was utterly amazed by the great convenience technology has brought to our life and took great pride in the advances our country has made in technology. Moreover, I’m more determined to work hard for my dream. I want to become a scientist and do my bit for the promising future of our country.
【解析】
【导语】本篇属于应用文写作。要求向报社投稿,描述自己参观新北机器人制造公司的体验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有教育意义的:instructives→educational
此外:besides→what’s more
机会:chance→opportunity
完全地:utterly→completely
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:I want to to become a scientist and do my bit for the promising future of our country.
拓展句:What I want to do is to become a scientist and do my bit for the promising future of our country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Saturday afternoon our school organized a visit to Xinbei Robots for Senior Three students, which turned out to be an instructive event. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, the most exciting thing was that we were given a chance to interact with those multifunctional robots.(运用了that引导的表语从句)
【2023山西临汾一模】假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了一场师生足球友谊赛,参赛人员为高三学生代表队对战教师代表队。请为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 比赛过程;
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Teacher-Student Football Friendly
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【答案】One possible version:
A Teacher-Student Football Friendly
Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, in an effort to enrich students’ school life.
Bathed in sunshine, players from Grade 3 competed against their teachers in the field, with all the rest students watching excitedly in the bleachers. Both teams were playing at their best in high spirits. Although the teachers dominated the game at first, the students did not give up and tried to intercept every pass from their op-ponents. The match was filled with great dynamics and interesting plays, ending in a draw of 2: 2.
The exciting game not only helped relieve the students’ intense pressure caused by heavy workload, but also strengthened their relationship with the teachers.
【解析】
【分析】本书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对学校组织的师生足球友谊赛写一篇英文报道并写一下活动的反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织:organise →hold
最初:at first → in the beginning
充满了:be filled with →be full of
加强:strengthen →build up
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, in an effort to enrich students’ school life.
拓展句:Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, which was aimed to enrich students’ school life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Bathed in sunshine, players from Grade 3 competed against their teachers in the field, with all the rest students watching excitedly in the bleachers.(运用了分词作状语和with的复合结构)
【高分句型2】The exciting game not only helped relieve the students’ intense pressure caused by heavy workload, but also strengthened their relationship with the teachers.(运用了not only…but also…连接并列结构和分词短语作定语)
【2023安徽合肥一模】假定你是李华。你校开设了乒乓球培训班,请给来自加拿大的交换生Jeff写封邮件邀请他一起参加,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 课程安排;
3. 报名方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jeff,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jeff,
To enrich our school life, a table tennis training class is opened in our school. I’m more than delighted to invite you to come and join us.
As scheduled, the class will last a semester, starting from March 3. There will be one class at 4 pm every Friday with a period of 45 minutes. Besides, the class is suitable for students of different levels. Anyone who is interested in it can sign up in Room 304 before Feb. 25. So don’t miss the deadline!
I do hope you can come and enjoy the charm of playing table tennis. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用写一封邀请信,邀请交换生Jeff参加乒乓球培训班,内容包括:写信目的、课程安排和报名方式。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted → pleased
此外:besides → what’s more
学期:semester→term
不同的:different→ various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I do hope you can come and enjoy the charm of playing table tennis.
拓展句:I do hope you can attend the class where you will enjoy the charm of playing table tennis.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Anyone who is interested in it can sign up in Room 304 before Feb. 25.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】As scheduled, the class will last a semester, starting from March 3. (运用了省略句和非谓语动词作状语)
【2023河南郑州一模】假设你是学校英语俱乐部成员,该俱乐部将举办主题为“How did you spend this Spring Festival ”的交流活动,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,届时与大家分享。
内容包括:
1.你是怎样过这个春节的;
2.你的感受或收获是什么。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! I’m honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】 Hello, everyone! I’m honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
On New Year’s Eve, my family gathered together and had a reunion dinner while watching the Spring Festival Gala. When the clock struck 12, my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns, put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily. Additionally, I played sports and games with my friends besides learning.
I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, and meanwhile I learned lots of life skills. After all, the Spring Festival is important because it’s a new beginning which brings hope to us and it’s also a time to show our gratitude and take our responsibility.
Thanks for listening!
【解析】
【导语】本文是开放性作文。要求考生以“How did you spend this Spring Festival ”为主题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
敲击:struck→hit
燃放:set off→let off
翻修:decorated→renovate
张贴:put up→post
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, and meanwhile I learned lots of life skills.
拓展句:I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, during which I learned lots of life skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When the clock struck 12, my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.(由When引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns, put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily.(由What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
【2023河南安阳一模】假定你是李华,你班交换生Mark对河南的民俗文化很感兴趣,希望你给他推荐一个地方。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐地方并说明理由;
2.表示愿意帮助。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mark,
Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou.
The reasons are as follows. Shaolin Temple is probably the most famous temple in China, not only because of its long history and its role in Chinese Buddhism, Shaolin Temple Pagoda, but also because of its martial arts or Wushu.
Looking forward to meeting you in Henan and I would like to be your guide if you like.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生Mark写封邮件,给他推荐一个了解河南民俗文化的地方。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可能:probably→possibly
著名的:famous→well-known
热衷于:be keen on→be enthusiastic about
亲自:in person→in the flesh
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou.
拓展句:I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou,as I know that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou. (运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Looking forward to meeting you in Henan and I would like to be your guide if you like. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【2023陕西咸阳一模】你校上周末举行了一次以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛,校英文报现正以此为主题举行征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 活动当天的天气情况;
2. 比赛的过程与结果;
3. 你的感受。
注意:1. 短文长度100词左右;
2. 标题和开头句已为你写好,不计入总词数。
A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
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【答案】A Hill-climbing Competition
In order to enhance the students’ awareness of body building, a hill-climbing competition, with the theme of “Health Is First”, was held last Sunday by our school.
It was a sunny day. All students with joy gathered on the school gate first. Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. All the way, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of nature and shared interesting stories besides trying our best to move up-ward. It was at about 10: 00 that we all reached the top of the hill. The top three students come from class one, four, and nine.
Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship.
【解析】
【导语】这篇书面表达是一篇新闻报道。要求考生以李华的身份,为学校举办的以“健康第一”为主题的登山比赛写一篇短文,向学校的英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心:joy→happiness
出发:set off→depart
失望的:disappointed→regretful
获得:receive→obtain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All students with joy gathered on the school gate first.
拓展句:All students who were joyful gathered on the school gate first.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Then, after the headmaster delivered a speech about safety and rules, we set off excitedly at 7: 30. (运用了after引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Although not receiving an award, I wasn’t disappointed at all, for I had received better health and friendship. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和for引导的原因状语从句)
【2023甘肃张掖一模】假定你是某高中学生会主席李华,在你校即将举行的外籍学生欢迎会上,作为学生代表就如何学好中文发言,请写一篇题为: Learn to speak Chinese, Learn to sing Chinese songs. 的发言稿。内容包括:
1. 对新生表示欢迎;
2. 介绍学习中文的好方法;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右,题目已经给出,不计入字数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Learn to Speak Chinese, Learn to Sing Chinese Songs
Hello, everyone!
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Thank you!
【答案】Learn to Speak Chinese, Learn to Sing Chinese Songs
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. It’s my great honor to be here and extend a warm welcome to you on behalf of the whole students.
From today, you will be a senior high school student in our school and start you new life in China. You are supposed to leave your native language aside and try every moment to speak Chinese and surround yourself with Chinese language. In the process, only by emerging yourself in Chinese conditions will you get the hang of the language and its essence. Besides, in order to sense the rhythm of the language and its fluency, learn to sing Chinese songs is a better way, in which you can experience the melody and image it creates. All in all, grasp every chance to participate in various activities to relieve your academic stress and enrich your after-school life and you will find it easy to speak Chinese.
Eventually, I hope all of you can have a good command of Chinese and be happy to live an study in China. Thank you!
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是某高中学生会主席李华,在你校即将举行的外籍学生欢迎会上,作为学生代表就如何学好中文发言,请写一篇题为:Learn to speak Chinese, Learn to sing Chinese songs. 的发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:extend→express
本质:essence→nature
为了:in order to→so as to
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:All in all, grasp every chance to participate in various activities to relieve your academic stress and enrich your after-school life and you will find it easy to speak Chinese.
拓展句:All in all, grasp every chance to participate in various activities, which will relieve your academic stress and enrich your after-school life and you will find it easy to speak Chinese.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the process, only by emerging yourself in Chinese conditions will you get the hang of the language and its essence. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] Besides, in order to sense the rhythm of the language and its fluency, learn to sing Chinese songs is a better way, in which you can experience the melody and image it creates. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
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