07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年九年级下学期英语专题
周周练（第一期）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、讲稿
1．假设你是李明，这周你们班英语活动课的主题是“Gift”，请你请根据表格中的内容，以“The most special gift I’ve received”为题，完成你的发言稿。
Key points (内容要点) Words and expressions for reference (参考词汇)
What it is A toy Nezha …
From whom my cousin …
How long more than one year …
How I got it gave up playing the piano; invited me to watch the film Nezha; gave me a toy Nezha, as brave as Nezha. …
注意：1. 文中必须包含四个方面的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇供选择使用；
2. 词数80-100，文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。The most special gift I’ve received
Hello, everybody! It’s my honor to share my topic with you! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening, that’s all.
二、书信作文
2．三年的初中生活即将结束，你是否很期待暑假的来临？假如你是李华，你的英国网友Tony打算暑假来中国旅行，并要求你为他制定一份旅行计划。请根据以下提示写篇短文，把你的计划和理由告诉他，并征求他的意见。
Key points（要点） Word and expressions for reference（参考词汇）
What to do climb the Great Wall enjoy Beijing Opera .. .. ..
Reasons one of the most popular tourism attractions learn about Chinese culture .. .. ..
要求:
1. 文中必须包含全部提示要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇供选择使用。
2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
4. 词数 80—100。
Dear Tony, I’m extremely excited to hear that you’re coming to China during the summer vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．Andy 是一名初中生，他的父母下周要出差三天，这是他第一次独自一个人在家，给了他一些建议。请你根据以下要点提示，帮助 Andy的父母完成这封信。
注意：
（1）文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数：80～100；
（4）信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容要点 参考词汇
Home Alone Suggestions Safety 1. not answer the door to strangers
2. …
Diet 1. eat healthy food
2. …
Time Management 1. go to bed early and get up early
2. …
Dear Andy,We will be away for three days next week. It’s the first time for you to stay at home alone. So here are some suggestions for you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Mum and Dad
4．玲玲给《新标准》杂志的Diana写了一封信，在信中诉说了她的烦恼，想请Diana给她提点建议。假如你是Diana，请根据信件内容和建议要点提示，用英语给她写一封回信。
From: Lingling
To: Diana
Subject: What should I do
Dear Diana,With the PE exam drawing near, I feel pressured a lot. Last weekend, my parents sent me to an after-school PE class. They think it is the only way to improve my PE. But I am so tired that I’m afraid I can’t continue with the training any more. What should I do Write to me soon. Yours, Lingling
建议内容包括：communicate with parents; list the ways of improving PE grades.
注意：(1)文中请勿使用人名、校名等真实信息；
(2)内容必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
(3)词数：左右100词。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lingling, I am sorry to hear that your parents push you so hard. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope things work out.
Yours,
Diana
三、电子邮件
5．假如你是Daming，你的美国笔友Mike问起你初中阶段最要好朋友的情况。根据下表的内容要点，给他发一份邮件，向他介绍你的好友Lingling并说说她成为你好友的原因。
注意：1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数：80~100；
4. 邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容要点 参考词汇
Age 15 years old
Appearance a round face, big eyes…
Character humorous, creative,…
Hobbies reading books, playing table tennis…
Others …
Dear Mike,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Daming
6．三年初中生活很快就要结束，崭新的高中生活即将到来。假设你是Li Hua，你的美国好友David想了解你的暑假安排，请根据下表给David写一封Email。
内容要点 参考词汇
Study *get ready for *do some reading *...
Life *do some sports *take a part-time job *get close to the nature
Wishes *...
注意：1.文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
3.词数：80~100词；
4.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,How are you The summer holiday is coming soon. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7．Parkland国际学校将组织同学们参加志愿者社会实践活动(Volunteer Social Practical Program)。假如你是该校学生李华，请在下表中选择一项喜欢的志愿活动，并用英语给负责老师(Mr. Green)写一封邮件。说说你的选择理由或意图以及行动，以供学校统计筛选。
要求：1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。2)字数110左右。
Project A service-volunteer for farmers A service-volunteer for the elderly
Reasons/Purposes *know about the plants and animals *learn the farm skills ... *know stories about the old *help the older less lonely ...
Activities *feed animals *water vegetables ... *chat with the old *do housework ...
Dear Mr. Green,I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old girl from Grade 9. I’m writing to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．丰富多彩的暑假生活马上就要开始了，快约上好朋友一起去旅游吧！假设你是Mary，请根据下面提示，通过电子邮件向你的好朋友Lisa发出邀请，请她和你一起去旅游！
提示：1.下周六想和一些朋友去爬山；
2.下周六早上7:50在校门口见面，8:00 出发；
3.需要准备的东西: 运动鞋、食物、饮料和太阳镜。
要求：所给提示内容要包括在内，60词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lisa,
I hope everything is going well with you. The summer holiday is coming soon.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m sure we’ll have a great time. Hope to see you soon.
四、材料作文
9．每个人在人生旅途中总会遇到过困难，遭受挫折。在你遇到的那些困难和挫折时，是否也有那么一个人曾经启发你、引领你笑着面对困境，努力战胜困难。请根据表格提示内容，选择其中一个对象（老师，同学，父母或者其他人）写出你们之间的故事。
What difficulties you met fail the exam, lose confidence, feel lonely…
Who helped you teachers/ friends/parents/strangers...
How did he/she help you encouraged, offer suggestions…
What have you learned be positive, brave, confident...
要求：1. 包含所有要点，不逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；
2. 书写规范、工整，条理清晰；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、地名、和校名等；
4. 词数：100左右。
首句供参考：Looking back to my past life, I’ll never forget …
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10．双减政策下，自主支配的时间多了，很多同学对合理安排课余时间存在困惑。因此校报开展了“自主管理我能行”的征文活动。请你根据下面提示写一篇短文，介绍你是如何有效安排课余时间，并给其他同学提些建议。
注意：
(1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)词数80—100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
(4)参考词汇：提升素养promote literacy
Now students have more free school time. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．
2022年的四月是第34个爱国卫生月，今年的活动主题是“文明健康，绿色环保”。请以To Be a Civilized Teenager为题，结合自身的校园生活，谈谈怎样积极参与到这项活动中来。
要求：1.短文内容可适当增加。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。
3.词数：80-100词左右。
4.短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：civilized文明的 tap水龙头 sort 分类
To Be a Civilized Teenager
As a teenager in the new age we can do something meaningful to set an example as a civilized member of our school.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．初中三年，你一定参加了很多丰富多彩的学校活动并拥有了许多美好的回忆。哪一次活动是你最难忘的的呢？一场激动无比的篮球比赛亦或是一次令人难忘的学校郊游？请你选择你最难忘的的一次活动。根据表格中的内容要点，以 “My most unforgettable school activity”为题写一篇英语短文以便在下次英文课上进行分享。
Key points（内容要点） Words and expressions for reference（参考词汇）
*What it was a basketball game; a school outing.... ....
*How it was coach; cheer up; make one’s biggest efforts... ...
*What you learned the importance of teamwork, never give up... ...
注意：
1.文中必须包含三个方面的内容点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
2.词数80-100；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。My most unforgettable school activity
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13．三年的初中英语学习生活即将结束。请根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文向校刊English Journey投稿，谈谈你在英语学习过程中遇到的困难，以及你的解决方法。
注意：1. 短文可以选取表格中的一些要点，内容可适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 80～100 词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Difficulties Listening; speaking; writing…
Solutions(解决方式) listen to English songs; read English books and newspapers; keep a diary…
Learning English during the three years is fun for me but I have met some difficulties when learning it.
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14．目前，你们学校校刊The Youth正开展“优秀学生—outstanding students”的推选活动，你的朋友Lucy是候选人之一，请你根据以下的信息用英语写一篇短文来介绍她的个人情况，并发表你对她的看法。
内容要点 参考词汇
Personality outgoing, warm-hearted...
Hobbies & abilities travel, be good at study...
Learning habits make learning plans, balance study and rest well...
Your opinion ...
要求： 1. 内容必须包括表格中的所有要点，并可适当增加。2. 文中不能出现真实校名、姓名。
3. 词数：80-100词左右（首句已给出，不计入总数）
短文首句：In my eyes, Lucy is a smart girl who is fairly all-rounded.
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15．假如你是李明。某英文网站正在举办以“厉行节约、反对浪费”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据表格中的内容，写一篇题为“How to Reduce the Waste”的演讲稿，参加比赛。
内容要点 参考词汇
Eating order too much food eat up all the food you order
Clothing buy clothes just for fashion wear school uniforms
Consumption（用） use one-off things save water and electricity
注意：
1.文中必须包含三个方面的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
3.词数：90~110。
4.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,May I have you attention, please
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参考答案：
1．例文：
The most special gift I’ve received
Hello, everybody! It’s my honor to share my topic with you!
The most special gift I’ve received is a toy Nezha. I have had it for more than one year.
My cousin and I went to see the cartoon film Nezha last summer. When the film was over, I understood why my cousin invited me to see the film. At that time, I failed to pass an important piano grading test. I was very sad and even considered giving up playing the piano. So my cousin tried to encourage me in this way. Later, I also received this toy Nezha as a gift on my birthday from my cousin. He hoped I could be as brave as Nezha.
The toy stands on my desk and it always encourages me to be brave in the face of difficulties. I think it is the most meaningful gift I have ever got.
Thank you for listening, that’s all.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是要求根据表格中的内容，以“The most special gift I’ve received”为题，写一篇发言稿，文章的开头与结尾已给出，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一、三人称来叙述，时态上以一般过去时为主。写作时要适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。
2．[例文]
Dear Tony,
I’m extremely excited to hear that you’re coming to China during the summer vacation. My practical plans for you are as follows. Talking about tourist attractions, the Great Wall is on your must-see list. Located in Beijing, the capital of China, the Great Wall is so popular that it attracts millions of people from all over the world. It’s about 4000 miles long and wide enough for ten men to walk side by side. How difficult it is to build such a great man-made wonder in the ancient days without any modern technologies! Besides, Beijing Opera can’t be missed. With a long history of more than 200 years, Beijing Opera has been regarded as an important part of Chinese culture. Though it is difficult for you to understand, I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it, especially the dressing of actors. What do you think of my plans for you If there are any questions, please let me know. Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题型：本文是书信写作；
②时态：主要是一般现在时；
③提示：文章格式已给出，考生应注意描述的全面性，文章必须将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，给Tony暑假旅行计划提供建议并讲述原因。本文主要是第一和第三人称，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总起全文，告知对方计划如下。
第二步，结合提示要点详细描述推荐内容。
第三步，询问对方是否满意，并期待对方的回信。
[亮点词汇]
①tourist attraction旅游胜地
② all over the world全世界
③regard as视为
④fall in love with爱上
[高分句型]
①Located in Beijing, the capital of China, the Great Wall is so popular that it attracts millions of people from all over the world.（非谓语动词做状语，综合使用that引导的结果状语）
②Though it is difficult for you to understand, I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it, especially the dressing of actors.（使用though引导的让步状语从句）
3．例文
Dear Andy,
We will be away for three days next week. It’s the first time for you to stay at home alone. So here are some suggestions for you.
First, safety is the most important. Don’t answer the door to strangers. And keep away from fire. It’s dangerous. Second, eat healthy food. Don’t eat too much junk food and remember to eat some fruits every day. What’s more, you should manage your time properly. You should go to bed early and get up early. You must finish your homework as soon as you arrive home. Don’t spend the whole night watching TV. We hope you can read books for half an hour before sleeping.
In a word, we hope you can take good care of yourself. Have a good time!
Love,
Mum and Dad
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据所给要点提示，帮助 Andy的父母给Andy写一封信。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第二人称为主。写作时涵盖要点，不要遗漏。可分为三段式写作，第一段已给出；第二段介绍具体的建议；第三段总结。写作时力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
4．例文
Dear Lingling,
I am sorry to hear that your parents push you so hard. I understand quite well that you feel tired and terrible.
It is unusual for teenagers of your age to have so much stress in your life. I think you’d better communicate with your parents when they’re free and come up with an idea to deal with the problem. After hearing what your trouble is, they may understand your situation and stop giving you a lot of pressure. Besides, you’re supposed to list the ways of improving P.E. grades. For example, you promise to get up early to practice running every day or you make good use of P.E. class to train yourself harder than before. I’m sure they will listen to you, since you’re their one and the only daughter.
Hope things work out.
Yours,
Diana
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据Diana信中提出的问题给出相应的建议，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，以第二人称和第三人称为主。第一段表示对她的问题表示理解；第二段提出具体的建议。介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
5．例文：
Dear Mike,
How are you I am glad to introduce Lingling, my best friend in junior high school.
In my view, Lingling is a girl who is endowed with both beauty and talent. First of all, with big eyes and a round face, 15-year-old Lingling is amicable. What’s more, she is, by nature, a humorous girl who brings me happiness. I was deeply impressed by her humor and bright smile when we met for the first time. Additionally, she is so creative that she always write poems to describe things and feelings.
Friends are who share similar tastes and interests. We are good partners to play table tennis. Besides, both of us are fond of reading books, especially works by Bingxin.
Do you agree that Lingling is an amazing friend I’ve mentioned you to her, and maybe we three can be friends. Expect your early reply.
Yours,
Daming
Dear Mike,
Glad to hear from you. I’d like to introduce my best friend in junior high school to you.
My best friend is Lingling, a 15-year-old Chinese girl. She is tall with a round face, bright eyes and long black hair. Also, she is humorous and creative so everyone that knows her speaks well of her. She keeps sharing her novel ideas, which is admired by me. Besides what I have introduced above. Lingling has many hobbies in her spare time, such as, reading, singing, playing table tennis and so on. Therefore, I always like staying with her and we have fun together.
In my opinion, a real friend is a person who can bring out the best in us. Lingling is the person who helps me grow up. I hope our friendship will last forever. Do you have such a friend
Yours,
Daming
Dear Mike.
I’m glad to hear from you. It’s my pleasure to introduce my best friend in my junior high school to you.
To begin with she is a 15-year-old girl called Lingling with a round face, big eyes and long hair. In my eyes, she is humorous and creative because every time I am down in the dumps, she will give me an open mind and cheers me up. That’s one of the reasons why she is my best friend. Additionally, Lingling enjoys reading books and playing table tennis in her spare time. I like doing them to kill time, too. Actually, we share the same hobbies and the same features, which is another reason we become best friends.
Personally, the best friend plays an important role in our life. Can you share your experience between you and your best friend I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Daming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中其他一项，适当添加内容，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明回信的内容是向对方介绍自己初中的好朋友；
第二步，具体介绍朋友，包括题目中给的所有内容；
第三步，最后阐明对友谊的看法并书写书信结语如期待对方的来信等。
[亮点词汇]
① in my opinion依我之见
② a 15-year-old Chinese girl一个15岁的中国女孩
③ in her spare time在她的空闲时间
④ have fun过得愉快
[高分句型]
①She is tall with a round face, bright eyes and long black hair.(with表附带)
②She keeps sharing her novel ideas, which is admired by me.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．例文
Dear Mike,
How are you The summer holiday is coming soon. I’m looking forward to making it meaningful. Now I’d like to share my ideas with you.
I plan to do plenty of interesting and colorful things. First, I will keep learning to get ready for my high school. And I will read many books. We know reading makes a full man. In my daily life, I would like to do some sports, and I want to take a part-time job. In addition, I hope to go hiking and get close to the nature.
In short, I hope I can have a happy and meaningful summer holiday. Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干表格中给出的提示描述自己的暑假安排，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时和第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从学习、生活等方面具体介绍自己的暑期安排；第三段表达希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
7．例文
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old girl from Grade 9. I’m writing to join in Volunteer Social Practical Program in our school.
I have a strong interest in working as a service-volunteer for farmers because my grandma has a small garden and I have helped her growing vegetables since I was little. Therefore, I am familiar with some farm skills. Practicing on the farm can help improve my skills and learn more about the plants and animals as well.
As a volunteer, I will look after the animals on the farm patiently and feed them with my loving heart. Furthermore, watering vegetables is what I am skilled at.
I am looking forward to volunteering on the farm. And I will spare no effort to offer the best service that is required on the farm.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解析：本文是一篇邮件写作，要求写一封110词左右的英语邮件，说明自己打算选择的志愿活动以及选择的原因和参加之后准备付出的行动。文章开头已给出，要注意上下文衔接。
2.写作指导：本文使用第一人称。时态使用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章可以分为四段写作。第一段介绍自己的情况；第二段介绍自己打算参加了活动和原因；第三段，讲述自己参加活动之后的行动。最后一段总结。注意邮件写作的格式，不要出现单词和语法错误。
8．One possible version:
I hope everything is going well with you. The summer holiday is coming soon. Some of my friends are planning to climb the mountains near our city. Would you like to come with us If you want to come, please tell me soon.
We are going to meet at 7:50 at our school gate next Saturday morning and starts at 8:00. Please get everything ready for the climbing, like sports shoes, food, drinks and sunglasses.
I’m sure we’ll have a great time. Hope to see you soon.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件，根据所给提示，向你的好朋友Lisa发出邀请，请她和你一起去旅游。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。写作时涵盖要点提示，不要遗漏，可适当发挥使行文连贯，要求语句通顺，逻辑清晰。
9．例文:
Looking back to my past life, I’ll never forget my friend Tom who always encourages me when I want to give up.
One day on a hot afternoon, we were going to have a PE test, which I was not good at it. When the test started, I was already out of energy. So I ran much more slowly than my classmates. Just at the moment, I heard Tom said, “Come on! You can do it. Never quit.” Suddenly I felt the warmth from the bottom of my heart. I started to try my best to follow him. At last, I passed the test.
Without Tom’s encouragement, I wouldn’t do it successfully. And I also learned that keep working hard and never quit. Doubtlessly, you’ll succeed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、条理清晰，无语法使用错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，围绕要点进行介绍，具体包括遇到的困难、他/她是如何帮助你等方面；
第三步，阐述自己从这次经历中学习的东西。
[亮点词汇]
① look back to 回顾
② give up 放弃
③ be good at 擅长
④ try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
① I’ll never forget my friend Tom who always encourages me when I want to give up.（who引导的定语从句）
② we were going to have a PE test, which I was not good at it.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
③ And I also learned that keep working hard and never quit.（that引导的宾语从句）
10．例文：
Now students have more free school time. How to make time more meaningful Here are some useful suggestions. First, it’s good to help our parents do housework to show our love. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What’s more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.
In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中帮助父母表达爱心、阅读书籍了解世界、亲近自然放松自己等的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，讲述作文是为了对于同学对合理安排课余时间的建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，合理安排课余时间的具体建议；
第三步，作文结语，表达“希望让我们充分利用业余时间，提升素养。”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①get close to nature亲近自然
②relax ourselves放松我们自己
③make full use of充分利用
④what’s more另外
[高分句型]
①Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.（it固定句式，it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）
②In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier.（动词不定式作目的状语）
11．例文
To Be a Civilized Teenager
As a teenager in the new age, we can do something meaningful to set an example as a civilized member of our school. We can do the following things.
We should behave politely in public. We should keep quiet in the library and we should keep our voices down in public. We should obey the traffic rules. We should wait in the queue when we are waiting for a bus. It’s rude to jump in before others. We can’t cut in on others when they are talking.
It is time for us to go green. We can reduce the air pollution by riding bikes. We can save water by taking shorter showers. We can’t leave the tap running when we brush our teeth. We can save energy by turning off the lights when we leave a room. We can protect the environment by recycling the waste. We can’t drop litter everywhere.
In my opinion, as long as we try our best to do what we can do, everyone can feel the love and live a happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以To Be a Civilized Teenager为题，结合提示内容进行写作。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“如果做一名文明的青少年”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“礼貌和环保”两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁尽我们最大的努力去做我们能做的，每个人都能感受到爱，过上幸福的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①behave politely in public公共场合表现得礼貌
②obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则
③cut in on others插话
④protect the environment保护环境
[高分句型]
①We should queue for our turn when we wait for a bus.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②In my opinion, as long as we try our best to do what we can do, everyone can feel the love and live a happy life.（as long as引导的条件状语从句）
12．参考范文：
My most unforgettable school activity
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories.
Of them, I’d like to share with you my favorite story about a basketball game. Our team got a good start by beating two strong teams. However, our captain hurt his finger during the third game. He is the brain of our team. When thinking of losing of the center, we were all down and couldn’t concentrate on the next match. Our captain found this and encouraged us to fight on and cheered us up. With the help of our captain, we played as well as the first two games. Seeing our captain waving his injured finger, we made our biggest efforts in the following games. With the cheers of our students, we won the champion. During the celebrations, we threw our captain into the air.
I would never forget it because I understood the importance of teamwork for the first time.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。以 “My most unforgettable school activity”为题写一篇英语短文描述你初中三年最难忘的一次活动。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主。开头引出话题，描述自己有很多难忘的经历；第二段具体描述这一次难忘的经历是什么；最后表达自己的感受。避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条例清晰，语意通畅。
13．例文：
Learning English during the three years is fun for me but I have met some difficulties when learning it. And I’d like to share my learning experience with you.
When I was in Grade 7, I didn’t do well in English first. I was too shy to speak to others in English and I was poor in writing. As a result, I was afraid of having English lessons and I was not confident enough.
Luckily, after I turned to my teacher for help, she gave me some useful advice. I started to listen to English songs and read English newspapers, which helped enlarge my vocabulary. In addition, I joined an English club to practice my spoken English. I became more and more interested in English and I’ve already made great progress.
Now I understand that I should learn to face challenges with confidence and insist on learning English. Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求谈谈你在英语学习过程中遇到的困难，以及你的解决方法。结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文。时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段说说在英语学习过程中遇到的困难；第三段谈谈你的解决方法；第四段进行总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
14．例文
In my eyes, Lucy is a smart girl who is fairly all-rounded. She is an outgoing and warm-hearted girl who has a large circle of friends and is always ready to help others. Besides, she takes a great interest in travelling which enables her to broaden her horizon. When it comes to her learning habits, she never forgets to make leaning plans at the beginning of each term and keep a proper balance between study and rest. Therefore, she does well in all subjects and is on the top of the list all the time.
I firmly believe no one is more suitable to be chosen as the outstanding graduate than her.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求你根据以下信息写一篇短文介绍你的朋友Lucy，要求包括性格、爱好、学习习惯并发表你对她的看法等，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第三人称单数来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍朋友时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
15．范文：
Dear friends,
May I have you attention, please Today my topic is how to reduce the waste.
As we all know, food waste has been a big problem. Recently, more emphasis has been put on the need to reduce the waste. What we should do is to start out small.
To begin with, it’s necessary for us to clear the plate both at school and home. To make it possible, do not order too much food at the beginning and eat up all the food you order. Meanwhile, many of us buy clothes just for fashion, which is a waste of resources. It’s a good choice to wear school uniforms more often. In addition, one-off things like disposable tableware should be knocked out. We ought to develop the habit of turning off the lights and water taps as well.
All in all, I believe even the simplest action can make a big difference to our whole country. Let’s work together from now on!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应根据表格中英语提示的内容，介绍怎样减少浪费，包括吃饭、穿衣和用水电三个方面。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证内容全面，条理清晰。

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